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Here's the first part of my first story: Independence
Prouloge
Charlotte walked through the streets of Independence in the rain. She was carrying a bag filled with fruits and bread. She was walking to her house, to her poor, sick mother, to a creeky old house about ready to fall. Her clothes were soaked by the pooring down rain. She put her rain coat over the groceries so the bread wouldn't get soggy.
When she reached her one room house her mother was caughing hard. Charlotte ran over to her mom lying in bed.
"Mom! Are you ok?" She ran to the kitchen and got her mom a glass of water. "Mom, are you ok?"
"Yes Charlotte, I'll be ok, it's you you should be worrying about. You're drenched! Why weren't you wearing your rain coat?
"I was protecting the groceries."
"Oh, good, you stopped by the store. We were just about out of food." Her mom said, stomach growling.
"Mom, we always are practicly out of food being this poor. So I was thinking... I'm gonna get a job."
"Oh, honey, you're only 14." Her mom said shocked.
"I know, but we need the money, you need the money, to go to the doctor's. You're very sick and the doctor can give special medicine. You... we need the money."
"Honey, you're just a child, who will hire you?"
"I don't know, maybe I could work for Mr. Johnson, down the street. Whatever job I get, no matter how ever terrible it is, every dollar helps."
"Ok, just be carefull looking for it, a lot of people will offer you a job, but get one where you're not outside too much, you don't wanna end up like me."
"I know mom," And with that Charlotte went to bed ready to look for a job the next day.


Charlotte woke up that morning to harsh coughing.
"Mom!!!" Her mom stopped coughing and looked at Charlotte.
"Honey," She coughed "I think my time has come."
"NO! Mom! Please be strong!!"
"No, honey," Her mom said stroaking Charlotte's hair slowly. "I don't want to suffer any more. I want to be with your father," She slowly lowered her hand "You're strong, you can handle life on your own. Go get that job, make some money. I have faith in you. Good bye." Her mom closed her eyes and never opened them again.
"MOM!! Please wake up! Wake up!!" She said sobbing. Charlotte leaned over her mom's body and started crying. "Good bye." She sniffed "I love you."

TO BE CONTINUED LATER


Well, I hpe all you liked the Prouloge I know sad ending but ya know it's only the prouloge soo...ummm..ya. More to come!

[Foxanna]

@Foxanna:
I love this. xD It reminds me of my first relationship kinda. Your such a good writer I wish I could write good romantic stories but they always turn out so cheesy :3

Thank you so much!

[wolves+horses]

Meg-n-Mia, that's really sad! In a good way because it's writing, but... It's hard to explain. I both dislike and like it at the same time!

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Thanks, hehe, I know it's sad. It's sad forr two reasons; First, I was listening to sad music
Second; I needed to explain why Charlotte was living alone for the next part I'm workin' on
Thanks again! It really means a lot!

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Charlotte walked down the street she did every day, to her house, but now she walked to an empty house. Her mom died a week ago. She's been living on her own because her mom was the last family she had. She got a job baby sitting her neighbors baby, Tommy, it didn't pay to bad, $20 an hour. She baby sat at least four days a week for about three hours. Tommy's parents always went to fancy parties and stuff. She was barely making it with two meals a day.
She just reached her house.
"Yay," She said sarcastically "Finally home." She walked to the kitchen. "Hmm... What to make..." She started making spaghetti."I guess this'll do." After she ate she started reading her mom's favorite book."Mom, I miss you so much!" A tear streamed down her cheek.
A while later she set down the book. "Another night, leads to another day..." And with that she slowly went to sleep.

TO BE CONTINUED AGAIN...

[O.G.]

Gah! D= I'd join,but I would not write on this thing once a week. I'm writing a book plus I role play. My head would feel like it was going to explode! xD It looks like it might be a nice club, though!

[TrebleMaker]

Gah! D= I'd join,but I would not write on this thing once a week. I'm writing a book plus I role play. My head would feel like it was going to explode! xD It looks like it might be a nice club, though!

xD, Same here, I just add whatever I'd written for the book that week.

[OCeanic Vista]

Pain.
That was all Hollyleaf could feel after the tunnel collapsed behind her. There was no going back, as she had discovered the hard way, trying to claw her way out of mud, rushing water, rubble, and stones.
There was no break, no relent from the seemingly endless flow of water. Hollyleaf eventually gave up swimming and just tried to keep her head above the water. She was soaked wet, and freezing; the tunnels didn’t work anything like a nice nap on sunny rocks, with gentle river waves lapping at your paws. Where was the water she knew and loved?
Where were Lionblaze and Jayfeather? Hollyleaf knew her brothers would chide her afterwards for going in the tunnels. Valiant Lionblaze was probably trying to get to her right now. Jayfeather might be asleep, looking for her. Hollyleaf relaxed at the thought of that. She would be okay, because her brothers were on the job. But could she, would she, ever get out of the tunnels? Lionblaze or Jayfeather wouldn’t be thinking that.
Light.
A relief from dim darkness.
Hollyleaf could see again. And she did see…
…the sun. It hurt her eyes like usual.
…the azure sky. It was beautiful, the same color as Jayfeather’s eyes.
…two cats. They stood at the mouth of the tunnel.
Wait.
Two cats?
Hollyleaf was saved?
She was.
“Help!” she started mewing. It came out as a gurgle.
“Hey, Fausto? Is that a…cat?” said the smaller cat.
“It just might be, Jana.” Fausto replied.
“Help!” Hollyleaf managed to mew again, her head above the water for a brief moment. This time, Fausto and Jana heard her.
“Fausto! It is a cat!” Jana mewed.
“Yes!” Hollyleaf gurgled. “Help!”
“I’ll get her!” Fausto meowed heroically. He leaped into the rushing water and swam swiftly over to the drowning Hollyleaf. Hollyleaf could see the calico cat’s pelt clearly now, even in its wetness. Hollyleaf felt a set of teeth clamp reassuringly around her scruff. She could faintly make out the little cat she assumed was Jana. Jana was white. Pure white. Unlike her own black.
Hollyleaf sighed. She would have a lot of explaining to do, so she drifted off into a deep, but troubled sleep.

I write a lot of FanFiction lol this is one of the stories I'm considering posting

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I probably would do that, but I'm looking to publish what I am writing and I heard that if you share your work publicly, your chances of getting it published are very slim. =( If I ever decide, though, that I can write random junk to put on here I'll probably join. xD.

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"I-am-CC wrote:
Gah! D= I'd join,but I would not write on this thing once a week. I'm writing a book plus I role play. My head would feel like it was going to explode! xD It looks like it might be a nice club, though!"

actually, it's a lot easier that it sounds. I try to write every Tuesday, so if you set aside one day and time(after dinner) it makes it easier XD