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Postby Ourpawprints » Thu Jan 12, 2012 3:04 pm

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"You shout it out,
But I can't hear a word you say
I'm talking loud not saying much
I'm criticized but all your bullets ricochet
You shoot me down, but I get up

I'm bulletproof, nothing to lose
Fire away, fire away
Ricochet, you take your aim
Fire away, fire away
You shoot me down but I won't fall
I am titanium"
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Re: A horse's life

Postby Ourpawprints » Thu Jan 12, 2012 3:15 pm

bump
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"You shout it out,
But I can't hear a word you say
I'm talking loud not saying much
I'm criticized but all your bullets ricochet
You shoot me down, but I get up

I'm bulletproof, nothing to lose
Fire away, fire away
Ricochet, you take your aim
Fire away, fire away
You shoot me down but I won't fall
I am titanium"
-David Guetta Titanium

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Re: A horse's life

Postby Ourpawprints » Thu Jan 12, 2012 3:32 pm

anyone?
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"You shout it out,
But I can't hear a word you say
I'm talking loud not saying much
I'm criticized but all your bullets ricochet
You shoot me down, but I get up

I'm bulletproof, nothing to lose
Fire away, fire away
Ricochet, you take your aim
Fire away, fire away
You shoot me down but I won't fall
I am titanium"
-David Guetta Titanium

Between school, my pets, homework, art and life I have not been able to get on cs often, so please don't be surprised if I'm not very active.
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Re: A horse's life

Postby Ourpawprints » Thu Jan 12, 2012 3:42 pm

What do people not like it? If so could you say why? (yeah I'm inpatient)
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"You shout it out,
But I can't hear a word you say
I'm talking loud not saying much
I'm criticized but all your bullets ricochet
You shoot me down, but I get up

I'm bulletproof, nothing to lose
Fire away, fire away
Ricochet, you take your aim
Fire away, fire away
You shoot me down but I won't fall
I am titanium"
-David Guetta Titanium

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Re: A horse's life

Postby Ourpawprints » Thu Jan 12, 2012 3:43 pm

is it the title? Does it seem too boring?
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"You shout it out,
But I can't hear a word you say
I'm talking loud not saying much
I'm criticized but all your bullets ricochet
You shoot me down, but I get up

I'm bulletproof, nothing to lose
Fire away, fire away
Ricochet, you take your aim
Fire away, fire away
You shoot me down but I won't fall
I am titanium"
-David Guetta Titanium

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Re: A horse's life

Postby Saphira344 » Thu Jan 12, 2012 3:44 pm

its good
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Re: A horse's life

Postby Ourpawprints » Thu Jan 12, 2012 4:06 pm

bump
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"You shout it out,
But I can't hear a word you say
I'm talking loud not saying much
I'm criticized but all your bullets ricochet
You shoot me down, but I get up

I'm bulletproof, nothing to lose
Fire away, fire away
Ricochet, you take your aim
Fire away, fire away
You shoot me down but I won't fall
I am titanium"
-David Guetta Titanium

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Re: A horse's life

Postby Wishful Thinking. » Fri Jan 13, 2012 9:44 am

Awesome, I like it! I think you should write more! :clap:
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Re: A horse's life

Postby Ourpawprints » Fri Jan 13, 2012 10:22 am

bump
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"You shout it out,
But I can't hear a word you say
I'm talking loud not saying much
I'm criticized but all your bullets ricochet
You shoot me down, but I get up

I'm bulletproof, nothing to lose
Fire away, fire away
Ricochet, you take your aim
Fire away, fire away
You shoot me down but I won't fall
I am titanium"
-David Guetta Titanium

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Re: A horse's life

Postby Saphira344 » Fri Jan 13, 2012 10:25 am

poor horse
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