Our Aspiring Writers League (O.A.W.L)

[*~.Imagination.~*]

Well I'm glad it helped! ^.^ Heres my opening line- any opinions? Crititc?

From the mind of an imaginative writer, and the unique talent of a confused Silvertounge, a Goddess was born......

Fake Edit- XD Okay, so now I realize that it was pretty stupid to post that since its only one line, and there really isn't much too critic or help. XD Oh well...

[seeker,]

So uh. I started on my story once again. And I'm really proud of it. Anyone want help me out by critiquing and editting it for me? :3

[Lasesi]

So uh. I started on my story once again. And I'm really proud of it. Anyone want help me out by critiquing and editting it for me? :3

I can! Though depending on length it might take me a while ^_^ (got classes etc)

[violacherry]

I want to!

[seeker,]

Well. By started I mean. I literally only have the prologue down and a good bit of the first chapter. I just want to know how I could improve my writing skills before moving on in the storyline.

[mr.kingrichard]

Username: Mrs. Liz Knox
What will we call you: Anything, but if I must specify one, just call me Liz
What are your goals as an author? Actually finish a book
Publish a book before the age of 18
Publish a book at all
Can you give us a sample of your writing?
"Okay, so, my name is Neil Darion Hanson. I’m one of the few elemental kids who was actually born to the people I live with and not adopted. I’ve got brown hair (from my dad), gold eyes (from my mom), and pale skin (from both of them). I also wear glasses (again, from my dad). I don’t act like either of my parents, though. That’s probably because I’m pretty much a loner, unlike my parents who are pretty gregarious (big word!). I go to Mendeleev Middle School like any kid who’s in 6th to 8th grade around here. Most of ‘em are elemental kids, but a few are normal." (From Introduction Book for Periods, Groups, and Families)
Are you currently working on any books?
Yes, Periods, Groups, and Families, a book-series about the elements as people.
Why do you want to join?
To see if there's anyone who'd actually enjoy reading my stuff and to see if there's anyone who shares a like mind with me.
Do you have published books yet?
Nope.
Do you wish to find a "writing partner"?
Yes please.
What Role(s):
What do you mean by that?
What's your favorite Genre?
Fiction of any kind, but I've been getting into LGBT fiction.
What kind of books do you write?
Now it's LGBT fiction, but any kind of fiction I'll write. Just nothing dealing with magic, I'm not really skilled in that area.

[uhtan]

To Imagination: Form looks good, definitely will use
TO Lassei: SOmetimes. What I do then is I give them a really strong characteristic that;s hard to accidentally write out, that defines each from the other. Sounds dumb but it works for me.

[mr.kingrichard]

So um...do I have to be accepted before I can post or anything or can I post without being accepted?

[*~.Imagination.~*]

XD not sure honestly.

Hey, can anyone give me some critic on my Goddess Entry so far? Preferably someone not entering, but either way is fine really ^.^ Just reply or PM me ad I'll send what I have so far.

[mr.kingrichard]

I'll take a look at it, Imagine! I know I'm new here but if you'd like for me to look at it I'll do it for you.