Dear AJ2 ~Royal Trouble~

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Since you all screamed yes who's POV shall it be? (Not Skye XP)

Midnight
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Bobu
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Minx
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Erin
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Aisu
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Violet
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Frost
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Kai
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Claw
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Re: Dear AJ2 ~Royal Trouble~

Postby Nonexsitent » Thu Jan 12, 2012 8:30 am

~Calypso~ wrote:.....i hate Violet...that is all I'm going to say, otherwise I'm going to eat my cat out of suppressed fury....

Don't eat your pussy cat... >.< I'm animal friendly, Kill animals and I turn up to kill you...
BTW JF you are amazing!

Dear AJ,
I struggled against my straps as the first electric shock tingled through my body.
"Violet wait." I begged and Violet held up her hand.
"What?" she asked.
"I'll work for you willingly, if you don't wipe my mind." I pointed out and Violet pondered on the thought.
"Nah, it's your tricks." Violet said. I frowned, why didn't that plan work?
"THE LION HAS BROKE FREE!" A scream rang out and Violet froze.
"Oh no." She mutterd, I smirked, this was a change of events.
"Uh oh." I teased, Violet glared at me as the door burst open and a lion stood there growling at us.
"Let the girl go." It snarled and Violet quickly unstrapped me, why couldn't she just vanish in a mystical puff of cartoon smoke?
"Uh thanks." I said hurrying over to his side.
"I'm King Claw." He said smiling at me, I bowed, sad that I had already found one Royal.
"Crystal, I'm the W.W.A.S.A spy assigned to find you and the rest of the royals." I explained.
"That includes getting yourself dognapped?" Claw chuckled, I smiled.
"Part of the job." I explained. Claw laughed then and Violet scowled.
"Stupid Lion." she muttered and flapped her great big wings, she hovered in the air then I smelt a familiar smell.
The crazied dog materialised right in front of me, smiling his horrid, crazy smile. Was he going to keep appearing like that?
"Told you." It chuckled and I growled.
"Hello, would be nice." I snarled and I heard loads of panicked cries and I peered behind him to see the rest of my team in a small cage. The cage was dangling over a massive pit.
"Hi guys." I said, waving at them, they glared at them, Midnight's glare the harshest.
"Hi, nothing Crystal." Kai growled and I sighed.
The crazy dog smiled at me, then moved toward Claw.
"Your majesty." He slurred and Claw backed up, straight into a cage. I sighed it was just me and the crazy dog. I forgot to put a picture of Claw (How stupid)
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Violet laughed then, LIKE A MANIAC!
"A fight to the death." she smiled and everyone gasped.
"My pleasure." I said bowing and another series of gasps rang out, seriously so much drama.
The crazied dog lunged for me then (lets call him Steve) I dodged to one side, lashing out with my paw. It scracthed his cheek and he growled. I ignored him and went in with a kick, I caught him dead in the center of his back. I heard his spine crack and I froze as he fell to the floor. He looked up at me in shock.
"I can't feel my legs." He gasped, I just stood there, shocked.
"CRYSTAL!" Kai yelled, I spun round to see Violet flying at me full speed. I had no time to dodge so I went sailing backwards and through the window. I screamed as I began to fall downward. There was no ending.

~Crystal
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Re: Dear AJ2 ~Royal Trouble~

Postby G๏l๔єภєאє » Thu Jan 12, 2012 8:34 am

I love my cat. Don't get me wrong, I'll do anything to save animals. ut that's just how much I hate Violet.....did you really have to break his spine??? Well...I guess that'll put him out of action......
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Re: Dear AJ2 ~Royal Trouble~

Postby Nonexsitent » Thu Jan 12, 2012 8:37 am

~Calypso~ wrote:I love my cat. Don't get me wrong, I'll do anything to save animals. ut that's just how much I hate Violet.....did you really have to break his spine??? Well...I guess that'll put him out of action......

I need him dead really...
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Re: Dear AJ2 ~Royal Trouble~

Postby G๏l๔єภєאє » Thu Jan 12, 2012 8:46 am

absolutely LOVE this!!!! where would I be in life if I didn't have my AJ and SJ???? nowhere. probrably in a coffin under the ground...MOAR!!!!!!!

btw - do you like RJ?? nobody seems to read it anymore.
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Re: Dear AJ2 ~Royal Trouble~

Postby Nonexsitent » Thu Jan 12, 2012 9:57 am

~Calypso~ wrote:absolutely LOVE this!!!! where would I be in life if I didn't have my AJ and SJ???? nowhere. probrably in a coffin under the ground...MOAR!!!!!!!

btw - do you like RJ?? nobody seems to read it anymore.

Your the kindest...
I LOVE RJ, I couldn't comment because my internet was down D: sorry!

Dear AJ,
There WAS an end to it, my long fall that is. Because I hit rock bottom hard, I winced and sat up.
WHY DID THIS STUFF HAPPEN TO ME?
I jumped up and looked at the steep cliff, all I had to do now was climb back up and play hero...
Look it is HARDER than I make it out to be okay? I mean you try and have Violet trying to partly kill you...
It isn't pleasant seeing her face when you don't want to.
"Help." I muttered and I began to climb the cliff face, I hated the hardship. I slowly began to get further off the floor and I glared at the rocks ahead of me, why couldn't they be helpful bids? I know asking myself negative questions all the time won't help. I wish Alexandra was here.
"One potato." I began to count and I let out a little squeak as the rock gave out. I listed all the swear words I knew inside my head and steadily regained my speed. I continued to climb, swiftly, I wasn't scared of heights.
YAY!
I was going very slow so this was being very nerve wracking.
I was counting sheep in potato sacks with bunnies on their backs. See I was going insane.
I didn't want to die...
FINALLY! I REACHED THE TOP AT LAST!
I had like a mini party as soon as I reached the top, then I peered through the shatterd window, Violet was smiling and everyone else looked glum. Did they miss me that much? I feel loved! Even Steve looked sad, but I guess that was because he didn't kill me himself.
"I wanted to kill her." he muttered and Violet sighed.
"We weren't meant to kill her, but never mind." Violet snapped, I then jumped through the window.
"Sorry to disappoint you." I beamed and Violet screamed and Steve cheered, the others just stared in amazment. Frost was completely shocked and Haenston wiped his eyes. (Bless him)
"You survived?" Midnight asked, nice bit of encouragement there.
"No I'm the ghost." I said sarcasticly and Steve frowned.
"No your not." He muttered, I shot him a glare.
"I was being sarcastic." I explained, Violet let out a screech of rage, glaring at me, I saw Claw climbing out his cage. How did he unlock it? I decided to distract Violet since she hadn't noticed yet.
"I can't believe it." Kai muttered and Erin squeaked in surprise, I slowly turned round to face Dracula. I screamed instantly and he screamed back. I backed away from him and tripped over Steve. I fell right in front of Violet, who smiled down at me, boy why did I continue to mess up?

~Crystal
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Re: Dear AJ2 ~Royal Trouble~

Postby Nonexsitent » Fri Jan 13, 2012 8:42 am

There is something important coming up so you guys might want to check out this http://www.chickensmoothie.com/Forum/viewtopic.php?f=57&t=986318 this is The Journal Of Skye (also called TJOS) please read it! it is really different from Crystal's...

Dear AJ,
I jumped up and Violet pulled me back down.
"ENOUGH!" Claw roared and Violet scrabbled off of me, Claw glared at her, showing her he wasn't impressed. Well you could see she was petrified of Claw, I admitt he is scary...
Claw signalled for the rest of my group to be let out the cage and Violet reluctantly unlocked the cage and let everyone clamber out. Kai shot me a thumbs up and I smiled as Erin and Elliot ran over and gave me a hug, Haenston hung back he was like Frost, not a huggy person.
Violet then vanished and Claw smiled at me.
"I owe you my life." He said bowing and I frowned.
"What now? I owe you mine." I explained.
"No your fur pin helped me unlock the cages." Claw said holding up my fur pin.
"How did you..." I began and Claw sighed.
"It fell out as you walked by my cell earlier." He continued, I nodded it all coming clear at last.
Basically he pikied my fur pin that fell out my fur off the floor. Then unlocked his cage, wow that does make sense, I guess.
I lead them to the cliff and I stared over the edge.
"Now we have to get down." I explained.
"I can help there." Jet said and grabbed me. I saw Midnight glare at him as Jet took off and swooped down, dropping me on the floor before swooping back up.
I looked up as he flew back down with Kai who was accompanied by Dracula. Jet placed her next to me and flew back up. I glanced at Kai who was frowning.
Jet came back with Erin and Elliot. And placed them nearby. Okay so it went like that for ages!
I sighed as we finally all were back together and we all set off again.
I'll write more later, Midnight wants a word...

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Re: Dear AJ2 ~Royal Trouble~

Postby sparkle.+bballmta » Fri Jan 13, 2012 3:17 pm

*appears* he he I'm back!!! Did u miss me? Uh oh better go before someone sees me! Your silent ninja is here!Epic story BTW. *dissapears again*
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Re: Dear AJ2 ~Royal Trouble~

Postby Nonexsitent » Sat Jan 14, 2012 5:39 am

Ninja stalkers are awesome!

Dear AJ,
OH MY GOD!
MIDNIGHT ASKED ME OUT!
I'M SO HAPPY! YAY!
Midnight was so nice and he literally was overjoyed when I said yes.
"Crystal, your so beautiful." that was his exact words. ♥
Sorry over reacted there, lots reading back over it and all...sorry, mushy things aren't my thing so why am I writing them? Because I'm head over heels in love with Midnight...
We all have decided to camp in the forest, like happy campers. Kai said a tree was more comfortable, that made everyone look at her surprised.
"What?" she asked. We left it after that, she didn't reveal her past with out a price. (None of us really wanted to be Dracula's feeding post, or Kai to swear us to secrecy) Jet continued to poke the fire, Frost was muttering to Kai, who was obviously telling him her tale.
I saw Midnight telling the younger ones a story, I smiled and sat down near him so I could hear the story.
"The wicked witch wrapped her boney hand round the wand and raised it to the full moon. She screamed as the silver lightening bolt shot from the wand, it struck the moon's silver surface and it turned blood red. The witch cackled and vanished in a mystical puff of smoke. A nearby child scrambled out of the thorn bush, cursing the countless scars and scratches she had earned from throwing herself into the bush.
"The witch has cursed the moon..." The child gaped at the moon as it scarlett light shone brightly. The child scurried back through the winding forest to warn the village of the evil deed the witch had preformed. The longer the village bathed in the crimson light, the longer the village would be cursed." Midnight explained and I was amased at how well he could tell stories.
I smiled at Midnight who stood up saying goodnight to the kids, they closed their eyes and slept. I smiled at Midnight who grinned at me, his indigo eyes shining.
"A story, you wrote ages ago." He smiled and I remembered that story, won me my english reward! Lol!

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Re: Dear AJ2 ~Royal Trouble~

Postby Nonexsitent » Sun Jan 15, 2012 11:50 pm

Everyone's vanished....come back

Dear AJ,
I had nightmares last night, I awoke and I saw a note on my pillow.
"Guys did anyone put a note here?" I asked they all shook their heads and Midnight picked the note up.
"Dear Crystal and others, I will kill off the remainders of Crystal's family, till you all turn yourselves in...I'll give you a exact week, I'm in the castle on the top of Dry wood's hill. Look at the tree next to you to know I'm serious. Violet!" Midnight read out then Erin screamed pointing next to me, I turned my head and screamed as well, I scrambled out of my sleeping bag running to Midnight, he hugged me staring in horror.
My aunt Floure was hung there, I glanced at her, a bullet through the brain, at least the death was quick. I then thought about my cousin Skye, did Violet have her captive, if I was magic, was she? Did Violet want to kill me and replace me with Skye? All those questions were swirling round my head, all I knew was that Skye was in danger.
"We have to go to my aunt's house, my cousin Skye is in danger." I begged Midnight.
"What about the royals?" He asked as Claw raised his eyebrows
"My cousin is in danger, to me she is more important than the royals." I snapped and everyone gasped.
"Look, my family is important too, so I say let's go save Skye." Claw demanded and Erin nodded.
"I'm glad we found Elliot and Claw but we must save Skye to stop, Violet killing her." Erin chimed in and Kai sighed.
"If anyone wants to argue, I let Dracula feed off you for a week..." She warned and no one objected, I beamed at Midnight.
"Thank you, everyone, let's go." I hummed and we all set off to save my cousin.

~Crystal

Sorry it's a short entry, I'm busy with alot of things so, I'll try and write more later...
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Re: Dear AJ2 ~Royal Trouble~

Postby G๏l๔єภєאє » Mon Jan 16, 2012 5:52 am

don't worry! i'm here! i'm a loyal fan!! everyone's disappeared!! nobody reads RJ either. Anyway, this isn't about my journal, this is about AJ. MOAR!!!!!
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