.:: Running Away ::. [comments welcome!]

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Re: .:: Autumn's Wreath ::. [needs crit :) ]

Postby jessamina. » Fri Jan 20, 2012 8:10 pm

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Re: .:: Autumn's Wreath ::. [added stuff + needs crit :) ]

Postby jessamina. » Fri Jan 20, 2012 9:33 pm

    Added a prologue. =]
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Re: .:: Autumn's Wreath ::. [added stuff + needs crit :) ]

Postby jessamina. » Sat Jan 21, 2012 3:51 pm

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Re: .:: Autumn's Wreath ::. [added stuff + comments welcome!

Postby jessamina. » Sat Jan 21, 2012 8:14 pm

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Re: .:: Autumn's Wreath ::. [added stuff + comments welcome!

Postby jessamina. » Sun Jan 22, 2012 1:29 pm

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Re: .:: Autumn's Wreath ::. [added stuff + comments welcome!

Postby jessamina. » Sun Jan 22, 2012 9:58 pm

    Bump? Anyone please comment, I don't really care if it is a constructive crit or a praise. I just need to know that someone is actually reading/read this and waiting for the next chapter T^T Your writing skills are basically useless if you don't have a reader...
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Re: .:: Autumn's Wreath ::. [added stuff + comments welcome!

Postby jessamina. » Mon Jan 23, 2012 1:05 pm

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Re: .:: Autumn's Wreath ::. [added stuff + comments welcome!

Postby jessamina. » Mon Jan 23, 2012 8:04 pm

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Re: .:: Autumn's Wreath ::. [added stuff + comments welcome!

Postby wonderfullyphicotic » Mon Jan 23, 2012 10:30 pm

I read it and I liked it alot.
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Re: .:: Autumn's Wreath ::. [added stuff + comments welcome!

Postby jessamina. » Wed Jan 25, 2012 7:40 pm

    Thank you very much!

    I am now in the process of making the next part of Chapter 1. I hope it turns out well though, I am not really good at the male pysche.
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