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by DoctorDraca » Tue Jan 03, 2012 6:42 am
Thanks, Pastel & Aren. c:
And thanks for the long comment, Atomic Blue. To be honest, the worried look/scratched eye was only applied at the very last moment, so not much thought went into there. Good of you to notice though, and thanks for the suggestions. I'll get working on sad/worried expressions more. Also, I ran out of space on the oekaki, hence why the bottom two are so incomplete. The pointy ears are actually part of the race they all belong to, so that's why they all have them.
Thanks again for taking the time to write those comments, especially since you just woke up. The top left guy's my favourite too, btw.
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by Oddly Shaded » Tue Jan 03, 2012 10:18 am
Nex wrote:Oddly Shaded, I like the facial markings and the red based colour palette you use. You don't draw humans often, if I'm correct, and this really came out nicely. There are some little errors in it, though. Her cheek sticks out far too much, and the her mouth's drawn a little too much to the left (our left). Her breasts also seem a bit too high up. Unless she's wearing a rather uncomfortable push-up bra, they should be somewhat lower and adapting a more natural form. Would you perhaps like a redline on it?
Thank you next for being the only one to actually give me crit on my art. And i'm not a human drawer but i've been practicing this pose way to much XD But a redline would be just amazing. I was looking at the actual picture a moment ago and i was like "Wow.. I did the mouth completely wrong" So if you could redline that would be just wonderful ;3
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by PolarAzulTigris » Tue Jan 03, 2012 12:03 pm
I've held my tongue for a bit, but even if you don't think you have helpful comments. Please try to crit or say at least what you like about the piece, at least ten posts/pictures before you. I see a lot of people looking for crit but passing giving any crit/comments by the statement "Everything has been said." I understand you might not have something for everyone, but when asking please try to help others too. Lets try to help each other out; it makes others feel more compelled to help you after all.
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by Gatanitazul » Tue Jan 03, 2012 12:08 pm
^^Another livestream, trying to finish that two-headed dragon...
^ I didn't realize I wasn't aloud to post a livestream when there was another one going on. There is no rule against it, but I'll respect the fact that could be rude to the other person :) Sorry for taking any possible views away.
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