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by videlicet » Fri Jan 20, 2012 1:02 pm
I would like a more in-depth PM, if you have the time.

And I really appreciate the input!
I'd personally prefer the longer reviews myself, but I don't know if other people would be up to the reading. xD There's also the issue of space, but that could easily be solved by the creation of a seperate thread.
And I think that it'd be nice to give everyone a chance to rate & review. It seems fairer, and I think it would give a more three-dimensional view of the story being rated and reviewed.
Sorry if I'm rambling... my brains are rather scattered after my encounter with a brick wall. xD
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meanwhile the world goes on. / meanwhile the sun and the clear pebbles of the rain
are moving across the landscapes, / over the prairies and the deep trees,
the mountains and the rivers. --wild geese, by mary oliver┗━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━┛
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by anomaly. » Fri Jan 20, 2012 1:04 pm
Story's Title: Normal?Nope Not at All
Link to Story: http://www.chickensmoothie.com/Forum/viewtopic.php?f=57&t=998085&p=26559140#p26559140Genre: Sci-Fi
Description(optional): The struggle of a mentally ill and hybrid Spartan. She learns to love and try to help her fellow Spartans in the war for Earth. She soon realizes that she is not just fighting an alien species but her alien species. When she gets really angry or her mental illness attacks she changes into a half Spartan Half Elite. she is afraid for her life when the others want to kill her. Little did she know but her childhood crush has also been listed in the forces. She loved him so much, but when the spartans stole her from her school in the middle of an attack and makes it looks like she is dead, she lost hope in that love. She mourns everyday for the loss. But will she make it out alive or eve better find the one she loves?
Other(Extra information goes here): Its not quite doen but the copy i have is in very low detail.
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by fly away. » Fri Jan 20, 2012 1:12 pm
Story's Title:A Silent Look On Life
Link to Story:Clicky!Genre:Mystery/Drama, I can't decide which one.
Description(optional):Not being able to speak would be hard, right? So living as mute and "unwillingly perfect" Elli Tears would prove to be a challenge. But Elli has her friend Topic Silver by her side at all times, to translate sign language to others for her, talk to her, in general be her best friend. But when Topic disappears without a trace, what's a girl to do?
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by videlicet » Sat Jan 21, 2012 2:32 pm
Awesome! Thank you so much for contributing, guys!

Oh, and xXPartyRockerXx, wouldn't your story go in fan-fiction? Isn't Halo(Or whatever videogame that is; I'm truly hopeless with videogames... D:), like, copyright material? xD
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meanwhile the world goes on. / meanwhile the sun and the clear pebbles of the rain
are moving across the landscapes, / over the prairies and the deep trees,
the mountains and the rivers. --wild geese, by mary oliver┗━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━┛
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by videlicet » Sat Jan 21, 2012 2:54 pm
(It's fine, I'll just place it in fan-ficton.

Thank you!)
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meanwhile the world goes on. / meanwhile the sun and the clear pebbles of the rain
are moving across the landscapes, / over the prairies and the deep trees,
the mountains and the rivers. --wild geese, by mary oliver┗━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━┛
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by ιяιѕlуα » Tue Jan 24, 2012 11:02 am
Got another one for you Viszla 
Story's Title: тιgнтяσρɛ
Link to Story: тιgнтяσρɛ
Genre: Let's put this one under Drama 
Description: Prologue: I believe it has been said, or rather written, by a man of the name Robert M. Pirsig, that "Modern man has his ghosts and spirits too... Your common sense is nothing more than the voices of thousands and thousands of these ghosts from the past. Ghosts and more ghosts. Ghosts trying to find their place among the living." But if it was indeed the case that all intangible ideas are merely ghosts, then what in this world walks amongst the living? And if our minds are simply conjurers and creators of ethereal spirits, then how can we begin to differentiate from that which is true, and that which is false? Now who wants to hear a ghost story?
Would You Like Your Story to be Rated & Reviewed?: Most definitely
Other: There will be parts of this story that will not adhere to the PG-13 rule. When these passages so happen to turn up, you will find a handy link which will redirect you to my blog where the full chapter can be read uncensored. (Please note that most of the times these passages will be removed due to violence, not romance. Although on occasion if I believe the romance to be to much for CS I will redirect to my blog.) If you are not above the age of thirteen then please do not read these passages. There is a reason they are not being posted on CS. In fact, if you're under thirteen, just don't even begin reading. This story will get a bit dense sometimes and go into some deep analysis of the mind of the main character and question why it thinks the way it does. But if you are above the age of thirteen and feel you can read the story without any trouble feel free to click the link.
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by SecretsLive » Tue Jan 24, 2012 12:23 pm
Story's Title: Niara's Diary. | Alix's Diary. | The Last Ones.
Link to Story: Click. | Click. | ADDING.
Genre: CS Pet Diary. | CS Pet Diary. | Sci-Fi Novel\Book.
Description(optional): A nerdy PPS pony battles her way through life in high school. Sticking up to abusive bullies, friendships, mean popular girls, and love this story is full of constant drama and leaves you begging for more. | High schooler Alix isn't like other girls, she's a punk. And when she gets into trouble with the school she is forced to play football with three of the most popular jocks in school. What will come for this dog? | A thrilling Sci-Fi adventure about a young girl fighting for survival at the peak of human extinction.
Would You Like Your Story to be Rated & Reviewed? Sure for all.
Other(Extra information goes here): None.

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