Artist Army {old thread}

[Oddly Shaded]

Any crit?

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character (c) Harlequin

I really love this Cheesie!! But the back leg that is lifted is atually being... dragged. it should be shorter from the top section of the leg. So really that goes the same with the far front leg. But it would be lifted more and bent Other than that. Wonderful. The shading is amazing and Harlequins characers are just simply gorgeous as is so. Excellent job :3

[brian emo]

https://join.me/157-402-568

Streaming doodles if anyone wants to watch/request ^^
It's alright if I post this, isn't it?
If not I can delete it. xD

edit: new code~
sorry, something was wrong with my tablet and I had to restart my computer. :b
https://join.me/157-402-568

[Susiron]

If there's no livestream post on this page already, you're fine. xD

[Marmoset]

https://join.me/432-697-121
Im livestreaming, if anyone wants to watch or help out, I would greatly appreciate it

[starlord.]

https://join.me/432-697-121
Im livestreaming, if anyone wants to watch or help out, I would greatly appreciate it

Marmoset, have you not been listening? It takes viewers away from the above livestream to post this, and that's not very kind.

[Susiron]

Im livestreaming, if anyone wants to watch or help out, I would greatly appreciate it

Another livestream I do NOT plan to enter. = _ =

There's a livestream RIGHT above yours, that is currently online.
Either wait until it's finished, or post your link somewhere else.

This is extremely rude.

[starlord.]

http://i1203.photobucket.com/albums/bb390/JaguarTail/image001.jpg
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No art has been posted recently that I haven't given a comment and critique on. May I ask for a critique or tips on a human female I've been drawing? (And yes, she's saluting. She's in the army.)

[brian emo]

lol I forgot to save the result of my livestream, but it's apparently a new species thing.
xD

[Marmoset]

Im livestreaming, if anyone wants to watch or help out, I would greatly appreciate it

Another livestream I do NOT plan to enter. = _ =

There's a livestream RIGHT above yours, that is currently online.
Either wait until it's finished, or post your link somewhere else.

This is extremely rude.

:'( I didnt mean anything by it... i thought i could just post a link here. i didnt know there were rules to that

[Aura]

http://i1203.photobucket.com/albums/bb390/JaguarTail/image001.jpg
http://i1203.photobucket.com/albums/bb390/JaguarTail/image004.jpg
http://i1203.photobucket.com/albums/bb390/JaguarTail/image005.jpg

No art has been posted recently that I haven't given a comment and critique on. May I ask for a critique or tips on a human female I've been drawing? (And yes, she's saluting. She's in the army.)

Okay, I'll try and give some critique. (Please note I'm not an expert on humans)
First picture, her face looks a little long. Her torso is also a bit bulky and big compared to the rest of her body. The waist I find a bit long, it should probably end where her shirt ends. You could lower her shoulders a bit, and give her more of a neck. Her legs could be longer in comparison to the rest of the body.
Second picture, once again, long torso and short legs. From the back, women usually have a curve around the waist that could be more defined, rather than just being straight. Her shoulders could be lowered and head raised, in order to have more of a neck.
Third picture, I notice the face being a little too long, even if she has a long face. The nose could be lowered to closer to the mouth than the eyes. She has little neck again. Her shoulders could be wider in comparison to the face which appears too large. She could have more of a forehead.
I haven't given much crit before. I hope you don't find it too harsh, these are just little corrections. Anyway, I hope you find it helpful. ;3 The most major thing I can see is that the face is too long and the legs too short.