We are wolves! ( Comments please )

[. ME]

( I've posted alot of other stories, But I plan to stick to this one, because all the others I lose... And this thought, I will stick to it and post more frequently..And these chapters might be kinda short.... So, yepp, now to the story )

Scarlett:


Ronie:

Pear:

Copper(Front), Flort(Back), Zipper(Middle):


( More images or less images might be, so dont be like " Oh someone else was here! Oh, he wasnt here before! "
Prologue:
Winter looked at her one pup. It was her first, and it was her only. Just then she heard the paws coming in. " Run! We've got to go, There here! " She cried. She grabbed her pup by the scruff and her and Bloo ran. But it was hard to see in the dark; Especially since the moon was blocked out by clouds, and it was night. She accidentally dropped her puppy. " Scarlett! " She cried. She couldnt find her somewhat black colored puppy in the darkness. " Hurry! " Bloo said. But she couldnt identify where he came from, but she ran. Her heart snapped. " Noo...! SCARLETT! " She howled. She continued to run until all the noise died down and she felt alone. Nobody with her. Alone... She let out a howl of sorrow, and then went to sleep.

Chapter 1:

Scarlett stared at the gap. " No.. I must get across. Home is that way... I know.. I know it! " She cried. She took a few steps back, and took a running start. She felt the ground drop beneath her feet, and she did one of her most powerful leaps. " Im not gonna make it " She whispered. But she felt ground. She opened her eyes. She made it. " To the top of the cliff! " She shouted. She ran all the way to the top of the cliff. She was invisible against the black sky, her somewhat black pelt blending in. You could only see her head silhouetted against the moon. She let out a howl of anger, as the cliff ended. No land ahead. " Why?! " She howled as she plopped down. But she heard other wolfs. Lots of other wolfs. She opened her eyes and stared down at the bottom of the cliff. She could just make out shapes of wolves beneath it, pacing around. She could see some look up and try to see her. " I'm here! " She howled at the top of her lungs. This time, they all looked up. Some were white, some were grey, some were brown.... Etc. But they all stared up. Then, a larger wolf, a male, she believed, walked out. He had a scar on his right shoulder. He was a light brown, and he stared up. " Come down! " He barked. She stared down. " Ok... ". She jumped off the cliff. She landed with a loud THUD! " I cant see you! " Plenty of them barked. " Thats because im a darker color. You'll see me perfect in the morning " She whispered. She collapsed down, not even caring if she was invited, and fell asleep.

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[Dogfish]

I'm sorry but this has errors which can make this hard to understand. I've nothing against the idea, or you, it is interesting, as far as I can tell. I hope you continue, just try to fix this to make it easier to understand. Sincerest apologies if I offend you. I can help you fix it if you would allow it.

[Ourpawprints]

basically what dogfish said. The idea is great but it would be so much better if you introduced the characters better and put it in paragraphs.

[. ME]

Yes, I will try to fix anything I find that you find wrong.

And also:

[. ME]

Chapter 2:

Scarlett opened her eyes. The brown wolf was still there, standing straight and tall. There was also a small pup; A white one, who seemed excited to be before a intruder. " Who are you? Who are you?! WHO ARE YOU?!!! " The pup barked excitedly, over and over, until the bigger brown wolf said " Hush up! ". Then he gave her a glance. " Uhh... Er, Um... Im Scarlett. " Scarlett spoke up. " Im Splash Of Rainbow Sunshine! " The tiny puppy yipped. " Im Torn " The brown one growled deeply. " What are you doing in my pack, Scarlett? ". " Err, I believe my mother was one of your members. My father too ". " Who where they? ". " Winter and Chester! ". Torn flew at her, pinning her down in a tight grip. " ACK! " Scarlett cried. " How do you know them?! Scarlett.... You have the name as there puppy, you look like her.. But... " Torn said. He took a huge sniff of her scent. " You might be her.. " The huge wolf jumped off and grumbled away. She turned to Splash Of Rainbow Sunshine. " Im going to call you Splash. And why is he so upset? ". Splash looked at where Torn disappeared. " Oh, My dad, Its just your mentioned in a- " The pup stopped mid sentence. " In a what? " Scarlett said, now eager. " Uh.. I spoke a bit too much already... " The pup called over her shoulder as she trotted away. Greaaaatt, Now I need to find out a secret in this place, and I've been here less than an hour! She thought. She let out a sigh, and took a look around.

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Chapter 3:

Scarlett woke up, a 2nd day without food. She had fallen asleep in the same spot as last time. Her stomach let out a deep growl, screeching for her to find food. She sniffed the air as she got up, and the delicious smell of squirrel filled her nostrils. When she identified where it was, she ran right for it. " Please dont eat me! " A voice squeaked. She stopped; Not just because she had no cornered the squirrel, but because it said something. She looked at it with a questioning look. " Im Moose, And do NOT EAT ME! " It squeaked again. " How can you speak wolf? " Scarlett snarled. Surely this was a dream? " I dunno. I was born that way ". She just stared, and walked away. But she could tell 'Moose' was following her. She turned around. " Stop following me, You dumb talking squirrel! " She snapped. " I WILL eat you! ". She ran for it and pinned it down going for its throat. " Noo!! " He cried. She jumped off. Moose had screeched so loud, every one had made a crowded circle around them. Moose was blending into her leg, so they must have thought she was talking to air. But of course; Torn came in. He picked the squirrel away from her leg. But of course; Moose screamed in his face. " A talking black squirrel? Must be TASTY! " Torn snapped. " NO! Dont eat him! He's... He helped me get here! " Scarlett cried. Torn flicked his eyes at her. " A squirrel helped you here? ". He plopped down Moose. " Yes. His name is Moose! " he said, feeling guilty to lie for a piece of something she would have ate. "Well, Scarlett. He's your responsibility. And if anyone sees him away from your side, We wont only eat him, but I will kill my own daughter! " Torn snarled, and then walked to his 'den'. Scarlett stared at Moose angrily. " This is your fault! " She growled.

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Chapter 4:

Scarlett got up. Her dark coat was invisible since it was night. Moose was sleeping up a tree. She had decided to fall asleep earlier so she could wake up at night. She sank her claws into the soft dirt. Sher perked up her ears, thinking she heard a squeak. She perked them up higher. But this time, She did hear a squeak. Moose's squeak. She ran to the tree he was sleeping in. A brown puppy, who looked like Torn, was shaking the tree. " Dumb pup! Stop shaking that tree! If Moose gets found not being next to me, Splash Of Rainbow Sunshine gets killed! " Scarlett whispered angrily. " I want my sister to die " The tiny pup growled. Of course! She thought. She grabbed the puppy and threw him against the tree with all her might. He let out a ear splitting cry; Which Scarlett was surprised nobody awoke. She grabbed the puppy and whispered into his ear " Do NOT do it again ". She set him down carefully. He shook the tree until Moose fell out. The puppy grabbed Moose and killed him. " No!! " Scarlett howled as loud as she could.Now everybody came out. Scarlett turned around furiously at Torn. " Your dumb pup just killed my friend! " She shouted as she lunged at him. She held him down with all her weight. " It said you've save me, Not end me! " Torn shouted. Scarlett didnt care. She started tearing out his fur, and reopened a wound on his shoulder. She jumped off. She turned around furiously at the pup, who was now eating Moose. She grabbed the pup, and started to rip his throat with her teeth and claws. She sank her teeth as hard as she could into his neck, killing the tiny scrap of fur. Blood covered her face. " There! I did it! " She shouted.

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Chapter 5:

Scarlett had ran away from that pack, to the 'enemy' pack. And secretly... She was in love. In love with a wolf named Ronie. She stared at the wolf from a far. Just tell him! A voice kept screeching in her head. Copper, Flort, And Zipper started to tumble around her paws. Trying to knock her over. She actually liked these puppies, More than Splash, they were fun.But whenever she thught of Splash, she thought of the images of Torn tearing her to shreds. " Aha! There you are! ". Scarlett could hear Pear, Also the pups mother and leader of the pack, angry shout. " Dang you litte pups! Back to the den! Now! " She snapped. " Awh, Mom, we were playing! " Flort whined. " Give them a break, Pear. Im sure you were like that when you were a pup too! " Scarlett said with a hint of laughter.cBut Pear gathered them up and she put them into her den. As she as Scarlett turned back around Ronie was right there. " Woh! Shock me much? " She said, almost jumping up. She looked into his deep blue eyes. " Heh, Sorry. Would you like to go hunting? " He asked. " Er.. Umm, A... Sure! " She said very edgy. He gave her a odd look, and then they headed out into the deeper woods where the prey was. Soon enough they came back with much prey. 10 in total ( 2 squirrels, 4 rabbits, and 4 birds ). Nows the chance! She thought. " Er... Um, Ronie....I uh... I.. " She said. He turned to her. " Love you " She said, but it came out more like " Lrmh Hrrmy ". He tilted his head. " Love you... " She sighed. He stared at her. " R-R-Really? Me... Me, Uh.. Too! " He said shakily.

Chapter 6:

She stared. " I have ever since I layed my eyes on you....Pear.... She kept telling me to ask you, but I was afraid. " Ronie continued on. Pear was also Ronie's mother. " You made me feel if we were together, Like other wolves, We wouldn't wait the lingest amount of times to have puppies. We would know we'd be together forever. " Scarlett said, starting to shuffle her paws. " Why dont we.... But we must run away. Pear said if were together..... We'll have to be separate for 2 months! " Ronie said. " She doesnt do it to others, but she says since were so 'young' ". " What?! She's 1 or 2 years older than us.. And if you think, its not very long! " Scarlett said angrily. " Run. Lets run ". They both ran off into the woods, deeper into the territory, the deepest where no others had been. They didn't wait to have pups. Scarlett had gotten pregnant as soon as they found the perfect place. They lived on for the longest amount of time, together, with each other.

[. ME]

( Thats the end... Sorry guys, Gonna work on more story ideas )