Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

[. ME]

That one is kinda... ( Not to be rude ) bad. And on the first few pages theres something like that, about a girl who lived with her neighbors and they had this locked door they told her never to look through and once she looked through the key hole she saw all red with a black dot ( Before she looked, the neighbors told her that they had a daughter who had a disease that made her eyes red, and then like a few months/weeks/days/whatever/etc. she looked... )

[Sweetart]

That one is kinda... ( Not to be rude ) bad. And on the first few pages theres something like that, about a girl who lived with her neighbors and they had this locked door they told her never to look through and once she looked through the key hole she saw all red with a black dot ( Before she looked, the neighbors told her that they had a daughter who had a disease that made her eyes red, and then like a few months/weeks/days/whatever/etc. she looked... )

aw now me feel bad

[Nonexsitent]

I'll randomly make a story up now and you can all critizize it :p

Selfishness is never the answer

Karasu looked at the clock hanging on the wall above the school door, not long now. The minutes seemed tick by endlessly and slowly. Karasu couldn't wait till her after school detention ended so she could get home to her younger brother; Bobu, he had fallen dreadfully ill a week ago and she had promised her mum as soon as her detention she would go straight home to pray to the house hold spirit to protect her brother and make him well.
"Karasu, you may go." Her teacher said smiling grimly; Karasu rushed out the classroom and down the corridor. She rushed out side and ran toward her house.
"Karasu!" Her friend Jon called out waving. Karasu waved back. "Come play." Karasu bit her lip, the offer was tempting but her brother counted more.
"I can't Bobu is ill and I need to pray to the household spirit." Karasu called back, Jon frowned.
"You always do that, can't you come hang with us; I'm sure the spirit won't mind, you never get to do what you want." Jon argued, Karasu nodded, Jon was right; she never got time to herself. Karasu smiled and rushed over to her friends.
"You have done a sin and for that you must pay." a voice hissed, Karasu ignored it and jumped on the swing.

Later on that evening Karasu got a text from her mum.
Where are you? Can you come to the hospital please, I have bad news. the text read. Karasu bit her lip and sighed.
"I've got to go, can you guys give me a lift to the hospital?" She asked Jon and her big sister Tsuki. Tsuki nodded and they ran to the car.

On the way to the hospital she got a call from the hospital, saying that the hospital had caught fire, sadly her mum had persished. Karasu sat their in shock. Her mum and brother were dead. Then Tsuki screamed. Karasu saw a small girl standing in the road a sinister smile on her face, Tsuki swerved to avoid her smashing into the wall. The small girl walked over to Karasu who had climbed out the car; she was weak and bleeding deeply.
"I told you; you would pay." the little girl said sweetly before Karasu's vision was swept away.

The police examined the bodies of the crash, but Karasu's body had strange carvings on the stomach. The police read the message it read:

Riko shugi wa anata no doko o e raremasen!

It was japanese for 'Selfishness will get you nowhere!'

[Sweetart]

That wasn't a very bad story......

[demonwolf123]

That one is kinda... ( Not to be rude ) bad. And on the first few pages theres something like that, about a girl who lived with her neighbors and they had this locked door they told her never to look through and once she looked through the key hole she saw all red with a black dot ( Before she looked, the neighbors told her that they had a daughter who had a disease that made her eyes red, and then like a few months/weeks/days/whatever/etc. she looked... )

Saying your not trying to be rude doesn't make it less rude, i liked the story, and not everyone has read the first pages

[Sweetart]

That one is kinda... ( Not to be rude ) bad. And on the first few pages theres something like that, about a girl who lived with her neighbors and they had this locked door they told her never to look through and once she looked through the key hole she saw all red with a black dot ( Before she looked, the neighbors told her that they had a daughter who had a disease that made her eyes red, and then like a few months/weeks/days/whatever/etc. she looked... )

Saying your not trying to be rude doesn't make it less rude, i liked the story, and not everyone has read the first pages

Yea I agree that saying you're not trying to be rude makes it even more rude

[Sweetart]

He stole me soul Insanity was here!!!!( kinda like my cousin......)

[~JellyFish~]

(Just trying a different approache to a scary story.)

There once was a girl who was called Sofia. She was young, beautiful with long brown chestnut hair. Her hair was like silk and she had beautiful dark blue eyes. She was popular in school, got good grades, etc, but at home was different. Her life was horrible! Her mother and father arguing non stop, her twin brothers at age three 'n half always crying, dogs always barking and worst of all, the noises heard with cream creak creak! Or bang bang bang! Sofia could only hear it!

But One night in Sofia's dark, dark room. She had just been sitting round and she looked under her bed to find an Ouija just happening to be lying there. She took it out from under her bed and tilted her head. "An Ouija board? Under my bed? Surely not?" she was about to jump down from her head, but heard a voice telling her, 'Sofia, use the Ouija Board, it brings you good fortune and what ever your heart disires...'

Sofia thought long and hard about her desision. It didn't take that long for her to say, 'Yes, I would love that for my family." she put the Ouija board in her table and the voice told her what to do.
She put her hand on the board and thought of questions.
"Are you here with me?" her hand seemed to be move to an answer.
Sofia looked and was a bit scared. 'Yes, you are here with me.' she thought of the next question. 'What is your name?' the board spelt out, 'M.A.D.E.L.I.N.E." Sofia gulped and wasn't sure if to continue or not.
She still continued anyway. 'What age are you?"
The board said ten. Sofia nodded. 'Um, how did you die?'
The board spelt out. 'M.A.D.N.E.S.S!'
'How did this happen?' Sofia asked.
It spelt out this time. 'M.Y.B.R.O.T.H.E.R.K.I.L.L.E.D.M.E!'
'Wait, but you just said you died of Madness?' Sofia raised an eyebrow. 'Who are you really?'
The board spelt. 'M.A.D.E.L.I.N.E!'
'Im serious, who are you!' Sofia frowned.
'O.K.A.Y, O.K.A.Y, Y.O.U'R.E.N.O.T.S.O.S.T.U.P.I.D!'
'Who are you then?' Sofia asked afraid to know this answer that could haunt her for the rest of her life.
The board started spelling out. 'S...A...T...A...N..!'
Sofia went pale. 'Lucifer, the dark prince himself...'
'C.O.R.R.E.C.T! N.O.W, B.Y.E, B.Y.E!"
Sofia tilted her head, but somehow she couldn't breathe?
She felt like she was being choked by barbed wire!
Her neck began to bleed as she desperately tried to call for help.
The dogs were surrdenly barking, but we're ignored.

The next morning her mother walked into her room to awake Sofia for school.
But screamed as Sofia had barbed wire around her neck and was hung on the ceiling fan as it spinned, their was a message written across her stomach. Someone has used a knife and sliced it on her stomach.
'Mess with the Ouija board, then you get the price of punishment.'
The number on her head said, '666.'
The mother ran out screaming. The twin boys walked in and picked up the Ouija board. "Ohh..what's this?"
'Want to play it with me?
The boy nodded. 'Yay! A new fun game!'

(Well, wat'cha think? Was iPod typing all this out! Hope learnt a lesson from this story, 'Keep away from Ouija boards! This story was true, from my mother told me a month ago of when she was ten! Don't mess with Ouija boards. They don't seek harmless, but they do have great power...)

[Walkin on thin Ice…]

(Just trying a different approache to a scary story.)

There once was a girl who was called Sofia. She was young, beautiful with long brown chestnut hair. Her hair was like silk and she had beautiful dark blue eyes. She was popular in school, got good grades, etc, but at home was different. Her life was horrible! Her mother and father arguing non stop, her twin brothers at age three 'n half always crying, dogs always barking and worst of all, the noises heard with cream creak creak! Or bang bang bang! Sofia could only hear it!

But One night in Sofia's dark, dark room. She had just been sitting round and she looked under her bed to find an Ouija just happening to be lying there. She took it out from under her bed and tilted her head. "An Ouija board? Under my bed? Surely not?" she was about to jump down from her head, but heard a voice telling her, 'Sofia, use the Ouija Board, it brings you good fortune and what ever your heart disires...'

Sofia thought long and hard about her desision. It didn't take that long for her to say, 'Yes, I would love that for my family." she put the Ouija board in her table and the voice told her what to do.
She put her hand on the board and thought of questions.
"Are you here with me?" her hand seemed to be move to an answer.
Sofia looked and was a bit scared. 'Yes, you are here with me.' she thought of the next question. 'What is your name?' the board spelt out, 'M.A.D.E.L.I.N.E." Sofia gulped and wasn't sure if to continue or not.
She still continued anyway. 'What age are you?"
The board said ten. Sofia nodded. 'Um, how did you die?'
The board spelt out. 'M.A.D.N.E.S.S!'
'How did this happen?' Sofia asked.
It spelt out this time. 'M.Y.B.R.O.T.H.E.R.K.I.L.L.E.D.M.E!'
'Wait, but you just said you died of Madness?' Sofia raised an eyebrow. 'Who are you really?'
The board spelt. 'M.A.D.E.L.I.N.E!'
'Im serious, who are you!' Sofia frowned.
'O.K.A.Y, O.K.A.Y, Y.O.U'R.E.N.O.T.S.O.S.T.U.P.I.D!'
'Who are you then?' Sofia asked afraid to know this answer that could haunt her for the rest of her life.
The board started spelling out. 'S...A...T...A...N..!'
Sofia went pale. 'Lucifer, the dark prince himself...'
'C.O.R.R.E.C.T! N.O.W, B.Y.E, B.Y.E!"
Sofia tilted her head, but somehow she couldn't breathe?
She felt like she was being choked by barbed wire!
Her neck began to bleed as she desperately tried to call for help.
The dogs were surrdenly barking, but we're ignored.

The next morning her mother walked into her room to awake Sofia for school.
But screamed as Sofia had barbed wire around her neck and was hung on the ceiling fan as it spinned, their was a message written across her stomach. Someone has used a knife and sliced it on her stomach.
'Mess with the Ouija board, then you get the price of punishment.'
The number on her head said, '666.'
The mother ran out screaming. The twin boys walked in and picked up the Ouija board. "Ohh..what's this?"
'Want to play it with me?
The boy nodded. 'Yay! A new fun game!'

(Well, wat'cha think? Was iPod typing all this out! Hope learnt a lesson from this story, 'Keep away from Ouija boards! This story was true, from my mother told me a month ago of when she was ten! Don't mess with Ouija boards. They don't seek harmless, but they do have great power...)

(AMAZING! This is really good)

[~JellyFish~]

(Thank u so much! For typing in my iPod at 0:46am taking me about 44 minutes to type, I'm pretty pleased u liked it )