Our Aspiring Writers League (O.A.W.L)

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What should our mascot be (Specify in posts)

A Selection of book characters (specify in post)
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19%
An Anthro
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19%
Ancient Deity (specify)
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An Ancient Deity
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Animal (Specify)
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Different Story Characters
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Other (Specify)
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An Animal
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Other
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Re: Our Aspiring Writers League (O.A.W.L)

Postby Redwall » Tue Jan 03, 2012 4:59 pm

serenityhazel wrote:So, said god/goddess is who ever we make up??
It can be some random person, or thing..
For example,

Carnitine, goddess of war. -blahblahblah-

(Yeah, there is a monster can sitting next to me.. ._.)

Something like that? lol


I believe so!(:
Revolving around something to do with writing/reading/this club/etc. I think.
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Re: Our Aspiring Writers League (O.A.W.L)

Postby serenityhazel » Tue Jan 03, 2012 5:04 pm

Redwall wrote:
serenityhazel wrote:So, said god/goddess is who ever we make up??
It can be some random person, or thing..
For example,

Carnitine, goddess of war. -blahblahblah-

(Yeah, there is a monster can sitting next to me.. ._.)

Something like that? lol


I believe so!(:
Revolving around something to do with writing/reading/this club/etc. I think.

So a totally fictional made up god or goddess..
gotcha..
Just want to make sure I get this straight I'd like to try my hand at something such as this.. thank you for your help ^^
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Re: Our Aspiring Writers League (O.A.W.L)

Postby *~.Imagination.~* » Wed Jan 04, 2012 7:38 am

Yeah, I'm working on mine now ^.^ Its so fun to have so few limitations!
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Re: Our Aspiring Writers League (O.A.W.L)

Postby uhtan » Wed Jan 04, 2012 9:09 am

I agree... I have another question: Presently, I have two stories that I'm working on, but I want an objective opinion on them. I feel that people who know me really well are going to say they are better than they actually are.
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Re: Our Aspiring Writers League (O.A.W.L)

Postby Lasesi » Wed Jan 04, 2012 12:43 pm

Follow.your.heart<3 wrote:I agree... I have another question: Presently, I have two stories that I'm working on, but I want an objective opinion on them. I feel that people who know me really well are going to say they are better than they actually are.



What kind of opinion are you looking for? :) I'd be happy to read it! How long is it? If it's long it might take me a while to get round to reading all of it as college just restarted for me and everything ^_^ But also just warning you... if you want my honest and true opinion, i might be a little bit harsh... just warning? But I've been told i do give out useful criticisms ;3
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Re: Our Aspiring Writers League (O.A.W.L)

Postby Hawk ♥ Hunter » Wed Jan 04, 2012 2:04 pm

Username:Hawk ♥ Hunter
What will we call you: Hawk or Hawky would be great ^^
What are your goals as an author? Get Good Feedback
Make more then 20-40 chapters
Maybe even sell one of my stories one day? :)
Can you give us a sample of your writing?
Half-Blood Prologue wrote:She left the den,actually dragged her self out of the den and looked at the grizzly scene.The once white snow now had large pools of red and dead cats of both clans,she looked around frantically before seeing the body of her mate not to far from the nursery with it's stomach slit and throat slashed.It was official,she was ruined...she had nothing to live for.Then too she joined the dead bodies as a dark pelted warrior came from behind and slashed at her and knocked her down to the ground.He let out a smirk before biting down on her neck and letting her blood turn the snow red.
At the end of the battle the two clans were able to learn about the two lover's love and their kits.Both the clans reached a agreement to let each clan have the same gender kit as there parent was.Snowclan gained a light gray she-kit with darker stripes and white paws and named her Dawnkit.Brokenclan took in the other,a large for his young age sized tom with a dark gray pelt with black paws and stripes with icy blue eyes named Frozenkit.

Last part of my story Half-blood
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Are you currently working on any books?Half-Blood :U
Why do you want to join? Because it would be great to get some advice,chat,get idea's, and tips from other authors.
Do you have published books yet? No...but I hope soon
Do you wish to find a "writing partner"? Maybe...in a different series maybe or I just really really need help in Half-Blood.
What Role(s): Maybe editor?
What's your favorite Genre? Fiction...I just find interest in such books ^^
What kind of books do you write?Fiction...might write a non-fiction sometime but for now I stay with fiction.

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Re: Our Aspiring Writers League (O.A.W.L)

Postby MBRShorse » Wed Jan 04, 2012 2:09 pm

Hunter, you are accepted! Welcome!!!! :)
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Re: Our Aspiring Writers League (O.A.W.L)

Postby Hawk ♥ Hunter » Wed Jan 04, 2012 2:13 pm

Thank you very much! ^-^

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Re: Our Aspiring Writers League (O.A.W.L)

Postby Snowy.Days » Wed Jan 04, 2012 2:24 pm

Username: Snowy.Days
What will we call you: Snowy c:
What are your goals as an author? (list at least three)
    -Finish all the books I'm currently working on.
    -Publish at least one before I'm in high-school.
    -Write a book that is not in my own made-up world.
    -Write a book that ends with all the main characters dying.
    -Get critism.
Can you give us a sample of your writing? (one paragraph or more)
    Night had come quickly. For a second, the sun had fought for its throne in the sky, its struggling orange beams mixing with the shadows of darkness until it was a writhing mass, hanging in the atmosphere. Then the sun relented and dipped down until it had disappeared, leaving only a few faint streaks of bright color to show it had been there.
    As if it were a signal, one last, echoing chirp rent the air, and then silence pressed down. But night was always a bringer of serenity. Wispy clouds left thin trails of vapor in their wake, pushed by the wind that was always there, swelling its cheeks with a big breath to let loose when it deemed the time was right.
    A crescent moon looked down upon Earth, illuminated in a silvery light that was tinctured with yellow. Its gentle curves were silhouetted against the darkly hued backdrop.
    And then a scream pierced through the air.
    It was in a shrill, high-pitched voice, that was both panicked and frightened. It was a wordless roar, but it stopped as soon as it had started.
    It had come from a little girl.
    She was six, clothed in a two-piece set of pajamas that featured cupcakes with bows and comical smiles, the type of clothing favored by typical young mothers. Her feet were pushed into a pair of slippers with bunny ears that drooped until it touched the carpeted ground beneath her feet.
    Her surroundings were comfortable, all soft edges and blunted points. But her expression was one of fear.
    She was staring into a empty corner. No one had come running at her scream, for her parents had left her with a baby-sitter, who had promptly fallen asleep in front of the TV as soon as the door had snapped closed. After all, it was a wealthy neighborhood, with law-abiding neighbors. What could happen?
    A single light flared high above her. It cast its luminous beams down onto the girl, bouncing off her lush curls. She kept her head down, her eyes now squeezed shut.
    Her heart was racing, thumping wildly in her chest.
Taken randomly from a horror story I'm beginning to write :3
Are you currently working on any books?
Yes. Currently I've been having a thick flow of ideas, so I haven't been working steadily on one book for a while.
Why do you want to join? I think it would be nice to be able to chat with other writers. It is a attractive thought of being able to exchange ideas and tips.
Do you have published books yet? No. I wish c;
Do you wish to find a "writing partner"? Maybe later.
What Role(s): Author
What's your favorite Genre? Hmm. I don't really have one. Anything that catches my eye, I usually read and like. I prefer fantasy and things like that, though.
What kind of books do you write? Fiction... Anything, really. :3 I'm open to trying new things, and I do all the time.
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Re: Our Aspiring Writers League (O.A.W.L)

Postby MBRShorse » Wed Jan 04, 2012 2:27 pm

Snowy, you are accepted!
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