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by driftz » Tue Jan 24, 2012 1:31 pm
Smosh<3 wrote:(Just trying a different approache to a scary story.)
There once was a girl who was called Sofia. She was young, beautiful with long brown chestnut hair. Her hair was like silk and she had beautiful dark blue eyes. She was popular in school, got good grades, etc, but at home was different. Her life was horrible! Her mother and father arguing non stop, her twin brothers at age three 'n half always crying, dogs always barking and worst of all, the noises heard with cream creak creak! Or bang bang bang! Sofia could only hear it!
But One night in Sofia's dark, dark room. She had just been sitting round and she looked under her bed to find an Ouija just happening to be lying there. She took it out from under her bed and tilted her head. "An Ouija board? Under my bed? Surely not?" she was about to jump down from her head, but heard a voice telling her, 'Sofia, use the Ouija Board, it brings you good fortune and what ever your heart disires...'
Sofia thought long and hard about her desision. It didn't take that long for her to say, 'Yes, I would love that for my family." she put the Ouija board in her table and the voice told her what to do.
She put her hand on the board and thought of questions.
"Are you here with me?" her hand seemed to be move to an answer.
Sofia looked and was a bit scared. 'Yes, you are here with me.' she thought of the next question. 'What is your name?' the board spelt out, 'M.A.D.E.L.I.N.E." Sofia gulped and wasn't sure if to continue or not.
She still continued anyway. 'What age are you?"
The board said ten. Sofia nodded. 'Um, how did you die?'
The board spelt out. 'M.A.D.N.E.S.S!'
'How did this happen?' Sofia asked.
It spelt out this time. 'M.Y.B.R.O.T.H.E.R.K.I.L.L.E.D.M.E!'
'Wait, but you just said you died of Madness?' Sofia raised an eyebrow. 'Who are you really?'
The board spelt. 'M.A.D.E.L.I.N.E!'
'Im serious, who are you!' Sofia frowned.
'O.K.A.Y, O.K.A.Y, Y.O.U'R.E.N.O.T.S.O.S.T.U.P.I.D!'
'Who are you then?' Sofia asked afraid to know this answer that could haunt her for the rest of her life.
The board started spelling out. 'S...A...T...A...N..!'
Sofia went pale. 'Lucifer, the dark prince himself...'
'C.O.R.R.E.C.T! N.O.W, B.Y.E, B.Y.E!"
Sofia tilted her head, but somehow she couldn't breathe?
She felt like she was being choked by barbed wire!
Her neck began to bleed as she desperately tried to call for help.
The dogs were surrdenly barking, but we're ignored.
The next morning her mother walked into her room to awake Sofia for school.
But screamed as Sofia had barbed wire around her neck and was hung on the ceiling fan as it spinned, their was a message written across her stomach. Someone has used a knife and sliced it on her stomach.
'Mess with the Ouija board, then you get the price of punishment.'
The number on her head said, '666.'
The mother ran out screaming. The twin boys walked in and picked up the Ouija board. "Ohh..what's this?"
'Want to play it with me?
The boy nodded. 'Yay! A new fun game!'
(Well, wat'cha think? Was iPod typing all this out! Hope learnt a lesson from this story, 'Keep away from Ouija boards! This story was true, from my mother told me a month ago of when she was ten! Don't mess with Ouija boards. They seem harmless, but they do have great power...)
OMG THATS REALLY CREEPY! I just used one last night! o.o
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by ~JellyFish~ » Tue Jan 24, 2012 1:51 pm
(oh gosh, really? I've never dared! My mother had done that, but want to know I got Sofia from?
I'll tell u anyways. The whole was completely true! My mother had a friend called Sofia and all of that apparently happened to her..and her whole family had vanished the week after come to fink of it...)
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by driftz » Tue Jan 24, 2012 1:57 pm
Smosh<3 wrote:(oh gosh, really? I've never dared! My mother had done that, but want to know I got Sofia from?
I'll tell u anyways. The whole was completely true! My mother had a friend called Sofia and all of that apparently happened to her..and her whole family had vanished the week after come to fink of it...)
Omg! Time to get rid of mine!!
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by SeddieDeer » Tue Jan 24, 2012 2:09 pm
My own story I made up myself- Go easy on me! My first time writing a scary story.
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The Tunnel
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The tunnel is wet and more sludgy then usual. I guess rain water must have seeped through the ground.
Im getting ahead of myself here...I should probably start right at the beginning.
Firstly you should know that my brother Tom has been mute since six years old. Our mother died in a car crash and he never spoke since that day. The doctors say they don't know if he ever will. It doesn't bother me though. As the eldest in the house- and the only female- i became the mother of the house. I had to do what I could to provide for my family.
Our family was low on money...our dad lost his job and we would have been put into foster care if I didn't find a way out. I found a tunnel leading towards woodland Fields. A farm not far from here. With my knowledge of history, I guessed it was a hole that lead out of the farm to the centre village. Even if its more of a ''town'' now.
In the war they were used for the best source of communication without being caught by soliders. I'm getting carried away...back to my story. For the next two years I lead the life of a thief. Don't look at me like that- It could have been worse. I only a few steel eggs & milk some cows. Just get things you would usually get from the corner shop for free.
Many family's just have it so easy- I have to provide for mine. No ''quick trips to the corner shop'' for me. It wasn't long before my little brother found out what was going on one day. He was bound to get curious of where all the food was coming from when our family was broke- He was mute- Not dumb. He followed me and demanded to come with me. I didn't want to drag him into it but eventually I just let him. We have been like partners in crime ever since.
He tugs onto my dress tightly and we go in-to the tunnel. He is afraid of the dark- tugging into my dress makes him less afraid.
Today there was a bit of an upset though. There was gossip in my brothers school that A psychopath had escaped the mental ward. on 234 wood lane. I refused to believe such nonsense. Always nonsense coming from that school.
My little brother was scared though. By the time we had finally got to the tunnel he refused to go in -telling me that it was pass midnight and there was a psychopath going about. (If you want to know how we communicate- sign language of course! It was something I had to learn to understand my brother)
I lost my patience with him and said I would be waiting in the tunnel for him. If he didn't come inside the tunnel in about 5 minutes I would go by myself- and I would have! I sat there in the tunnel- blinded by the dark and waited. Luckily he FINALLY came to his senses though and held onto my dress.
And this is where we are now. In the tunnel going through mud and dirt and sludge all for some eggs and milk.
I really hope the rest of my siblings appreciate what I do- What we do for them. The air is cold, I wish I could see more.
All I can see is darkness- thats all you can see in the tunnel until you get near the end. You just have to let your senses be your guide.
The mud is being much more of a pain so I'm just about to get out my phone for some more light. Ugh great. My phone dropped in the mud just what I need
I pick the phone up and hold it up. Huzzar! Light! ...Hey theres a text message.
I look at the phone
''I'm sorry that I chickened out'' 5 minutes ago sent by...Tom?
A chill goes down my spine as my hairs stand on end.
I gulp and my whole body freezes.
Whose tugging on my dress?
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by Betta132 » Tue Jan 24, 2012 4:17 pm
Cheshire & Star <3 wrote:Smosh<3 wrote:(oh gosh, really? I've never dared! My mother had done that, but want to know I got Sofia from?
I'll tell u anyways. The whole was completely true! My mother had a friend called Sofia and all of that apparently happened to her..and her whole family had vanished the week after come to fink of it...)
Omg! Time to get rid of mine!!
I don't believe Oujia boards really have "mystical powers". I believe in demons and the Devil, being a Christian, but not Oujia boards and that sorta stuff. One thing: how do you know what the Oujia board said? She died. Or is this based on a true story?
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by . ME » Wed Jan 25, 2012 12:54 am
Wiji boards ( However you spell it! )
You open a door to spirits and stuff....You can talk to the 'spirits'. You must turn all of the lights off and light up candles in the room your going to 'play' with it in. Then... Ask it a question. Most likely to awnser you....
My step-cousin nana/grandmother ( I dont remember.. ) used to have one, and she always knew when to 'open' the door and when to 'close' it. But she is sadly..........Dead.
People say the only way to break that weird machine thing is break it into a certain amount of pieces and throw it away, if you dont smash it into that many pieces, it will re-appear, asembled.
Hi! c:
I'm . ME, because I AM A STRONG INDEPENDENT pom doge WOMAN WHO AIN'T AFRAID TO SHOW HER PERSONALITY
If you love me let me G O
If you love me let me G O
‘Cause these words are K N I V E S that often leave scars
The F E A R of falling apart
And truth be told, I N E V E R was yours
The F E A R, the F E A R of falling apart
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by Sweetart » Wed Jan 25, 2012 1:56 am
Shadedleaf wrote:Wiji boards ( However you spell it! )
You open a door to spirits and stuff....You can talk to the 'spirits'. You must turn all of the lights off and light up candles in the room your going to 'play' with it in. Then... Ask it a question. Most likely to awnser you....
My step-cousin nana/grandmother ( I dont remember.. ) used to have one, and she always knew when to 'open' the door and when to 'close' it. But she is sadly..........Dead.
People say the only way to break that weird machine thing is break it into a certain amount of pieces and throw it away, if you dont smash it into that many pieces, it will re-appear, asembled.
That's creepy!
Let's get out, let's get out
'Cause this deadbeat town's only here just to keep us down
While I was out, I found myself alone just thinking
If I showed up with a plane ticket
And a shiny diamond ring with your name on it
Would you wanna run away too?
'Cause all I really want is you
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by ~JellyFish~ » Wed Jan 25, 2012 8:49 am
izard96 wrote:Shadedleaf wrote:Wiji boards ( However you spell it! )
You open a door to spirits and stuff....You can talk to the 'spirits'. You must turn all of the lights off and light up candles in the room your going to 'play' with it in. Then... Ask it a question. Most likely to awnser you....
My step-cousin nana/grandmother ( I dont remember.. ) used to have one, and she always knew when to 'open' the door and when to 'close' it. But she is sadly..........Dead.
People say the only way to break that weird machine thing is break it into a certain amount of pieces and throw it away, if you dont smash it into that many pieces, it will re-appear, asembled.
That's creepy!
(My mother said that don't break or burn it! just lock it far away somewhere safe were no one important to u, like family member or friends can't get it! just lock it in the attic or in a far back closet.)
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