Artist Army {old thread}

[Susiron]

It's alright, we're just trying to cut down on this. It's been happening a lot recently. P:l

Nice drawings, btw. I like the Centaurs.

[Veins Of Opal]

Thanks.... I appreciate it.... You've got some nice art as well...

[The Royal Mirage]

Hey guys, I know it's been a while but I haven't drawn anything post-worthy ><

Anywho, I spent hours working on getting this right, but knowing me there's probably something wrong with it.

Some comments would be nice, as long as you aren't pointing out the slightly lazy coloring of the mane. I know it's there, I'm too lazy to fix it.

[katanatildawn]

Mm, was wondering if I could grab a redline? I cant get the purple-haired guy to look right...

@Mirage

That looks gorgeous (I just saw the target version you posted). the only thing is that the rise of the tail looks too high, but not being an expert on horses, i could be wrong.

[Destrie]

Hey guys, I know it's been a while but I haven't drawn anything post-worthy ><

Anywho, I spent hours working on getting this right, but knowing me there's probably something wrong with it.

Some comments would be nice, as long as you aren't pointing out the slightly lazy coloring of the mane. I know it's there, I'm too lazy to fix it.

Gah! This looks AMAZING!!! to me anyways : ) You're an awesome artist!

[The Royal Mirage]

Not sure if I could redline for you, but it looks great to me ^-^ I love the poses

And yes, the tail looks weird to me, too, but that's just because it's an arabian. I have no idea why I decided to draw my least-favourite breed.

@horse_lover9726: Thank you ^-^

[PolarAzulTigris]

@JtHMlover8: I love the poses, like mentioned before. The face looks.. odd and the arms I think. I think its just a matter of perspective though I'm pretty sure that was obvious. The only way for me to get it right would be me trying to make the same pose and picture lol but that'd be quite a silly sight. Not sure I can help you there; though the other one looks excellent, Perhaps for the angle the arms should be tucked closer to the body and the perspective of the arms extending to his face be more prominent, does that make any sense? The screen should be more facing him and not up. X3 sorry if I lack sense.

Edit: Also something I realized, why would he be reflecting the screen up where he could barely see it? X3

[Susiron]

JtHM,

The torsos and overall pose look nice. :3
A few things I see, though--
The feet on the guy crossed are really stiff and awkward. His thigh also seems to stick out too much towards the tail.

The purple haired guy also looks REALLY feminine. : U

[katanatildawn]

hm... yes, I can see where you're going with his feet and thigh (I actually noticed the thigh as i was putting it up here). the purple-haired guy is supposed to be effeminate. (Blame his father, lean frame, well developed thigh muscles and long purple hair). as for polar... I cant see what you mean... his elbows are already practically against his sides.... 0n0 though yes... the gameboy did get too close to his face... i think that's why it got angled odd too...

[Susiron]

Hrmm, now that I look at the other guy, they both look rather feminine.
Actually, the one with blue hair looks even more feminine than the purple. The eyes are especially girly.

Even if a guy is girly looking, you should still try to define them as /male/ more.
People get so skewed into making their guys look girly, that they forget to actually learn male facial construction. P:l