{Ahzenai Mingle Spot v.2}

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Re: {Ahzenai Mingle Spot v.2} Contest Over.

Postby Temperance. » Mon Jan 09, 2012 9:30 am

OMW Neara, Orezon looks so epic on those lines in the fight scene <3 You're a total genius <3 But I gotta say we couldn't have done it without LostGosling, she was absolutely critical to the development of the stories and the scenes. Its a pity we couldn't get all three art pieces done but I still think our entry is totally win <3 So LG, don't worry about it, I know that I would certainly have been totally lost without your help <3

On another note, I'm not reading any other entries yet either XD So nervous, LOL, but my story probably fails anyways since I had to stay up super late to finish it (after having already exhausted myself by doing chores and cleaning all day) But I 'spose thats what happens when you invite a guest over the night before entries are due XD So yeah, all your entries look super cool guys, am excited (and anxious) to see who wins.

Good luck everyone!!!! No matter who wins I think we can all rest easy knowing that we worked super hard and all submitted amazing work <3


























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Re: {Ahzenai Mingle Spot v.2} Contest Over.

Postby Bast-et » Mon Jan 09, 2012 5:01 pm

Sacred, one of the returning Ahzenai, really reminds me of Anthropology the store for some reason... Really random, but I thought I'd share.

Also, I finished reading all the entries and I wanted to compliment everyone on how creative and well done they were =]
@Gamzee- dude, the end of yours really was creepy- I thought you were kidding...
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Re: {Ahzenai Mingle Spot v.2} Contest Over.

Postby Ulysses » Tue Jan 10, 2012 9:46 am

I tried >:3
... looks as though I succeeded XD
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I keep six honest serving-men
(They taught me all I knew);
Their names are What and Were and When
And How and Why and Who.
I send them over land and sea,
I send them east and west;
And after they have worked for me,
I give them all a rest.

I let them rest from nine till five,
For I am busy then,
As well as breakfast, lunch, and tea,
For they are hungry men.

But different folk have different views;
I know a person small~
She keeps ten million serving-men,
Who get no rest at all!
She sends 'em abroad on her own affairs,
From the second she opens her eyes
One million Hows, two million Wheres,
And seven million Whys!
-Rudyard Kipling
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Re: {Ahzenai Mingle Spot v.2} Contest Over.

Postby cazio » Tue Jan 10, 2012 10:18 am

1. Username: Cazio

2. How much time do you spend on CS?: Eh, depends on whats going on. Sometimes I check in to see if there are any replies on threads, check for PMs and go through trades. Anywhere from ten minutes to two or three hours. That being said, I check CS often, probably 5 or six times a day, more so now that my phone is internet capable.

3. How much time do you need to write an intro/acceptance?: Depends on ho long you want it. I can write about 1,500 words in 45 min, but for a well written intro I think a half hour to an hour would suffice.

4. Your intro for the two:

The vortex began to churn as the inhabitants of Ahzen looked hopefully into its colors, waiting for the moment that another Ahzenai would enter the world. It was always a little celebration when the vortex activated and even Valcyon's ears twitched in anticipation. As the vortex continues to swirl however, it was evident that this was no ordinary

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    "(The things that I've loved the things that I've lost
    The things I've held sacred that I've dropped
    I won't lie no more you can bet
    I don't want to learn what I'll need to forget

    I like throwing my voice and breaking guitars
    Cause it doesn't remind me of anything
    I like playing in the sand what's mine is ours
    If it doesn't remind me of anything
    )"

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Re: Writers, yay!

Postby Bast-et » Tue Jan 10, 2012 4:42 pm

1. Username: ~Bast~

2. How much time do you spend on CS? Around 2-5 hours a day, usually from around 5pm-11pm Onyx time. I also check in every morning, and usually throughout the day. On the weekends however, I get on very frequently throughout the day, and usually stay on around 4-8+ hours.

3. How much time do you need to write an intro/acceptance? I write quite quickly, and I enjoy thinking of characters that suit their appearance =) I would say around 20-40 minutes to give me time to think of names, personalities, and a unique intro story. (and then make sure I spelled everything correctly XD)

4. Your intro for the two:

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Above the crowd of camping suitors, the vortex began to lightly glow. Small swirls and signs of life were present to those who paid attention, but no flashy sparks or spinning whirls caught the attention of any but the most observant. Slowly it's color changed into two distinct sections that circled each other, black and white, round and round. Finally someone loudly exclaimed, "Look at the vortex! It's moving again!" As if recognizing that it now had an audience, the vortex flared brighter, and spun faster. With one final flash, two Ahzenai emerged from it's light and continued to circle each other. A large pristine white male caught the eye of most of the spectators who watched the birth in silence. Decorated in intricate swirls, he was bold and graceful, and an aura of honesty and calm hung around him. Similarly decorated, the lithe black female exuded the same graceful confidence as her brother, although her movements were layered in charm and intrigue. Together as one they stopped as faced each other.
"Our birth was a long time coming, brother." her voice was light and sweet, but a few suitors could hear the underlying strength in her words.
"So it was." he replied, his voice rich and strong, unhurried as he gazed at his sister. "I assume you intend to leave at once?"
"I intend to find a companion who seeks answers to questions similar to mine, and then leave, yes"
"Just as I am content to search for answers here"
"You know our natures are as fire and water?" she told him
"Just as well as you" he responded, taking no offense to the arched tone she had used. The black female nodded and then sought the eyes of Valcyon who announced her name, "Cimorene and her brother, Mendanbar!"
Cimorene glided over to the suitors and formally introduced herself,
"I am Cimorene, I intend to find a companion who seeks out mystery and hidden knowledge as ardently as I." Her gaze met several suitors and they froze, captivated the charm behind her eyes. Mendanbar arrived to stand beside her and gave his own appeal to the crowd,
"I am Mendanbar, I intend to find answers by searching inward. A companion who understands the art of the mind and enjoys travel will do well with me." he told them.
Together the brother and sister surveyed the mass of suitors who could potentially be their companion. Although they appeared united, neither intended to spend much time in the other's company, and both had an excited gleam in their eyes as the people began to press forward.



I love these two's design =) When I saw them and how well they complimented each other, my first thought was "yin yang". But I didn't want the typically good/bad combo (it's boring and there's not much for an adopter to do with it) so I decided on two strong personalities that both have strengths and flaws (much better for stories and woos). I considered giving them names that were the reverse of each other, but I thought that might not be fair for the adopters who may not want a name so similar to their own Ahz. (feel free to change that though) So there's my entry, about time I posted it haha. It took me 32 minutes to write, and another 3 for this random blurb =)
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Re: {Ahzenai Mingle Spot v.2} Contest Over.

Postby Queen Vivane » Tue Jan 10, 2012 10:54 pm

1. Username: <3Fenris<3

2. How much time do you spend on CS? Around 12 hours a day

3. How much time do you need to write an intro/acceptance? I suppose anything up to an hour to get everything written up with an air of finality

4. Your intro for the two:
Slowly when nobody was watching small flashes of color began to swirl into life inside the vortex, splashes of black and white deliberately following each other in the the path, a slow dance of beauty as more black and white swelled outward from the swirls. Until the vortex was a complete mixture of the two then splashes of blue and gold added themselves in, one eager suitor looked toward the vortex and gasped as she looked upon it. Others began casting their eyes toward the vortex and found themselves unable to look away from the beautiful sight, two Ahzenai flashed into existence, one black as night and the other a bright snow white. The white ahzenai landed softly on the ground his blue eyes going over the assembled suitors and then he dismissed them with a flick of his tail they were not important.

"Kivero" Valcyon called as the white ahzenai strolled past the many eager suitors to sit on a boulder by the lake, "I do not care to be wooed but try if you must" Kivero said sticking his muzzle up in the air. He wanted someone who appreciated the finer things in life not somebody who liked to travel, "if I am to have a companion I do not want someone who likes to travel" he said with an air of finality. The black ahzenai sighed at her vortex partners snobbish attitude as she jumped to the floor from the vortex, "Selvara" Valcyon announced to Ahzen. Selvara dipped her head toward Valcyon and walked forward to sit in front of the suitors her yellow eyes tracing over the non human suitors with undisguised curiosity. "Hello as you all already know my name is Selvara, what I am looking for in a companion is compassion and a love for beautiful things" she said dipping her head toward the suitors worth a smile faint light making her white markings shimmer.

While in the vortex Selvara had heard of things the suitors called beautiful and she had been entranced by their conversations and wanted to know exactly what they were talking about.

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Re: {Ahzenai Mingle Spot v.2} Contest Over.

Postby jern. » Wed Jan 11, 2012 12:18 am

~Bast~ wrote:Sacred, one of the returning Ahzenai, really reminds me of Anthropology the store for some reason... Really random, but I thought I'd share.

Also, I finished reading all the entries and I wanted to compliment everyone on how creative and well done they were =]
@Gamzee- dude, the end of yours really was creepy- I thought you were kidding...


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Re: {Ahzenai Mingle Spot v.2} Contest Over.

Postby LostGosling » Wed Jan 11, 2012 7:45 am

1. Username: LostGosling

2. How much time do you spend on CS? "hides face in embarassment" I made a CS intervention for my self.
Way to much time. But, I'll now spend two hours during the day, and then an uncharted amount of time at night on here.
Yup, a definant improvement. xD

3. How much time do you need to write an intro/acceptance? One hour to an hour and a half a piece at the most. Though I'll need to know in advance when I'll be doing them. ;3

4. Your intro for the two:

Hestia is a jokester of sorts, ruff and tumble in the worst of situations. She has the tendancy to speak her mind, thus sticking her in some pretty nasty situations. She's witty, mildly sarcastic and bold, so don't expect her to watch out for your feelings.

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This Ahz has a terrible attitude, especially when it comes to his looks. He's the smooth, devonair type, and it hampers his style to be colored so... femininely. He values respect and equality among all other attributes, and resents being treated as some special "possession".

Hestia & Thain

The Vortex gave a mighty heave, catching the now gathered suitors' attention. It rocked and swirled fiercly as they looked on in anticapation, brilliant hughs of blues and golds swirling in a sea of black and white as it picked up speed. The viewers suddenly gave a startled gasp, two Ahzenai exploding heatedly from within it's depths. One, an elegantly marked plazma, had it's white muzzle clamped down tightly on the other's throat. The black and golden Ahz, who was kicking madly from the bottom of the stack, gave a sadistic grin. "You sissy! Can't you take a joke?!" her distinctly feminine voice rang into the aggressor's ear, her english accent mingling with a snarl. The other Ahz's eyes burned with rage, his smoothly sinister voice muffled by a mouth full of fur. "Just go ahead and call me that again...you'll wish you'd never been born." The female flashed another impish grin, throwing her head back as she filled her lungs. "SSSI..." Valcyon cleared his throat noisily from atop his perch, his prescence unknown to the two new borns until that moment. They both jumped up nervously, backing away from each other with tensed muscles. "Hestia and Thain! We welcome you!" he boomed, arching an eyebrow at the fact that they'd just been sqwabbling like a few bratty little kids. Hestia gave an amused snort, turning to sulk away through the crowd. "Wanka..." she muttered under her breath, cutting her eyes hatefully back to Thain. Thain's coat gave a disgusted shutter, his skeptical gaze turning on the crowd. He smiled lightly upon them, his mind currently freed of the troublesome female as he looked about. Suddenly his ears pricked, a foolish indevidual mentioning with glee how pretty she was. His agitated glare located the suitor just in time to see them pointing at him. "WHAT did you just call me?" he stormed up to the suitor, his teeth beared threateningly. "I am NOT a she, nor am I any "prettier" than any other Ahzneai in this world." he snarled venomously, a bone chilling roar tearing from his throat. Hestia rolled her eyes demeaningly as she scaled a pile of small rocks, turning to look out over the large group of discouraged creatures. "Hello ladies and gentlemen! I wish for a companion, most certainly unlike some other Ahzenai I can pin point." her eyes flickered challangingly to Thain. "Entertain me." Thain's head snapped around as he heard Hestia's announcment, his eyes mulling her(and her pedistal) over with contempt. The Ahz's attention hastily darted to a taller mound, his delicate paws quickly taking him to the top. "EH-HEM, I too seek this... companionship." he started, part of the crowd wincing before they turned to watch. "Those only who can treat me with respect, not as if I were some "shiny bobble", step forward now." his voice rumbled intimidatingly, a crooked, yet charming smile appearing on the Ahzenai's face as he locked eyes with Hestia. Let the games begin.

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Re: {Ahzenai Mingle Spot v.2} Contest Over.

Postby Shiko Hayashi » Wed Jan 11, 2012 10:41 am

Just curious, but is there any set time for when the Hiring Writer's contest ends? I'm curious about the results. Not too mention I had loads of fun writing it and I want to read the winner's entry.
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Re: {Ahzenai Mingle Spot v.2} Contest Over.

Postby jern. » Wed Jan 11, 2012 10:44 am

Urg I still need to apply for that
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