[Clive]

Username: Aviator

whales name: "Nefertiti" means the beauty who has arrived

whales Job (hunter, warrior, blacksmith, shaman, healer, etc.): Navigator

Age: 4 years old

Armor:
A light silver armor, the helmet is made of a steel-silver mixture, it works like a shield, gives protection and easy foothold,it covers the head and the neck.
The armor plate on her back is made of pure silver.
Her tail isn"t covered with an armor, because she can"t swim fast with it, even when it"s made of a facile material.
On her helmet are 6 sapphires, on in the middle of the helmet, and two sapphires on both sides.

Art: Working on it
http://oi41.tinypic.com/90n3ar.jpg

personality: Nefertiti is a caring soul, clever and strong.
She is known for her speed and kindness, Nefertiti is a young beautiful cow, of course she can act stubborn sometimes, Nefertiti is young at all.
Loyality is the most important thing for her, she is loyal to her friends, to her tribe, to her whale rider.
Nefertiti is afraid of the Zenachromes, but she is always prepared to protect the loved ones from any harm.
This beauty is not a warrior. but an excellent navigator who knows how to defend herself.

story:
Beginning

It was a warm summer day. The ocean was glistening in the sunlight,the wind blew gently trough the tree tops of the exoctic palms and the small grass halms which were growing in the white sand on the coast, seemed that they were dancing with the wind, magical,the tribes where living in harmony together, like always. What a harmony.
I was swimming beside my mother, i felt so safe and secure when i was next to her.
My mother was a beautiful warrior, so strong and full of courage.
A few calves wanted to play with me, but i prefered to stay beside my mother, i never liked games,
they are dangerous and not amusing.
My mother told me, how important vigilance and carefulness is, only if you can master these things, you can survive under the sea and the surface.

Middle

The sky slowly turned to a darkish blue, the night was coming,i was swimming around a few islands, near of the coast. I love to swim fast, to show everyone how fast i was, how swift i was.
But than, the most terrible thing happenend, it would change the rest of my whole life, nothing would be the same anymore. When i reached the cliffs, which were near of the beach, i saw some...glowing red eyes,
they were staring at me. They came closer and closer! Gradually i could see, metal, a shiny silverish metal.
Than teeth? No, not teeth, fangs, fangs sharper than any cliff, sharper than any weapon of a human.
I swam as fast as i could. Not turning back, my fins begun slowly to hurt, but i had to swim fast.
Fast, like i swam around the island before, fast....fast!

Mommy! Moooommy!,i cried.

I was scared, like i never felt before. But than, i was waiting. Waiting for the minute...no...second where i would only see black, where i would be...dead.
Suddenly, something pushed me away from the Zenachrome.I tried to figure out who it was, but my eyes were full of tears,my view was blurried. But, i heard...a voice...it was my mother!
She heard me, she heard me!
A short moment of relief filled my mind.
She shouted: Nefetiti! Swim to the cave, next to the coral reef! I"ll try to chase off this fella!
I did, i did what she said to me. With the last strength i swam to the cave.
I wanted to survive, survive for my mother.

End

4 years later

It is a warm summer day, the same day like 4 years before, the same day.
Full of harmony, the nature was beautiful like always, the ocean is glistening in the sunlight, the wind blew gently trough the palms.
But my heart, my soul is not full of harmony. It"s full of sadness, with sorrow.
I miss my mother so much.....
But self-pity is useless, i must be strong. I don"t want that this disaster happens again.
I will do the same what my mother did, sacrifice my life for the loved ones.
Someday....someday! When we have defeated the Zenachromes, we will be free again.
I promise you mother, that i will revenge you,my lost friends,revenge my pride!

[~*Waffletastic!*~]

Thank you!!

that is awsome so far!!

[Coexist]

Username: coexist
whales name: Orenda (magic powers- Iroquois)
whales Job (hunter, warrior, blacksmith, shaman, healer, etc.): shaman
Art:
viewtopic.php?f=33&t=987332&p=26130134#p26130134
personality: feels a need to heal, not just the body but the spirit, calm during the fight she comforts those who need it, wise but not pushy; she shares her knowledge softly, Anger she does but it is not swift and not for petty reasons, much lies inside.
story: Orenda was young when they noticed her powers. Too young, too delicate to train they thought. But one of the other shaman took her aside with a look and said, "no, do not judge by the outside of the vesil but by the spirit of it." Orenda smiled at the shaman and followed Him, learning from him quickly more quickly then others thought she could. The shaman was pleased, He had known she was special there was something about her that had told him he must help. Before Orenda was grown she was fully trained, the shaman was as proud as if he were her own father. Orenda said, "I will not forget your kindness to me." she said looking at Him. He nodded knowing she would not. When the wars started, Orenda became very busy helping the shattered people but she never did forget her promise. On her turquoise armor she had engraved a symbol she felt represented the old shaman, so that she would never forget. One day she heard of fighting in that area, she rushed there knowing he was getting old. Unfortunatly she was to late, the shaman was dying but his last words were his request to her, "repay me by helping my people" He said dying in front of her. Orenda could not refuse, she gathered up the last of his people and combined his pod with hers making it the biggest pod in history for a time, A large job for a female. She was content, she helped find homes for a good portion of them so that they were not a burden on her pod, all so that she could repay the shamans kindness.

I hope you like my story and picture, the picture is the first whale I have ever done on Oekaki.

[arabianhorse555]

Username: arabianhorse555
whales name: Zaranya
whales Job (hunter, warrior, blacksmith, shaman, healer, etc.): healer
Art: viewtopic.php?f=30&t=992689
personality: a devoted friend and protector, she takes great pride in her healing skills
story: Even from a young age Zaranya was a skilled healer. She was always on the lookout for sick or injured animals, who she would bring home and care for. She was apprenticed to a healer at only 2 years of age because of her obvious talent, and quickly excelled, becoming one of the best healers in the pod.

[~*Waffletastic!*~]

looks great guys!! thanks!!!

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