Our Aspiring Writers League (O.A.W.L)

[MBRShorse]

Horsedream, you are accepted. Thank you for your patience!

[VeritatisSplendor]

Thanks! TheTravelingWriter, I can't help you much beyond saying that it sounds interesting. xD Um, does anyone have any suggestions for how to improve my writing based on the sample I gave?

[Trick;]

I'm sorry if I'm interrupting any discussions, but has any found a literary agent to help them yet? .3. Or at least found an ideal one?

[MBRShorse]

I'm sorry if I'm interrupting any discussions, but has any found a literary agent to help them yet? .3. Or at least found an ideal one?

I haven't even thought about a Lit Agent yet. Lol! I want my book to be thoroughly edited before I start searching, though I would like to find an agent to answer a few questions for me.

[Trick;]

I'm sorry if I'm interrupting any discussions, but has any found a literary agent to help them yet? .3. Or at least found an ideal one?

I haven't even thought about a Lit Agent yet. Lol! I want my book to be thoroughly edited before I start searching, though I would like to find an agent to answer a few questions for me.

Actually, if you find a lit agent that likes the plot and your writing style, I've head most will hook you up with an editor .3.

[MBRShorse]

Hm, maybe I'll look into it. Still want to do some editing, though, since my novel is a train wreck.

[violacherry]

an agent would be nice..........but my books are NOT good enough......i have issues with titles as well...I have the worst titles ever!

[violacherry]

Thanks! i'll send it to you when its done

[violacherry]

heres a link to one of my stories..... its definatly not my best an i have some editting but stiil http://www.chickensmoothie.com/Forum/viewtopic.php?f=57&t=915978

[uhtan]

I wish! Really really wish. And can anyone give me some feedback on the story I gave as my sample? It isn't going to be two separte chapters like it is, there's further till the next chappie, I was just lazy in linebreaks