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This is my charrie, Viper. He spends his time "lurking". He's spiteful because his mother died :'(

Constructive crit (other than about the crappy grass) wanted.

EDIT: FEATURED????!!!!??? OMG THANK YOU ALL SOOOO MUCH!!!! You all gave me a happy heart attack <3

EDIT #2: 392 LIKES?!?!? YOU ARE ALL AWESOME!!!!! c;

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wow that SO COOL!!!!!!!! watch that be featured!

[असंतोष]

/Feels like a punk for saying this

Its good, but I dunno if its intermediate. :c

[Temperance.]

Love it <3 The depth perception and background is positively stunning <3 I also think the bunny looks absolutely perfect and feels as though it belongs in the pic. One little crit though, there's something a TINY bit awkward about Viper, in full size he looks better with the pic as a whole, but I think his markings clash a little bit with the background colours and effect, and that sort of makes it look a little odd. Maybe move them a little so they weave in with the background? Or change his pose? LOL, not really sure what you could do....but in essence it has a perfect flowing essence to it until you get to Viper, he makes it a little less harmonious. I probably sound like a fortune cookie saying that but....y'know whatever XD

Looking at it closer I think the problem is how naturalistic your background is. The trees, grass, bunny, everything has a very NATURAL feel until you see Viper on the side. He seems out of place in the picture, but not so out of place that it works.....its sort of stuck in that in-between land of partially fitting in and partially not fitting in. I think possibly exaggerating his colours, or muting them into the same colours you used for the trees, would make a world of a difference. But don't necessarily quote me on this, just thinking out loud really

I love this piece though, utterly magnificent <3

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@JapaneseFruitCakes: Aww, thanks! I hope i get a feature!
@Dovahkiin: I hope it's intermediate, i normally post in begginer.
@Ashwyn: Thanks for your opinion! I kind of want him to break the flow, as he is a bit of an outcast.

Thanks to all!

[Manx]

Very nice! Congrats on the feature ^^

[असंतोष]

This is featured?

Congrats. You did better than me, then. I took about 6 hours to do my one Engie/The Storm Breaks drawing. I fail. XD

[EllyNoel]

is it a poor bunny? or is this good looking dog his friend?? ... i think he is a friend ... a very nice drawing, i love it

[Birdcall]

AWESOME!!!!!
congrats on the feature!

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I got a feature?!?!?!?!???)?)??!?!?? OMG OMG OMG!!!!!!!! THANK YOU ALL SO MUCH!!!!!
I came back to 36 likes and said "when did that happen? Then i saw "contests on the feature!" I said What????!!!!!

THANK YOU ALL!!!!!!!!