Dear AJ ~ the first journal ~

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Who is your favourite character so far (changeable)

Crystal
4
29%
Kai
3
21%
Midnight
6
43%
Cerin
0
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Shade
0
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Zodiac
0
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Kane
0
No votes
Blue
0
No votes
Other (If other specify who by commenting)
1
7%
 
Total votes : 14

Re: Dear AJ ~ the first journal ~

Postby G๏l๔єภєאє » Thu Dec 29, 2011 8:39 am

Dead doggies say what?? how come Erin's got a brother all of a sudden???

there should be a twist in the story, and all of Crystal's family should come back and kill Violet!!! or something like that....
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Re: Dear AJ ~ the first journal ~

Postby Nonexsitent » Thu Dec 29, 2011 9:57 am

The reason Erin's got a brother all of a sudden is because they were looking for her family, so her mother and Father are missing, they found her brother ^.^ Oh yeah and btw love the idea, I'll edit it a bit though...

Dear AJ,
I looked down to see a clawed paw sinking it's claws into my ankle, while dragging me back down I let Elliot go and he was yanked up, I collapsed back on to the floor. The thing stepped into the light, I let out a sigh of relief, because for a moment there I thought it was a creeper, you know out of minecraft, but it wasn't a pretty sight.
It was a dog, covered in blood he had long fangs and his eyes were blood shot and looking straight at me. He looked crazed and he was panting a good'n.
"Help." I called out bravely, my voice echoing around the cavern, I think it was a cavern, or it was a pit, one of those two. The crazy dog lunged for me, picking me up by the throat, I gasped and struggled in his grip, I didn't want the darkness to come back so soon, but my vision was ebbing away.
Then I saw him, my dad stood there glowing in the soft darkness.
"I'm dying again..." I choked, then I realised the crzy dog was still here choking me, so I wasn't dying, well technically I was, but you know what I mean.
"Leave my daughter alone." His voice rung inside my head and the dog let me drop his eyes flicking around the room. The crazed dog whimpered and ran off through the cavern/pit and out of sight in the darkness, I couldn't forget the evil, misty, cold, confused look in his eyes. I felt slightly sad for him.
"Crystal?" Kai's voice called out and I stood up shakidly and stumbled back under the hole and felt myself rise. I waited till my paws touched the grass to collapse and shut my eyes, I was weak get over it.
"What happened?" Erin asked, Elliot by her side.
"I was attacked, then I was saved by my father." I told them breathlessly.
"But our dad's dead." Frost said.
"I know but some how he saved me in there." I explained, Midnight cradled me in his arms and I felt tears slide down my cheek.
"I want to go home." I heard myself mutter in his ear.
"Where I am, will always be your home." Midnight explained and I broke down, crying into his fur, I was just fed up with people trying to kill me and my friends, I wish I had died that night many years ago when Violet killed my family.
We all sat there while I cried, they all looked at me worriedly, Midnight rocking me, shushing me. There and then I just wanted to die.

~Crystal~
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Re: Dear AJ ~ the first journal ~

Postby sparkle.+bballmta » Thu Dec 29, 2011 10:42 am

I like it, u have a stalker now, I may be invisible though *disappears*
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Re: Dear AJ ~ the first journal ~

Postby Nonexsitent » Thu Dec 29, 2011 12:07 pm

sparklecaldwell wrote:I like it, u have a stalker now, I may be invisible though *disappears*

Yay I haz stalker....OMFBS MY STALKER'S A NINJA!!

Dear AJ,
I'm Erin, I love your name and I know I'm not meant to be in Crystal's room at the hotel but, I couldn't help myself, I had to read you, why? Because I thought your were a story book, she always has you in her bag and on the plus side she has stowed away some valuble information in here.
I would pay alot of money to buy this, I enjoyed reading it and since I see Kai has wrote in here, I figure it would be okay for me too.
Just between you and me, Midnight works for a agency called Weather dogs, THEY DO NOT TELL THE WEATHER! In fact they actually are like secret agents, my papa's the boss. Midnight works with Drizzle, Kaito and Coal, Midnight hasn't told Crystal this yet but he was signed as her knight in shining armour, he fell in love with her aswell breaking a coulpe of rules but they are so CUTE <3 together who cares.
Crystal and Midnight are currently visiting the nearby Cinema or something like that, and won't be back till late tonight. After Crystal's break down we found the Valley full of dogs and Cats, rabbits and spiders. We booked some rooms in the hotel and then they went out.
I want to meet a Butterfly Wolf, they are OH SO RARE and OH SO PRETTY! Sorry I had a girly moment there, I'm trying to take Kai's advice and firm up, like be less girly and overcome my fears. ESPECIALLY the one of spiders, I mean we live in a world full of 'em. My Papa and Mama rule over them and I'm PETRIFIED of them.
Oh and how I love to sing...
Sorry I really have to stop being random ^.^

"What are you doing?" Kai asks from behind me and I freeze, I can't bring myself to answer her.
"W-writing in Aj." I replied slowly and Kai gasps marching up to me.
"Say goodbye and hand it here." Kai demands. I better do as I'm told so bye AJ, hopefully we can have another chat sometime.

~Erin ^.^~


Hi Crystal sorry about Erin I found her a tinsy bit too late to save some pages, *begs for mercy* please forgive me. While your gone I'll think I'll have my say too. BEFORE YOU HANG ME!

I miss Shade so much but I think I'm falling for Frost, I mean he has on heck of a bad attitude and he is oh so handsome, Shade is still pretty much on my mind but Frost reminds me so much of him, I think I'm falling for him, and I mean falling hard.
I hope Crystal doesn't mind I mean liks she sometimes she says she doesn't but reading a couple of pages of AJ, I've realised it killed her loads.
I mean she has nearly ran out of pages >.< I can't bear to say goodbye, you're such a good friend to have T.T it will break Crystal up when she runs out of space and pages. I think writing in you is how she lets her emotions flow, I'd like to try it but my journal would end up in flames.
I mean there is somethings you just can't share...So bye AJ, saving the remainding pages for Crystal.!

~Kai
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Re: Dear AJ ~ the first journal ~

Postby G๏l๔єภєאє » Thu Dec 29, 2011 11:06 pm

:o
...no more AJ???.....NOOOOOO!!!!!! THERE MUST BE A SECOND JOURNAL!!!!! [ends caps abuse] *chants* second AJ! second AJ! second AJ!!!!

rememberz me as a stalker!! hehe, us stalkers can all disappear *fades slightly* ....with practise....I must go and practice!! *practices disappearing*
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Re: Dear AJ ~ the first journal ~

Postby DreamCaster » Fri Dec 30, 2011 2:05 am

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Re: Dear AJ ~ the first journal ~

Postby G๏l๔єภєאє » Fri Dec 30, 2011 2:13 am

getting better!! watch! * disappears apart from the feet* *annoyed face* i can't disappear them...MOARE AJ!!!!!
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Re: Dear AJ ~ the first journal ~

Postby Nonexsitent » Fri Dec 30, 2011 4:01 am

~Calypso~ wrote::o
...no more AJ???.....NOOOOOO!!!!!! THERE MUST BE A SECOND JOURNAL!!!!! [ends caps abuse] *chants* second AJ! second AJ! second AJ!!!!

rememberz me as a stalker!! hehe, us stalkers can all disappear *fades slightly* ....with practise....I must go and practice!! *practices disappearing*

Okay
1. there will be a second journal
2. I'll post the link here
3. I lovez my ninja stalkerz they make me happy (love as in a friend way)

Dear AJ,
I read the last page and I can't be bothered to go kill them, I can't believe Midnight kept that secret though, I feel a little hurt. Midnight doesn't know, I know yet so we convinced him (we meaning me, Kai and Erin) to take us to a safe zone.
"I'll take you to the Weather dogs." Midnight had replied to Erin, our plan was coming together nicely, we are trying to make him fess up. So yeah Jet was sent ahead with a message and we all set off, it turns out they aren't actually that far away.
Erin misjudged a slight bit of her info, the team Midnight's in is the Weather dogs the actually agency is call W.W.A.S.A (world wide animal spy agency) pronouced wa-wasa but spelt W.W.A.S.A. Erin's dad should be there of all places but Midnight explained he left sometime ago, meaning things had changed.
They have mini training places all over the world but it turns out the HQ is hidden in...you guessed it a enchanted forest.
Seriously I have had enough of forests. I can't believe our time together is ending >.< I'll miss you, Kai's right writing in you helps my emothions flow, plus I get a kick out of it.

We arrived at the crack of Dawn and Midnight lead us in as the butlers and guards pointed us to our quaters, we were split up me with Erin, Elliot and Haenston, Kai with Jet (who met us there), Drew and Frost (I can't believe she's crushing on him), Zodiac with, Silver, Sophia and Magikon, Zeana with Cerin, Kane and Blue and Midnight with his old friends who we havent't met yet.
Any way we've been assigned as cubs, well everyone except Midnight who is a Alpha. Guess who we saw there though Lidia, you know the dog that never shut up, she couldn't believe her eyes when she saw us.
You know what I was looking forwad to though, a bath, a nice warm bath, I'm going to take one now be back soon.
Hi AJ, Crystal's in the bath and I wanted to talk to you, Me and Elliot are Cubs now how cool is that we get to go on missions if we get chosen by a surperior how awesome. I can't wait to kick so evil butt and get a grove on. Well bye AJ ~Your loving friend Erin
I get in the bath and it happens again, I really need to start locking you in a safe, not that I would anyway I got my first mission soon and I have to go, this is the last page, I'll see you again I hope.

~Crystal signing out for the last time >.<
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Re: Dear AJ ~ the first journal ~

Postby Nonexsitent » Fri Dec 30, 2011 7:12 am

I won't be able to update for a couple of days I'll try and get it done on tuesday sometime after 7 pm so please wait and I'll try and get the new dear AJ, up and running soon (this was wrote via my mum's phone)
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Re: Dear AJ ~ the first journal ~

Postby Nonexsitent » Mon Jan 09, 2012 8:26 pm

My newest journal is out now
Dear AJ2 ~Royal Trouble~
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