Artist Army {old thread}

[The Royal Mirage]

Yes, Coyox. If you were to look just a few posts above your own, you'd see I've already been corrected on that

[mawsoleum]

Yes, Coyox. If you were to look just a few posts above your own, you'd see I've already been corrected on that ;)

Ooppie sorry. ;__;

My bad, I kind of scrolled right down. XD

[A.K.A Raptor]

https://join.me/941-983-787#
Gonna live stream for a little

[Spotty]

I feel this is kind of ironic. I'm stuck with a lineart I really love myself, but I can't use it for anything. Everything worked out right when I drew it, and I had lots of fun. Halfway through I realise it doesn't fit anything. I can't use it for my shop, the shading is to complicated so I'd die if someone asked for a edit of the lineart, like floppy ears, a fluffier tail or something. *shrugs* And I think it has got too much character; something I've learned is that only really generic happy-looking canines works in my shop, if the lineart shows a bit of personality people can't picture their own character in it and won't order. On top of that I don't have any character of my own that would fit it either (I don't pay my wolf characters any attention, the poor darlings). Hence this lineart will stay uncoloured. But it was fun to shade and yay I put a little texture on it again for funsies.
If you want to crit it, please be nice, I'm a bit sensitive about it today.

[Calix]

Spotty- Oh my, that's gorgeous <3 I wish I could order a simple coloring, haha. Those paws are just beautiful, you don't know how envious they make me <3 And the neck fur, and..everything, pure love <3

[mawsoleum]

http://envelopelicker.deviantart.com/#/d4lxyec

Any critiques on this?

Note- I did this extremely quickly, about 5 minutes, and yes, the back should be that long.

[mawsoleum]

I feel this is kind of ironic. I'm stuck with a lineart I really love myself, but I can't use it for anything. Everything worked out right when I drew it, and I had lots of fun. Halfway through I realise it doesn't fit anything. I can't use it for my shop, the shading is to complicated so I'd die if someone asked for a edit of the lineart, like floppy ears, a fluffier tail or something. *shrugs* And I think it has got too much character; something I've learned is that only really generic happy-looking canines works in my shop, if the lineart shows a bit of personality people can't picture their own character in it and won't order. On top of that I don't have any character of my own that would fit it either (I don't pay my wolf characters any attention, the poor darlings). Hence this lineart will stay uncoloured. But it was fun to shade and yay I put a little texture on it again for funsies.
If you want to crit it, please be nice, I'm a bit sensitive about it today.

If you made that a lineart, my character Analoni would fit in it perfectly. She's a sullen wolf, I don't really like her in happy lines. x3

It's looking wonderful though, really amazing.

[A.K.A Raptor]

Spotty, that Is just so cool, I can see my character in that pose so easily, and I would defintly order right away if I could afford.
But, saddly, I need help on this pose, I hate it, and want to improve as much as I can, since I haven't improved at all in a while. I am mostly looking for redlines, since that seems to help me better, so here is my Character Shard in the desert- Oh yea, this is the ref for background
Coyox, I like it, I would suggest finish it, I do think the paws look a little weird though.

[Calix]

http://envelopelicker.deviantart.com/#/d4lxyec

Any critiques on this?

Note- I did this extremely quickly, about 5 minutes, and yes, the back should be that long.

I think the back thigh is a little big, and the rear could be higher up, maybe the head a little bigger? Overall, it's really nice, I love it ^^ The legs and paws and face are all beautiful<3

[wickedpup]

http://envelopelicker.deviantart.com/#/d4lxyec

Any critiques on this?

Note- I did this extremely quickly, about 5 minutes, and yes, the back should be that long.

Would you care for a redline if I can get sai or gimp to work? c: A few things I see wrong are the front leg on the ground,it looks way too stiff,and the joint seems a bit backwards? The tail isn't able to go that way,it should hang low,or not have that dent in it. I don't know how to explain the back legs,but I could redline those to show you. c:

@ Spotty ; I can't see it,but I'm sure it looks good. lol |D //tiny pic hates me

@Aka ; The back shouldn't curve up like that is all I can see right now with anatomy. As with the background,I don't think a wolf would sink down into the sand like that,as a person doesn't. It would support the body just like any other substance. Sand isn't water,so nothing really goes into it unless they're eroded and buried. Nice picture though,I really like it. c:

Nothing much but I might start a livestream if anyone wants to watch. :'D
Will be in my siggy if I start one.