Sunset- Booke one in the 'Horses Of Peace Valley' Series!

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Sunset- Booke one in the 'Horses Of Peace Valley' Series!

Postby . ME » Wed Jan 11, 2012 2:28 pm

PROLOGUE:

Deep brown eyes stared,flicking from side to side. " The time is ready " A deep voice whispered.Starri looked at the pretty sunset sky. Then he looked at 'The Orb Of Time'. He gripped it in his teeth, and ripped it from its place. There was a loud ding!, And it looked like a invisible shield went over the earth for a moment. Starri shook his massive black head, and trotted off, hooves clacking louder than before on the hard stone. I have the Orb Of Time!
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Re: Book One: Sunset ( Read and comments please? Not a warri

Postby . ME » Thu Jan 12, 2012 1:39 pm

Chapter one:

Tiger Lily stared at the pretty sunset. It'd been like this for a whole week now. The sky wouldn't change. Her father was always saying how " Someone must have stole the orb of time! " or, " Someone must have went on that endless, dangerous journey for it and have got the orb! ". It was quite annoying. He was the leader of the herd, and most believed him. " Hey, Tiger Lily! ". The loud shot behind her made her jump up. Tiger Lily turned around. " Oh, Its you, Autumn Storm ". Autumn Storm nodded. Tiger Lily walked to the edge of the cliff,staring down at all of the horses being rode by tiny-heads. " Why do tiny-heads use some horses as transportation? " Autumn Storm asked. " Nobody knows. Tiny-heads are weird. " Tiger Lily replied. " But how come some of the tiny-heads 'buy' them, and some capture wild ones like us? " Autumn Storm once again asked. " Once again, Autumn Storm, Nobody knows. Tiny-heads are very very weird. " Tiger Lily sighed. Then her father ran over. " What, Apple Dew? " Autumn Storm asked. There was a huge look of fear on his face. " There here! Starri and his herd.....There attacking! " Apple Dew whispered.
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Re: Sunset- Booke one in the 'Horses Of Peace Valley' Series

Postby . ME » Thu Jan 12, 2012 2:09 pm

Chapter two:

Tiger Lily started to shake. " Is Shooting Star fighting? " She stammered. Shooting Star was a unicorn. Her white-silver coat was beautiful, but she was the wrong unicorn to mess with. She couldn't talk, she spoke her own language. She was extremely tough, and not just because she could stab others with her sharp white horn. Apple Dew looked down. " Yes, She is fighting Starri... I remember that silent dark night we found her... What luck we had. " He said in a lighter tone. " Her powers have always helped us... Her setting things on fire, her making fire stop, her making plants grow.... her rainbow-making. How if she neighs in a certain tone butterflies fly around her ". Tiger Lily nodded. Just then, Starri ran in, Shooting Star following, stabbing him in the rear. He stopped in front of Apple Dew. " I thought you cared about the orb of time. You know if I decide to smash it... BAM! Pitch black goes the earth forever! " He said in a angry tone. " Stop! Everyone stop! " Apple dew whinnied. Everyone stopped and stared. " I knew someone had gotten there hooves on it! I will get it back; Be warned, Starri. I WILL get it back! " Apple Dew said, right in front of Starri's face. " Now go before I slaughter you and your herd ". Starri looked at him. " For now " He snorted as he walked off, herd following. Shooting Star turned to them. She let out a few odd words of her 'language'. She then let out a snort and walked away. " One of us seriously needs to find out her language, and soon! " Autumn Storm said, gazing after Shooting Star. " And how does she know what we say? She understands us, be we cant understand her. And she knows her name; She accpted what we gave her ". Apple Dew shrugged. " I named her after the shooting star we saw the night we found her. And I think i've found a few words of her language... Now rest, all of you! If the orb of time was in its place it'd be dark out already! " Apple Dew neighed. Autumn Storm and Tiger Lily dipped there heads, and fell asleep.
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Re: Sunset- Booke one in the 'Horses Of Peace Valley' Series

Postby sparkle.+bballmta » Mon Feb 13, 2012 1:53 pm

Hehe me likes angry unicorn!
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