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by Aura » Tue Jan 03, 2012 2:22 pm
Nebulas wrote:It's alright, I expected something similar to that, since it's my first real attempt at humans. I'll take those into consideration.
Yeah well I haven't been drawing humans for very long either (my earliest sketches were horrible, your first attempt is actually quite good). Don't worry, I'm sure you'll improve really quickly!
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by starlord. » Tue Jan 03, 2012 2:32 pm
Aura wrote:Nebulas wrote:It's alright, I expected something similar to that, since it's my first real attempt at humans. I'll take those into consideration.
Yeah well I haven't been drawing humans for very long either (my earliest sketches were horrible, your first attempt is actually quite good). Don't worry, I'm sure you'll improve really quickly!
Thank you! I already know that girls are supposed to be shaped similar to an hourglass. Also, she's supposed to be stocky compared to most females. She's been in the army most of her life. The legs were too short though, I just noticed.
Marmoset, that's so cute! The feet seem a little small though. I love the design, and I think Cloud would be a cute name.
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by Aura » Tue Jan 03, 2012 2:37 pm
@Marmoset
It looks adorable! I live in Australia. Koalas are the awesomest. o3o
The front legs seemed to be splayed out too far in front, and they're a bit narrow and skinny compared to the koala which is more stocky and fluffy. :3 I don't know what a good name would be for it. xD
@Nebulas
If the girl is active, I normally just draw her less feminine and full bodied and more 'toned' or androgynous in body shape, but even then they tend to have at least a slight curve at the waist, with more muscular limbs.
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by A.K.A Raptor » Tue Jan 03, 2012 2:38 pm
Nice, Sorry,can't help with humans, but she is quite well-drawn.
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Crit please :3 Is a Koala, which i need a name for
The feet and legs look a little off on the bone structure, but still very cute,
Now, I need help on my improved wolf,now with feet that aren't blobs.
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by Aura » Tue Jan 03, 2012 2:40 pm
A.K.A Raptor wrote:The feet and legs look a little off on the bone structure, but still very cute,
Now, I need help on my improved wolf,now with feet that aren't blobs.
Would you like me to redline? owo
I am carefully avoiding drawing what I should be drawing. xD
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by starlord. » Tue Jan 03, 2012 2:43 pm
Aura wrote:@Nebulas
If the girl is active, I normally just draw her less feminine and full bodied and more 'toned' or androgynous in body shape, but even then they tend to have at least a slight curve at the waist, with more muscular limbs.
Thank you for all the tips. I'm still working on her stats, so her character design is still a WIP.
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