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Postby SilverKitsune » Wed Dec 28, 2011 10:39 pm

=3 A rare type of Hawk has appeared, this one unlike others is wingless! Also she has two colored eyes and is gendered. (Line credit goes to The Doctor)


If you don't know what a Plague Hound is go on this thread- viewtopic.php?f=52&t=941828&start=0

There are two types of Plague Hounds: Hawks and Crows.

They are very similar. They both resemble a fox and have the same amount of radioactivity in their bodies. Their masks are always lighter than their pelt, and their markings range from freckled to tabby, a wide variety. They both are very good at their jobs and are focused during working hours. Both Hawks and Crows like attention, and are very loyal. They both will only choose one Saviour in their whole lives. After their Saviour has died, they usually will have the radioactive waste drained out of their bodies and they will work with the plague victims or retire to a life of comfort in a sanctuary.


Hawks are the more common Plague Hounds. They have short beaks and wings that look as if they are decaying. They have a keen sense of smell and are known for their cat-like ears. Their pelts are usually on the lighter tone, but that isn't always the case. Hawks are friendly and kind to all, despite their menacing appearance. They are very loyal to their Saviour, and never question a word that he or she says. Hawks like a good stomach rub from time to time. They live between 74 and 140 years.

Crows are less common than Hawks. Their beaks are long and lean, and they have large hollow eyes peering out of their head. They have skinny legs and a fluffy tail. These creatures are known for their fierce loyalty and seriousness on the job. They are friendly only to their Saviour and the sick. They are solitary and do not like to be with other Plague Hounds. Crows prefer darkness to light, and do not like the daytime. Their fur is usually darker than Hawks. If you see a Crow and a Saviour on the street, steering clear of them is your best bet. They live between 122-180 years.


Rules on how to get this pretty girl <3


This will be a story contest in a form type of layout. Each person fills out one form and writes a story based on this hound BUT the story must be a of a Alice in wonderland theme. It must also have Death Door's in it, the most interesting and well planed story will win. =3 Have fun and good luck guys <3 I can't wait to see the entries!


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Re: Special Hawk (up for adoption)

Postby SukarettoYanagi » Thu Dec 29, 2011 2:11 am

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Username-_Safe&Sound_
Hound's name- Morning Glory
Hound's age(20-140)- 20
Hound's Gender-Female
Story-
I bit the deaths door's tail, it shrieked and began to grow. Lucky for me, it died, as do all deaths doors I bite. Little did I realize, that EVERYTHING was getting bigger, the trash can, the tree, everything! After a few minuets, it struck me, hard and fast, like a deaths door's bite. Things weren't growing, I was... SHRINKING! I freaked out and ran, but bring I was so small, I didn't get far... only a few meters in an hour. That night, I made my weiry way to a great, knarrled oak. Flopping, down between the roots, worn out, thirsty, hungry, I tried to go to sleep, didn't work. So I got up and wondered about a bit, tripping over the giant roots. One advantage to being small is that you can find things no one bigger can. I found a small pool of water and began to lap it up thirstily. Finally, my thirst quenched, I made it back around to the root where I first was, but it seemed, smaller. I looked up to see a deaths door in the lowest branch. I let out a rumbling growl. I didn't move. I barked, nothing. I sat down, not realizing, yes, I'm not very observant, that I was eye level with it, it was dead. I snorted in dis contempt and padded off. I hear people screaming and ran iver to see what was the matter, they ran from me. I sadly scuffed my paws to an ally, there, I saw the weirdest deaths door I had ever seen. I barked, it looked down, pleasur wheled inside me, I could kill this one.
"What do think your doing hawk!" it yelled as I reached up to bite it. Startled, I jumped back. It got down and, I guess padded, no no, trotted, that's what it did, toward me. I growled and the fur on the back of my neck rose, till I looked way bigger.
"Hawk, I ain't gon hurt ya!" it said.
I lept forward, biting down hard on its neck. It was my sworn duty to protect the citizen of my town, and that's what I intend in doing, and no talking death door mouse is gonna stop me!

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Re: Special Hawk (up for adoption)

Postby zima. » Thu Dec 29, 2011 3:04 am

Plague of the Heart


Username:
Zalaika

Name:
Plague of the Heart
Plagued Heart

Gender:
Female

Age:
Twenty-Five (25)

Species:
Plague Hound

Personality:
Basic Personality
Plagued Heart is different from other Hawks. She is more like a Crow in a Hawk's body. She isn't the friendliest, and is fairly untrusting. She can be a bit snappy, especially with other Plague Hounds and humans. She's definitely no house pet!
She's sneaky. She can get away with nearly anything ,and knows it. She doesn't often use this skill, though, as she is not sneaky by nature.
She is smart. Plagued Heart is smarter than your average Plague Hound, more than you can imagine. She doesn't deal well with less intelligent PH's, and that's mostly why she despises them so.
Plague of the Heart was an abnormal PH, in that she finished training much, much earlier than most othrs do. Whil most others don't finish well into their twenties, Plagued Heart as finished at fifteen (15).
Plagued Heart is a bit arogant. She feels that she knows more than others, and, though she does, she comes across a bit rude about it.
She doesn't mean to come across rude or arrogant, though. She's naturally sarcastic, adn, being smarter than others, it sounds a bit rude.
But on the inside of her hard exterior, she's kind and loving. She adores her Saviour more than anything, and loves her job.
Her job makes her a bit OCD, though. If she sees a Death's Door Mouse, she cannot help but go afer it until she kills it. She can barely stand the thought of letting one live.

Like{s}
• Knowing
• Secrets
• Being right
• Her Saviour
• Her Job
• Puppies!

Dislike{s}
• Death's Door Mice
• Not knowing
• Kept out of the loop
• Strange places
• Other people
• Other PH's

Strength{s}
• Quick mind and body
• Intelligence
• Listening skills
• Intimidation

Weakness{es}
• Love
• Puppies
• Not knowing

Habit{s}/Quirk{s}
• She is pretty OCD. She lives on a schedule, and doesn't like for it to change
• She needs to know. Whatever it is, she needs to know it.
• She doesn't much like other PH's. They annoy her, and she'll often snap at them.
• She only like her Saviour, and no others.
• Once she sees a Death's Door Mouse, she has to kill it. If she lets it get away, she can barely stand herself.

History:
Prologue
Coming Soon!

Beginning
A mistake.
That's what she was.
They made her wrong, all wrong. She was supposed to be the first of a more advanced Plague Hound, but it didn't work. Not even close.
The scientists' made her, made her to be the first of a more advanced girl of her kind.
But it went wrong. She was supposed to be smaller. Sleeker. Faster. Smarter.
And that happened. But they didn't know the side effects. They didn't know what she would look like.
Until they saw her.

Middle
She started training, only the second day she was alive. They trained her to be strong. To be smart. To be better.
For fifteen years, she trained. She trained endlessly, it seemed, to be the best.
And she was. She was always the fastest racer. The most ruthless hunter. The smartest.
The other PH's despised her. She was different, and different isn't good. It never is.
She left, left to be alone. She had no choice.
And then she fell.
She fell for so long, so long.....
Until she went to a place of pure horror.
She had to cure the King, but she had a different plan. She wanted to kill him. She needed to rid the human's of the Plague, once and for all.
But when the time came, she couldn't. She just couldn't. And she failed them all.

End
She failed. She failed the humans, and helped the Mice. She returned to her home, where the Scientists took her back.
She felt hopeless, until her Saviour came.
And then light dawned on the horizon of her life.


Story-
Falling, falling.......she was falling. Strangely, it didn't give her the sensation she thought it would have. Instead of fearing her death, she closed her eyes, relaxed and peaceful.
She surely didn't want to die, but this peacefulness was wonderful. She had never felt so relaxed. The only problem was that she had a nagging feeling that this was't right, but that was only her nerves. She just needed to relax.
She finaly opened her eyes, looking down. All at once, she suddenly hit the hard floor, and she screamed in pain, though it was more an instinct than because of actual pain. She felt very little.
She stood up, shaking herself. That was strange.... she thought, looking around her. She was in a room, a room covered with what seemed like silly-string. She pressed against one of the walls, though, to find that it was hard and cold.
She glanced around herself again when she heard a scrtching sound. She growled, then crouched as she saw a Death's Door Mouse. She crept towards it, then launched herself, catching the animal with her razor-sharp teeth. She let go of it with a cry as she began to grow, and laid her ears back in fear and wonder as she hit the celing of the room. She snarled, then, and turned her head a ways to see another Mouse. She bit that one as well, then began to snarl and snap at her tail as she began to get smaller and smaller........
She saw a door, and ran to it. She pushed through the wooden door, surprised she hadn't seen it before.
Pleaged Heart looked around herself in wonder, gasping as a Death's Door Mouse walks towards her.
She snarled at the animal, crouching. Her body language was aggressive as the animal smiled. As she focused on it, she noticed that the creature was wearing clothes, like a human.
"Rat," she snarled, "begone, before I kill you!"
The mouse smiled. "Ah, Plague Hound, you should know better. I am not a rat. I am a mouse. A Death's Door Mouse." he swung his cane around, and adjusted his monocule. "And you cannot kill me. Your radioactivity doesn't work here. It is useless."
Plagued Heart's eyes opened wide as the mouse spoke again.
"Now, you are probably wondering why you are here, and what here is.
Well, here is called many things, depending on where you are from. Purgatory, Hell, Devil's Home, the Underworld. Ha, that stupid movie even called it Wonderland, though I'm not sure how they came up with that." He looked Plague straight in the eye. "Now, as to why you are here. You are here to bring the chain back. And before you ask, the Chain is what we call order. It seems that our, uh, ruler, has gone askew. You see, here, in what us inhabitants call Plagued, everyone is Plagued. The problem is when you aren't Plagued, though. See, everything is the opposite here. When you aren't Plagued, then you go crazy with sickness."
Plagued Heart looked at the mouse in wonder. "You're saying.....that I would be bad here?"
"Well, if it was like your home, then yes, if that makes sense. But truly, you spread the Plauge. And that's your job here.
The King has fallen victim to the Non-Plague. He has started to go mad, terribly mad. What you need to do is bite him. And spread the Plague.
The only issue shall be getting to him. He kills anything on sight, and quite brutally, too."
She scoffed. What was the point of this? They didn't really expect her to.....
"And you want me to do something about it, huh?" she asked, narrowing her eyes, yet chuckling.
"Yes, of course. You must help The King take the Plague back into his body. It's the only way."
Her eyes widened. You've got to be kidding me.... she thought. "I'm sorry, but I have to get out of here. I had a few Saviours that were interested in me, and I would really like to have a home soon. So, I wish you good luck with you King, but I really must be getting home."
She gave the DD's Mouse a nod, turned around, and began walking back the way she came. Stupid mouse. He thought that I could save them all.....But I cannot. And I must always hate these creatures, whether they talk or not.
Having made her final decision, she felt good. THis was what needed to happen. Maybe this had all been a dream, or maybe....just maybe.....She should kill the King.
She suddenyl stopped walking. What if this was where all the Death's Door Mice came from? What if, by killing the King, she wiped out every mouse there was?
Yes, yes, this could be where they're all coming from... She smiled to heself, then began walking back to the Mouse.
"You say I must save the King?" he nodded. "Well, then I shall save him, and save you all,"
She followed the mouse through the strange forest, a feeling she couldn't quite decifer in her heart.....
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There is no such world where power does not corrupt
Where hate does not exist
Where death is not a part of life
Fire burns
Wind blows
Water drowns
Grass grows.......
Plague rules.

She suddenly woke. She stood up and shook herself, then looked up at the sky. The nightmare had come again. She didn't know what it meant. But she had a sinking feeling that it had something to do with her plan.
She felt bad, in a way, that she was to destroy every Death's Door Mouse there was. That would mean the end of Plague Hounds, wouldn't it? But the humans were more important. They had always been more important.
Always.
She knew her duty. So why did it feel so wrong?
She blew air out her nose, then shook herself again. This was stupid. She had a job, and she was going to make sure it got done.
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She trudged behind the Mouse, grumbling. She didn't like this plan. Not one bit. What if they were trying to trick her?
What if they knew her plan?
"Remind me, again, why I must walk in chains?" she said.
"Well, we don't want our demented King to know what you're doing here, do we? You are the promised one, and he'll know it. But if you go to him in chains, then he'll think that you are no longer able to cure him, which, in his mind, is killing him.
So we'll sneak you into the castle looking like a prisoner. Then you'll be able to get him, and cure him."
She huffed, her shoulders drooping. This was stupid. Completely stupid.
"So why can't I just barge in there, bite the crap outta this "King", and go home?"
The mice gasped. She whipped around. "What?" she said, looking into the lead mouse's eyes. "What's wrong with that?"
"That," the mouse told her sternly, "would be the most disrespectful thing you could do. Especially with that vulgar language of yours."
She scoffed, raising her head. "You have to be kidding me. Your King is killing nearly everything and everyone he sees, all the while destroying your homes, and you care about being disrespectful?" she asked, both in awe of their stupidity, and in anger.
"Yes." he told her, a note of finality in his voice. "We will not disrespect our King. And that's that." he walked foward once again, his head hel high, his disgusting little nose in the air.
She shook her head in disbelief. This was ridiculous. It was going to be so much harder to kill him now. They had to know her true intentions. There was no other explanation.
"Now, if yo uare done with your disrespect, we must see Crysanthemum."

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Re: Special Hawk (up for adoption)

Postby SilverKitsune » Thu Dec 29, 2011 10:54 am

X3 WOW!! love the entries so far! =D I hope to see a couple more before I can judge <3

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Re: Special Hawk (up for adoption)

Postby Oddly Shaded » Thu Dec 29, 2011 7:21 pm

~Form~
Username- ~*Oddly Shaded*~
Hound's name- Sparkling Sensation
Hound's nickname- Spark | Sparky
Hound's age(20-140)- 45
Hound's Gender- Female
Story-
See here, this girl. She's beautiful right? Just gorgeous. Beautiful wings and normal patterns. She's popular and wanted by the males. But yeah. Thats not me. I'm Sparkling Sensation, but call me Sparky. I'm unlike her. No wings and an outrageous pattern. I'm told to leave the others alone, and it's annoying, but i guess it's just what i need to do. To be silent and let what happens happen. When i was about 20, mabye 25, it was time to find a saviour. But there wasn't a single saviour who was for me. I saw every other Hawk out and loyally following side by side with their saviour. But i'd never find a saviour looking like this. I had to go out to search for the one. I headed on my journey searching for a saviour.

The grass green and the beautiful plague about. Don't worry i'm being sarcastic. But anyway i noticed that i was being followed by a Crow hound. It was kind of small and stalking as crows do. When it trailed off toward a forested area. I had to follow. There was no doubt. It hadn't followed me for miles for no apparent reason! So i followed this small crow hound, that seemed about mid age, before the little thing disappeared. I looked everywhere before i noticed paw prints and a general scent. It lead into a tree hollow, before all gravity was lost. Being pulled upwards i had no chance. The hollow would either end or it would cause me to just go up. Toward the sky. Where i couldn't even use my wings for anything. Because i didn't have any. But when i reached the top, gravity enforced itself once again. I haven't a clue how it worked. But it was there. I know, it's a little awkward right?

I looked around as i stood on the edges of the tree trunk where small legdes were. I looked down hoping that somehow i could just fall and land on the ground before i noticed a door. A big giant black door to the outside of the tree. I knew that i would have to go through it. You know why? There was a sign saying "Enter here" So i was wondering why it didn't say Exit here. But at the time i just crawled my way over. Nudging the door with my paw it opened wide. A land i'd never seen before. Greens and browns and pinks and yellows. Just everywhere. It was beautiful. I wondered why i was there. Did this Crow hound know i was looking for a Saviour? Did the hound want to lead me to the Saviour of my dreams?

I walked along the warm dirt path, watching everthing that moved. There was these crazy little bug type things. They looked like wings, and then there was little flying worms and even a skull looking one. Hawk and crow! But as quick as i'd gone up that Tree Trunk the greens turned to reds, and the browns to blacks. The other colours faded and the bugs disappeared. A saviour stood in the middle of the black and now cold pathway. She had a long black and red dress. "Hello there. My Crow hound lead you here. This is my sanctuary. For all mistreated and saviourless hounds." She said to me. I lowered my head and watched on anxiously. "You must join me. Wingless and unnatural." She said walking forward toward me. I backed away. In no way was i going to stay with this lady. She was not a saviour.

I turned and went to bolt before another group of hounds stopped me. "She's no Hound." The almost chanted. I can't remember to clearly what happened then. Even if it all did happen. But i fell from the sky. Through he black ground. I fell. I remember the pain when i hit the ground. But remember the warmth. The gentle grasp of that girl. I woke up some time later, painful still, but i woke. And i woke to a Saviour. She was just perfect. I reached out and nuzzled the Saviours arm. She patted me gently as she sat with me. Today. She's my Saviour. We couldn't part from that one moment. The one thing i could think of was her.

}{Sorry if its not correct in the whole information area, still understanding these creatures. But i have to try for the beauty.}{
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Re: Special Hawk (up for adoption)

Postby melon » Fri Dec 30, 2011 9:16 pm

Oooh, I definitely want to enter this one. C:
I'll make my entry after New Year's, if you haven't judged by then.
All of these stories are so entertaining! Good luck to everyone!
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Re: Special Hawk (up for adoption)

Postby SilverKitsune » Fri Dec 30, 2011 9:20 pm

^.^ I'm just waiting for a few more entries before judging <3

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Re: Special Hawk (up for adoption)

Postby zima. » Sat Dec 31, 2011 7:09 am

How od you like it so far?
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Re: Special Hawk (up for adoption)

Postby SilverKitsune » Sat Dec 31, 2011 5:51 pm

X3 I love it! 83 Makes me want to read more <3 *story lover* X3

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Re: Special Hawk (up for adoption)

Postby zima. » Sat Dec 31, 2011 5:53 pm

Yay! I shall write tons more tommorrow, then. I'm so glad you like it, as I will do most anything to get this one!
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