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by Guest » Sat Jan 21, 2012 12:25 am
The bunny is cute! Congrats on the feature! :33
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by असंतोष » Sat Jan 21, 2012 12:28 am
You may want to darken the wolf, and add some more grass around him or bushes. Conceal his existence a bit more.
Doesn't really matter though, its already featured.
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by flyteck » Sat Jan 21, 2012 12:35 am
Dovahkiin wrote:You may want to darken the wolf, and add some more grass around him or bushes. Conceal his existence a bit more.
Doesn't really matter though, its already featured.
Good idea! He seems a bit to obvious to me. I will work on it when I have time c:
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by असंतोष » Sat Jan 21, 2012 12:37 am
flyteck wrote:Dovahkiin wrote:You may want to darken the wolf, and add some more grass around him or bushes. Conceal his existence a bit more.
Doesn't really matter though, its already featured.
Good idea! He seems a bit to obvious to me. I will work on it when I have time c:
Thanks! c:
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by AlphaLeonis » Sat Jan 21, 2012 10:16 am
I would've actually given Viper a lazier pose, a bit like he's seeing the rabbit as a friend and would be chilling with him, to make the picture have a full feel. To me, it's like one halve is Call of Duty and the other halve's Little Big Planet.
Apart from that, it's amazing <3 I actually really like the grass!
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