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Re: тιgнтяσρɛ || σρɛи тσ cσммɛитƨ/cяιтιqʋɛƨ

Postby ιяιѕlуα » Tue Jan 24, 2012 12:36 pm

Haha! Well I'm sure the reason it's odd is because we're looking inside Marilyn's head. And as you can probably tell she's not exactly in her right mind at the moment.... (well she talks about the weather like it's jewels and fabric so I think that pretty much sums it up...) But once we get to Ashlyn I'm sure things will make much more sense... and I'm adding you're name to the list of stalkers as we speak! (Sadly you're the only one XD)
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Re: тιgнтяσρɛ || σρɛи тσ cσммɛитƨ/cяιтιqʋɛƨ

Postby gizmo, » Tue Jan 24, 2012 12:41 pm

Who is Ashlyn going to be to Marilyn? Is she going to be a main character or a side character? And I won't be the only one for long ;)
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Re: тιgнтяσρɛ || σρɛи тσ cσммɛитƨ/cяιтιqʋɛƨ

Postby ιяιѕlуα » Tue Jan 24, 2012 12:50 pm

Oh, I probably should have mentioned this.... Ashlyn is Marilyn's sister. Twin actuall- *slaps forehead* and now I know why stories about twins have been circling my brain lately. Because. I. Read. Your. Story. (See those periods, that represents my face hitting a desk) God I'm an idiot. It's probably because I read your story three weeks ago and forgot. Dang it!

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Sorry, rant of frustration is now finished... Now I'd like to ask, is it wrong to drool over my own character's picture? (*referring to Jason*)
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Re: тιgнтяσρɛ || σρɛи тσ cσммɛитƨ/cяιтιqʋɛƨ

Postby gizmo, » Tue Jan 24, 2012 12:56 pm

Haha it's fine. Twins make an interesting story xD And nooooo he's delicious xD I'm hoping he's a love interest to someone :3
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Re: тιgнтяσρɛ || σρɛи тσ cσммɛитƨ/cяιтιqʋɛƨ

Postby ιяιѕlуα » Tue Jan 24, 2012 7:17 pm

Next chapter is up, this time from Ashlyn's point of view. (Now we can understand just what is going on! Woo!)
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Re: тιgнтяσρɛ || σρɛи тσ cσммɛитƨ/cяιтιqʋɛƨ

Postby . silent » Wed Jan 25, 2012 2:42 am

Meep...I love it so far! Well, I only read the first Part One, but I'm definitely going to stalk this. O.O I am going to try to put up the fourth chapter of my book today. And I'm going to change the point of view in my story to Third Person. It's way easier, I just thought I would try to do First Person, but it didn't work out. Anyway, keep going! Love it!
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Re: тιgнтяσρɛ || σρɛи тσ cσммɛитƨ/cяιтιqʋɛƨ

Postby ιяιѕlуα » Wed Jan 25, 2012 3:40 am

Well thanks. I've always thought third person was a much easier way to write, so I applaud you for giving first person a whirl. ( I can't wait to see what happens in your book by the way =D)
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Re: тιgнтяσρɛ || σρɛи тσ cσммɛитƨ/cяιтιqʋɛƨ

Postby ιяιѕlуα » Wed Jan 25, 2012 2:43 pm

Update! Next 'chapter' is up, and this time we hear from mister Jason =)
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Re: тιgнтяσρɛ || σρɛи тσ cσммɛитƨ/cяιтιqʋɛƨ

Postby gizmo, » Wed Jan 25, 2012 2:54 pm

I like it <33
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Re: тιgнтяσρɛ || σρɛи тσ cσммɛитƨ/cяιтιqʋɛƨ

Postby ιяιѕlуα » Wed Jan 25, 2012 2:59 pm

Can I ask a question? Does anyone ever click my handy dandy links to the songs? Just thought I'd ask...
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