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A Silent Look On Life || Critics Wanted! || Chapter 5 Up!

Postby fly away. » Sat Dec 24, 2011 8:52 pm

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Re: A Silent Look On Life || Critics Wanted!

Postby Solarize » Sat Dec 24, 2011 10:10 pm

Love it ! I want to know what happens next :P
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Re: A Silent Look On Life || Critics Wanted!

Postby . silent » Sun Dec 25, 2011 12:56 am

I love it! You are a great writer; Can ya write more?
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Re: A Silent Look On Life || Critics Wanted!

Postby fly away. » Sun Dec 25, 2011 7:15 am

I'll write some more soon.
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Re: A Silent Look On Life || Critics Wanted!

Postby fly away. » Sun Dec 25, 2011 4:52 pm

I added to it, I'm actually writing this in a word document, so I have to copy from there, so right now I'm working on it still.
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Re: A Silent Look On Life || Critics Wanted!

Postby . silent » Sun Dec 25, 2011 11:46 pm

Absolutely great! Hm...I couldnt picture Elli doing something bad.
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Re: A Silent Look On Life || Critics Wanted!

Postby fly away. » Mon Dec 26, 2011 1:54 pm

I added to it, and I'm still writing, as we speak.
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Re: A Silent Look On Life || Critics Wanted!

Postby fly away. » Mon Dec 26, 2011 6:05 pm

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Re: A Silent Look On Life || Critics Wanted!

Postby fly away. » Sun Jan 01, 2012 6:35 pm

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Re: A Silent Look On Life || Critics Wanted!

Postby fly away. » Sun Jan 08, 2012 8:02 pm

I'll add to this soon, my laptop has been taken away from me.
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