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Re: Artist Army

Postby Yeo » Wed Jan 11, 2012 6:34 am

@august the back legs look a little stiff to me


ok hi um i stalked susi here so im just gonna leave this here for critique and comments and whatnot

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took like 10-15 minutes on one layer hurrr
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Re: Artist Army

Postby The Royal Mirage » Wed Jan 11, 2012 6:37 am

The ears look really small to me, and a bit misshapen as well - you may want to fix that (plus, a wolf usually wouldn't have their ears forward when snarling). Also the jaw looks really narrow in comparison to the muzzle. Altogether though, much more realistic than I could do.
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Re: Artist Army

Postby Susiron » Wed Jan 11, 2012 6:41 am

Sectumsempra wrote:@august the back legs look a little stiff to me


ok hi um i stalked susi here so im just gonna leave this here for critique and comments and whatnot

http://fc00.deviantart.net/fs70/i/2012/ ... 4lx7my.png

took like 10-15 minutes on one layer hurrr


I love your wolves, woman! < 3
And only ten minutes? fkelgjrlg. screw your skill, seriously! >:C < 333

I swear, I always love how you do snouts/noses the most. : DD


The ears could be a little bigger as Mirage says, but, Mirage, wolves DO put their ears forward while snarling.
Forward means that they have sureness in their position within a fight. Backwards show timidness, or submissive behavior towards an aggressor.

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Re: Artist Army

Postby The Royal Mirage » Wed Jan 11, 2012 6:44 am

... well, I've been corrected XD Guess I'm just too used to horse body language. Sincere apologies my friend ^-^
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Re: Artist Army

Postby Susiron » Wed Jan 11, 2012 6:45 am

The Royal Mirage wrote:... well, I've been corrected XD Guess I'm just too used to horse body language. Sincere apologies my friend ^-^


Haha, well you ARE very good at horses. x)
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Re: Artist Army

Postby The Royal Mirage » Wed Jan 11, 2012 6:49 am

I should hope so, I've been kinda horse-obsessed since.. well, forever XD
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Re: Artist Army

Postby DoctorDraca » Wed Jan 11, 2012 7:11 am

Sectumsempra, welcome to the artist army. The sketch you posted is lovely. c:
Your username is interesting, would you mind if I ask where you got it from?
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Re: Artist Army

Postby mawsoleum » Wed Jan 11, 2012 7:20 am

Coyox wrote:http://envelopelicker.deviantart.com/#/d4lugjt


Any tips? C:


It's still a WIP.



Can I get anything else on this?

And it'll be traditional for now. C:
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Re: Artist Army

Postby Yeo » Wed Jan 11, 2012 7:21 am

thanks for the critique Mirage, I edited it on my program but I;m too lazy to reupload lol.

oh the username is a spell in Harry Potter /nerd
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Re: Artist Army

Postby mawsoleum » Wed Jan 11, 2012 7:43 am

The Royal Mirage wrote:The ears look really small to me, and a bit misshapen as well - you may want to fix that (plus, a wolf usually wouldn't have their ears forward when snarling). Also the jaw looks really narrow in comparison to the muzzle. Altogether though, much more realistic than I could do.

Actually, wolves commonly do have them forward. Generally it's the dominating wolf.

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http://pixdaus.com/pics/1246930130DsUQRFg.jpg
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http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_LbccUVbSRd8/S ... arling.jpg
http://cdn.pimpmyspace.org/media/pms/c/ ... /ingwo.jpg

So if the wolf you're drawing is brave and dominant, it's fine.
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