Artist Army {old thread}

[Marmoset]

Thanks Spotty ^^ much better than mine, I'll try to fix that up tomorrow

SHadey, I cant chat, are you able to use Join me instead?

[Oddly Shaded]

Sorry, its probably a bit late now, but no i don't know how to use Join me. But i may do one another day.

[Marmoset]

Yeah, my eyes are heavy, from what I saw of the drawing it looked pretty cool. I didn't understand what they were doing, it looked like dancing, then fighting, then hugging, the fighting again XD

[Oddly Shaded]

They're friends and they're somewhat play fighting. But then i look at it again and they look like they're laughing and having a fun time :3

[Calix]

wibeke- That is just downright adorable ^^ I love your painting style. I'd only suggest to maybe define the background a little more, although it looks fantastic as is.

Thank you for the critiques, I wish I hadn't lined already, but I might just line again xD

Marmoset- I love his head! I wish I could draw horse's heads like that. As spotty said, I think you just need to work on the general anatomy, but it's definitely not bad whatsoever. I'm still so envious of that head though~

[Marmoset]

I just need to fit it with the rest of the body I think, I'll try out everything Spotty said, but I'll try to balance the size. It was either too big for the head or too small. And thanks for your envy :3 you'll probably find alot of envy coming from me when I look at your gallery after this ^^

[Destrie]

Im in need of some help... i cant draw a human face... *sigh* and im trying not to mess my sketch up anymore... so can somebody help me with the PERSON part of the picture(comments on the horse are fine too, but i need more help on drawing the person)

Faceless:

my ref thingy...

My try doing the face on was an EPIC fail... so i need help please
(didnt see anything to comment on or i would... and i dont crit, cause im bad as you can see)

[Calix]

Im in need of some help... i cant draw a human face... *sigh* and im trying not to mess my sketch up anymore... so can somebody help me with the PERSON part of the picture(comments on the horse are fine too, but i need more help on drawing the person)

Faceless:

huge

My try doing the face on was an EPIC fail... so i need help please *puppy eyes*
(didnt see anything to comment on or i would... and i dont crit, cause im bad as you can see)

I'm not sure, but you should probably post references when you use them so closely:
http://www.best-horse-photos.com/images ... Racing.jpg
The horse seems really close to the ground. The angle is hard because in the photo the horse is sliding and is angled away from us.
The person seems kind of casual for such a dynamic picture, but I'm not a human artist so I can't really offer much help. s:

[Destrie]

ag! sorry, forgot to do that.. yes, i used that as a ref... i need to add that...! sorry, my bad!!!
(you can do that, right? use a rl pic for a ref? if not ill take it down... ive seen other people do it so i assume(d) it was okay...?)

[Calix]

No worries, I commend you for doing such a hard angle and pose ^^ And yeah, that's fine, I just didn't want someone freaking out and saying you didn't post it. I guess I did that though D:

I'm done the base coloring and shading, just posting for last minute critiquing before I do fur:
http://i1113.photobucket.com/albums/k51 ... ines-2.png
(Ignore the charcoal dot on the body, that was for shading, sorry. xD I just saw it)

Finished..maybe.
http://i1113.photobucket.com/albums/k51 ... ines-3.png
Not sure if I like the finished product.