Life of a teenage were-wolf

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Re: Life of a teenage were-wolf

Postby AninaAna » Thu Dec 22, 2011 4:16 pm

One word and wow doesn't cut it.......... EPlC how do you do that you've completely turned the story around to face that way *points into lions mouth* totally epic...... Love it
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Re: Life of a teenage were-wolf

Postby xxazul63xx » Sun Dec 25, 2011 4:20 am

Kia~

Kia opened her eyes, she was stiff and the was a dull pain all over her body. She was laying on a cold stone floor of what seemed to be a jail cell, only it didn't have bars. She propped herself up on one elbow, and looked around drowsily. Then she suddenly remembered what happened, "Where am I?" she whispered, standing up. Kia walked towards a large metal door and shook the handle, it was locked. That's when she noticed her clothes, she was wearing a dull gray, long-sleeved shirt and some baggy black pants. Something cold was pressed around her neck, Kia reached up to touch it and felt a burst of pain on her finger tips. She gasped and drew her hand back sharply, she noticed a dirty mirror on one side of the cell. Kia walked towards it and saw a metal ring around her neck, she reached up to touch it again and got the same burst of pain, she couldn't touch it without getting zapped. Suddenly the door opened and a man with sandy blond hair came in. He was wearing a white lab coat and black shoes, "Who are you?" Said Kia warily, eyeing him cautiously. "I'm Dr.Delon, come with me, but first let me put these on." He said, holding out some handcuffs. Kia, narrowed her eyes, "I am not putting those on..........." she said coldly. "I would prefer that you do." he said "You see, with a click of a button, I can make your collar send a painful shock through your body, and I really don't want to do that." Something about the way he spoke made Kia very uncomfortable, he spoke to her as if she was an old friend. Kia held out her wrists and Dr.Delon placed the handcuffs on them, locking them with a key. "Now come with me." He murmured, motioning out the door. Kia followed him down a hallway with a few doors, behind one she could her a blood-chilling screech. "What's going on in there?" she asked. Dr.Delon shot her a glance and stayed silent. They walked for a few minutes before reaching a large metal door with two guards with electric sticks on either side. Dr.Delon nodded to one of the guards, the guard pushed up a metal bar and jammed a key into the pad-lock, twisting it to one side. He opened the door cautiously, and led Dr.Delon and Kia into the room. Kia guessed it was some kind of cafeteria, it had long metal tables and a bar with a chunky, mean looking lady who served them mush. Many kids around Kia's age were wandering around, being watched by some guards who were standing by all the doors. Dr.Delon took off Kia's hand cuffs, "Eat something, a guard will escort you to your room in an hour." He said, then walked out of the room, closing the door behind him. Kia's sensitive ears picked up a click as they locked the padlock and a clang as they put the metal bar back. She massaged her wrists and looked around, all the kids looked between 14 and 20. Some were shooting her suspicious glances, while others just ignored her. Kia swallowed nervously, there were a few that looked like they could snap her neck with a twist of the wrist, she made a mental note to steer clear of them. She walked over to the bar and grabbed a tray, she held it out for the cook to fill it. The lady scooped some greyish mush into Kia's tray and handed her a piece of stale bread and cheese. Kia sat at a table, by herself in the corner, she wanted to keep a low profile. The gray mush smelled of rotten squash and eggs, Kia shuddered and gagged slightly. She picked up the plastic spoon and poked suspiciously at the soft grey mush, she always thought that this type of food was only in movies, "guess not..." she muttered under her breath. She looked up , a gang of muscular boys and girls were looking at her. All of them had a smirk on their faces and the leader, a monstrous girl with with dirty blond hair, was cracking her knuckles loudly. Kia froze when she noticed that they were walking towards her, with menacing looks in their eyes.
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Re: Life of a teenage were-wolf

Postby Xanga » Sun Dec 25, 2011 7:24 am

Love it!
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Re: Life of a teenage were-wolf

Postby AlexiM01 » Sun Dec 25, 2011 8:31 am

(your'e really good:) thanks for posting awesome writings for everyone to read:))
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Re: Life of a teenage were-wolf

Postby AninaAna » Sun Dec 25, 2011 8:34 am

Looks almost as if you have experienced jail time in ze flesh*squinted suspiciously* lol joks
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Re: Life of a teenage were-wolf

Postby xxazul63xx » Sun Dec 25, 2011 9:13 am

lol funny
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Re: Life of a teenage were-wolf

Postby Xanga » Sun Dec 25, 2011 10:12 am

Lolz thats nice doggo.
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Re: Life of a teenage were-wolf

Postby AninaAna » Mon Dec 26, 2011 12:21 am

Thankyou *smiles endearingly*
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Re: Life of a teenage were-wolf

Postby G๏l๔єภєאє » Wed Dec 28, 2011 8:32 am

moar??? now???
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Re: Life of a teenage were-wolf

Postby AninaAna » Wed Dec 28, 2011 11:50 am

C'mon where are ya?
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