Life of a teenage were-wolf

Are you a writer or a poet? Come and share your creations with us, or discuss writing techniques with others
Forum rules
Please only post your own original work, do not post poetry or stories which were written by someone else.

Hows my story?

I LOVE IT! I LOVE IT! I LOVE IT!
21
51%
It's EPIC!
5
12%
Its great
2
5%
its Okay
3
7%
Eh...
5
12%
BAD
1
2%
*barf* terrible
1
2%
How could you post this! its awful! revolting! disgusting! i've been scarred for life!
3
7%
 
Total votes : 41

Re: Life of a teenage were-wolf

Postby xxazul63xx » Mon Jan 16, 2012 11:41 pm

Kia narrowed her eyes when they opened the cell door the next day. Two guards with electric sticks walked in, one hand-cuffed her and led her out of the cell. She walked along, with one guard behind and one guard in front. As soon as they were alone in a hall way, she swung her leg around and kicked the one behind her in the face. He stumbled back wards and Kia jammed two fingers down on the other one's pressure point. He collapsed and the other one grabbed his electric stick and swung it towards Kia. She ducked and rolled into his legs, knocking him over before jamming her heal into his pressure point. He passed out, Kia grabbed the keys on his belt and somehow undid the cuffs. She massaged her wrists and looked around, she decided to take an electric stick for protection. She began creeping down the white halls, trying to keep to the shadows. She heard footsteps and quickly darted down a different hall, but the footsteps were headed in the same direction. Feeling panic set in she opened a door and slipped inside, it was dark but Kia's sharp eyes adjusted quickly. It was a lab, but every thing was covered with white cloth, as if they were remodeling or painting the walls. Her sharp ears picked up more footsteps and she hid behind a covered machine. Shadows could be seen beneath the door, Kia held her breath, soon they walked away. She let it out and stood up once again, looking around. Her eyes stopped on a pair of large pliers with sharp, metal-breaking edges. She picked it up and fitted it around her metal collar, she squeezed her eyes shut and heard a snap as she broke it. The collar fell to the ground with a clang, Kia let out a sigh of relief and brought her fingers to her neck. Her finger tips brushed the tender skin that was rubbed raw by the collar. Grabbing the pliers and the electric stick before opening the door quietly and sneaking into the hall. Now what cell number did Blair say she was? she wondered peering around a corner Now I remember, it was 1364 She spotted it down another hall, it had two guards in front. Kia took a deep breath then leaped out and electrified them before they even knew what hit them.
"Kia, you made it" said a voice.
Kia looked up to see Blair peeking through the bars of the cell door. She placed her finger over her lips and undid the key, she opened the door.
"Did you get the pliers?" whispered Blair.
Kia smiled and held them up, she cut Blair's collar and caught it before it hit the ground.
"Now, where's Mike's cell?" asked Kia
Image
Image

I <3 JACK FROST
User avatar
xxazul63xx
 
Posts: 1649
Joined: Sun Oct 02, 2011 2:44 am
My pets
My items
My wishlist
My gallery
My scenes
My dressups
Trade with me

Re: Life of a teenage were-wolf

Postby CountryCowgirl<3 » Tue Jan 17, 2012 12:34 am

More!
Image
Image
Image
Image
Image
Image
Image
Image
Image
User avatar
CountryCowgirl<3
 
Posts: 495
Joined: Tue Oct 25, 2011 11:44 am
My pets
My items
My wishlist
My gallery
My scenes
My dressups
Trade with me

Re: Life of a teenage were-wolf

Postby Nellas » Tue Jan 17, 2012 12:45 am

MOAR
my deviantart - Zeracorns
befriend me - Divided We Stand - a dear friend - my wmes
glasstriangles on Deviantart, smallbird on Flight Rising, chicken on Eldemore
User avatar
Nellas
 
Posts: 5602
Joined: Thu Nov 25, 2010 5:19 am
My pets
My items
My wishlist
My gallery
My scenes
My dressups
Trade with me

Re: Life of a teenage were-wolf

Postby list the unknown » Tue Jan 17, 2012 3:18 am

that's awesome!
User avatar
list the unknown
 
Posts: 3937
Joined: Wed Nov 09, 2011 3:13 pm
My pets
My items
My wishlist
My gallery
My scenes
My dressups
Trade with me

Re: Life of a teenage were-wolf

Postby AlexiM01 » Tue Jan 17, 2012 10:53 pm

really good :D but i think you could be a little clearer. Like, I think there is a proper name for electric stick and you wrote undid the handcuffs somehow Maybe you could elaborate here?. Sorry if I offended you but I still really like the plot :)
AlexiM01 (Alex)
lynettetan1 is a friend of mine so we trade each other our pets often. We also sometimes share computers. Please do not ban us.
User avatar
AlexiM01
 
Posts: 1996
Joined: Tue Oct 18, 2011 5:03 pm
My pets
My items
My wishlist
My gallery
My scenes
My dressups
Trade with me

Re: Life of a teenage were-wolf

Postby xxazul63xx » Wed Jan 18, 2012 4:36 am

Well Kia doesn't know what the electric sticks are called so basiclly they're just electric sticks to her. and i said somehow, because her hands were cuffed together and its kind of hard to explain how she undid them
Image
Image

I <3 JACK FROST
User avatar
xxazul63xx
 
Posts: 1649
Joined: Sun Oct 02, 2011 2:44 am
My pets
My items
My wishlist
My gallery
My scenes
My dressups
Trade with me

Re: Life of a teenage were-wolf

Postby AlexiM01 » Wed Jan 18, 2012 4:41 am

Ah...i see...good story :D
AlexiM01 (Alex)
lynettetan1 is a friend of mine so we trade each other our pets often. We also sometimes share computers. Please do not ban us.
User avatar
AlexiM01
 
Posts: 1996
Joined: Tue Oct 18, 2011 5:03 pm
My pets
My items
My wishlist
My gallery
My scenes
My dressups
Trade with me

Re: Life of a teenage were-wolf

Postby AninaAna » Wed Jan 18, 2012 5:29 am

Bril just Bril i cant think of a better word to describe the awesomeness oh wait that's one
nothing to see here
User avatar
AninaAna
 
Posts: 5309
Joined: Thu Oct 27, 2011 10:45 am
My pets
My items
My wishlist
My gallery
My scenes
My dressups
Trade with me

Re: Life of a teenage were-wolf

Postby G๏l๔єภєאє » Wed Jan 18, 2012 7:18 am

yaaaay!!! go Kia!! go Kia!!!

we all luffles Kia!!!

ahem...great story!! i love who it's turning out!! maybe she could dig her way out with a spoon, like they do in the movies... :lol: or transform and hit anything that moves with the electric sticks.
Image
Image
Image
Image

Image Image Image
User avatar
G๏l๔єภєאє
 
Posts: 1238
Joined: Thu Oct 20, 2011 8:12 am
My pets
My items
My wishlist
My gallery
My scenes
My dressups
Trade with me

Re: Life of a teenage were-wolf

Postby xxazul63xx » Wed Jan 25, 2012 5:51 am

Kia and Blair each picked up an electric stick, which Kia decided to call a tazer. They walked down a hall, avoiding the guards and searching for Mike's cell.
"what number was it again?" Kia asked quietly.
"1574" Whispered Blair, peering around a corner.
Suddenly there was a shout behind them, "The escaped were-wolves!"
Kia and Blair whipped around to see guards rushing at them with tazers in their hands.
"Run!" She gasped.
The two girls ran down the halls with un-human like speed, Kia could hear a small popping sound as they shot tranquilizing darts at them. Blair deflected a few with the tazer, but one hit her in the shoulder. She yelped and stumbled before running again. But Kia noticed her friend getting weary and slowing down, her steps more shaky and her eye-lids drooping. Suddenly she fell to her knees, breathing heavily.
"Blair!" Kia ran to her friend's side and grabbed her arm, trying to help her to her feet.
"Kia, you've got to get out of here." her voice was shaky and tired.
Kia shook her head and pulled Blair on to her back. By now the guards had caught up with them, she shocked as many as she could and deflected darts before running off again.
"Where's Mike's cell?" asked Kia looking from side to side.
"That one.........." Blair pointing to a metal door with a hand shaking with exhaustion.
Kia ran to it with the guards on her tail, Kia knocked over the single guard in front and shocked him, she ripped the key from his belt and jammed it into the lock. She opened it and spotted Mike sitting in the corner,
"Come on!" she shouted as she dodged a dart.
They ran down the clean white hall, the guards chasing after them. They turned a corner, then another, Kia spotted a door, like the one she found the pliers in.
"In there..." whispered Kia.
Mike nodded and opened the door, like Kia suspected, it was a lab. They hid behind a metal cabinet, the shouts of the guards still ringing in Kia's ears. She slid the now sleeping Blair onto the floor and pulled the dart out of her shoulder. Kia pulled out the pliers that she put in her belt,
"Hold still Mike."
He stretched his neck and she cut the metal collar off. She leaned onto the cabinet and wiped the sweat from her forehead, she let out a sigh of relief that they had escaped from the guards.
"Now, how do we wake Blair?" she murmured.
Mike smiled and pressed his fingers onto her pressure point, Blair woke with a start.
"Wah? Im up! Im up!" she said looking around. "Did we escape from the guards?"
Kia nodded, "Lets wait a few minutes before we go back out."
Blair rested a bit more because she had a headache, Mike walked around the lab and found another tazer.
"we won't need that." Said Kia, "we can now morph remember?"
Mike nodded and put it back. Kia took a deep breath and morphed, its been a while since she morphed and she found it a bit hard. But she felt a big relief once she was morphed completely. Letting out a happy sigh and padded over to Blair, her tail flicking.
"Come on Blair, morph so we can leave." she said
Blair nodded and sat up, she morphed into a red-furred wolf with curly fur. Kia turned around to see a wolf with spiky strawberry blond fur.
"Mike?" She had never seen Mike in wolf form.
The wolf nodded and tossed his head towards the door, signaling that they should go.
"Come on you guys, its time to break out." said Kia.
She pushed open the lab door and the crept into the hall way. The wandered aimlessly through the pure white halls, avoiding guards and searching for a way through. Kia spotted a stairway and flicked her tail towards it, Mike and Blair nodded. They began creeping towards it, she looked down the stairs, it was dark and musty, with the smell of something rotten drifting from it. She placed her paw on the first wooden step when suddenly a loud alarm went off and the halls filled with a flashing red light.
A voice went on the loud-speakers Three were-wolves escaped, THREE WERE-WOLVES ESCAPED The alarms blared on and on.
"Run!" Cried Kia, spotting a large crowd of guards running towards them. She practicably flew down the steps, she landed on a dirt floor. Blair and Mike landing close behind, it was dark, but their eyes adjusted quickly. In front of them there was a stone wall with cobwebs spread over it. The thundering of the guards footsteps could be heard over the alarms. Mike grunted loudly and tossed his head in the direction of another hallway. They darted down it and went into an even darker room, Kia dove to one side, unable to see. She pressed herself against something, a wall? The thundering faded and she opened her eyes, they had adjusted. She looked around, there were old rusty cells with broken bars and gray stone walls.
"Blair? Mike?" She called out quietly.
Kia jumped as an old pile of barrels got knocked over and scattered all over the ground, causing a dust cloud to rise.
"I'm here!" said Blair, leaping on top of a smaller pile of barrels.
She heard a small yip and turned, seeing Mike crawl out of an open cell.
"This looks like the old jail grounds!" exclaimed Blair.
"The what?" asked Kia, raising an eyebrow.
"there used to be a jail, a normal one for people. Then they built the were-wolf concentration camp on top. There is a maze of hallways to confuse escaped prisoners, the guards who were chasing us probably got lost." Blair explained.
"And look! we can dig our way out!" exclaimed Kia, pawing at the dirt floor.
"Then lets start!" said Blair.
They began clawing at the ground, spraying dirt over there fur. Kia, with un-wolf-like speed, had already dug 2 feet into the ground. They continued digging, scratching and throwing up dirt behind them. She spotted once in a while to dig out the small pebbles that got lodged in her paws, then continued.
After about half a hour she was 11 feet into the ground, Mike took out the access dirt, while Blair and Kia took turns digging. After another hour, Kia was exhausted, her paws were aching and she was hungry. But she refused to give up when suddenly her paws broke through to the surface and moonlight flooded into the tunnel. Kia flinched and looked away, for her eyes had adjusted to the darkness of the tunnel.
"We made it!" gasped Kia. Blair and Mike rushed out into the fresh air, smiling, Blair began crying in glee. Tears of joy streamed down Mike and Blair's faces. Kia remembered that they hadn't been outside for 14 years, she smiled.
"Kia! You escaped!" exclaimed a voice.
Kia turned around and saw Jay, Justin, Dara, and Lauren.
"Guys! you came!"
but suddenly a bunch of were-wolves in wolf from leaped out of the tunnel and snarled.
"What?" Kia was surprised when suddenly they leaped towards them.
She whipped around and to find Dara in wolf-form leaping towards her with teeth-bared.
Image
Image

I <3 JACK FROST
User avatar
xxazul63xx
 
Posts: 1649
Joined: Sun Oct 02, 2011 2:44 am
My pets
My items
My wishlist
My gallery
My scenes
My dressups
Trade with me

Who is online

Users browsing this forum: No registered users and 7 guests