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Do You Like The Diary Story?

Yes! I love it! This is the best diary book CS pet thing ever! I'm book marking!
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I love the characters!!! The story's interesting, although some grammar issues could be fixed..
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Yes, I really like it.
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Yeah, it's okay. I might read more some time.
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Niara's cute.. The story's okay...
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Total votes : 17

Re: Niara's Diary.

Postby SecretsLive » Sun Jan 08, 2012 2:51 pm

Aw, my dream pup! xD *hi cassy x3*
Moar will come tomorrow.. hopefully.
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Re: Niara's Diary.

Postby cswolf. » Sun Jan 08, 2012 2:55 pm

This is awesome. So much drama. Write more please :3
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Re: Niara's Diary.

Postby SecretsLive » Sun Jan 08, 2012 3:04 pm

Shower me in blue star dogs and call me Secrets, you guys rock! xD
I'll write more tomorrow, I don't think I have much time now.
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Re: Niara's Diary.

Postby kaypatts » Sun Jan 08, 2012 3:10 pm

ONO!

*Stalks SecretsLive Till she writes Moar*
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Re: Niara's Diary.

Postby ~*Amber*~ » Sun Jan 08, 2012 3:45 pm

im in love! and i want to pound jayla's face in so badly along with rain .how could he do all of that to you?
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Re: Niara's Diary.

Postby SecretsLive » Mon Jan 09, 2012 1:32 am

Sunday

I went straight to my room and cried and cried yesterday. Leona, Indigo, and Mataya all spent the night without even asking. They refused to leave me for a second.
Well, today I'm pretty crushed and my friend's angry parents just took them home. So, I'm alone. Mom and Dad went to some weird concert, so now I'm alone with Merica and Timmy. I can't help thinking about what everyone at school will say.
Nobody would EVER talk to me. oh, and if you were wondering, PPS means 'Peter Pan Syndrom.' It's when you won't grow. I'm supposed to be the size of my dad. Alot of ponies get it when they reach highschool. I've been living off, "I'm just short.." for a few years now. But now that won't work. Even the losers will get know!

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It's 9:00 now, I went to bed early. I had to get Merica angrily throw me down the stairs for me to actually get out of my room and eat. I just moaped around all day and barely ate. I'm still sick to my stomach. Nothing interesting happened today except for my lasting depreshion.. and of corse my friends all called, including Ceoto.. Which is bad, considering she found out..
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Re: Niara's Diary.

Postby SecretsLive » Mon Jan 09, 2012 1:57 am

Monday

Mom forced me to go to school today. She had to threaten me at least five times before I would get dressed. Then she litterally drug me to school. As soon as she threw me onto the sidewalk and zoomed away in the car, I was laughed at by nearly everyone. I shuffled through the crowd of animals, my head low.
I was already crying.
I barely made it through the classes for lunch. In English one of the kids kept throwing paper balls at the back of my head, and right as I was about to crack, the class ended. Everybody practically jumped from their seats. As the group of animals swarmed by the guy that was throwing the paper ball stopped briefly beside me. I looked up at him like, "..umn.." but then he took one of the paper balls and shoved it done my shirt, along with a can of dark, sticky soda.. or syrup. And he says, "Just a little treat for the midget." he laughed and disappeared with the crowd, unseen by the teacher because the others blocked him. I let out a soft wail of sadness and anger, following the others out the hall after pulling out the soda drenched crumpled paper. I imediatley ran to the bathroom, getting trampled by the bigger kids. I wasn't even going to ask the teacher if I could, what was the point? I knew my shirt was ruined, I tried scrubbing it with the cheap paper towels and useless liquid soap. Which obviously didn't work. I saw someone walk in, in the mirrow I saw the caramel and white fur and little white shirt of Jayla- Krissy and Dream too. I glared at them through the mirror as if I could trap them there.
I swiftly turned around, "What Jayla!?" I snapped, furious with the stupid dog.\
She snickered, "Not so cool now are you, Niara?" her eyes peirced into mine. "..you think you're so cool yelling at me on the side walk! Stealing my boyfriend.." she growled.
I was confused now, "Wait.. what?"
"RAIN BROKE UP WITH ME YOU STUPID LITTLE HORSE!!!" she barked, making fun of my PPS.
"Don't call me that!" I snapped.
She rolled her eyes, calming down now. "You just wait, Niara. There's going to be alot more coming."
She turned and left me there with my soda stained light blue shirt. I saw Krissy turn towards me, she quickly removed her jacket and tossed it to me with a wink. Jayla hadn't seen. They obviously had heard from paper-boy that I was in here.
Lunch slowly came and I was sitting at the backtable like always. Here's the seating arrangment, the first row by the wall.

Me Leona Indigo
Mataya Ceoto

While we were all talking about how horrible everything was Rain came and sat down beside Ceoto. He appologised! That was new.. One of the populars sitting down beside the nerd herd and appologising for ruining my life. Probably another stupid trick from Jayla. So, as most stories go, I yelled at him.
"I know Jayla told you to come, Rain! Why don't you just leave!!!" I yelled angrily.
Mataya stepped up and said that he wasn't like that. I rolled my eyes, slumping down in my seat. Leona and Indigo had to leave early to help the librarian. Now it was only four- Me, Mataya, Ceoto, and Rain. I sighed, looking across at the three, on a bench alone. Lunch rolled by in silence.
As I was throwing away my food that I didn't eat any of I was greeted by a huge dog.

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His name's Shark and he's the biggest bully in the school.. I'm writing this like right after lunch, so I'll write what happened later because the lunch lady saw me and is telling me to get to class.
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Re: Niara's Diary.

Postby kaypatts » Mon Jan 09, 2012 2:16 am

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Re: Niara's Diary.

Postby SecretsLive » Mon Jan 09, 2012 2:21 am

Kayla wrote:More!!!



Tomorrow or later today.
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Re: Niara's Diary.

Postby kaypatts » Mon Jan 09, 2012 2:30 am

Later Tday....
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