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Re: Artist Army

Postby Yuki. » Sat Dec 24, 2011 7:23 pm

saikiyo wrote:hows this? it's a contest piece

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Damn! It was good while you were drawing it, then fter! Y U NO GIVE ME SOME OF UR SKILLS?
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Re: Artist Army

Postby maetropa » Sat Dec 24, 2011 7:39 pm

~*_MoonStar_*~ wrote:
saikiyo wrote:hows this? it's a contest piece

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*Squees and dies*

Wings look a bit off to me, but otherwise it seems good <3
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Re: Artist Army

Postby wickedpup » Sat Dec 24, 2011 7:57 pm

saikiyo wrote:hows this? it's a contest piece

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I love the shading and style that you use. <3 'Tis a pity I can never watch Join-me when I'm at home. :<
The things I see off in anatomy are the back legs. Hind feet don't have dew claws and I see you put them here when they shouldn't be there. Their left leg's foot is a tad too far back,it would really hurt the creature. x3 Lastly,the feet are too close to the body with the knee positioned like that. c:
I really adore the poise,it's real unique!
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Re: Artist Army

Postby Aura » Sat Dec 24, 2011 8:16 pm

I suppose it's okay if I post some of my Secret Santa's? It's due tomorrow, I don't know if my recipient stalks this place.
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Re: Artist Army

Postby Kirimi » Sat Dec 24, 2011 8:24 pm

Aura wrote:I suppose it's okay if I post some of my Secret Santa's? It's due tomorrow, I don't know if my recipient stalks this place.
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are dos dem chibs? OuO
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Re: Artist Army

Postby Aura » Sat Dec 24, 2011 8:28 pm

Kirimi wrote:
Aura wrote:I suppose it's okay if I post some of my Secret Santa's? It's due tomorrow, I don't know if my recipient stalks this place.
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are dos dem chibs? OuO


Yes. <3
I know the anatomy is a bit dodgy but hopefully it's still cute.
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Re: Artist Army

Postby wickedpup » Sat Dec 24, 2011 8:31 pm

@Aura; Hope you don't mind some critique! C8
The top one is absolutely precious! I'm guessing it's an "extreme" chibi with the legs so I'd suggest making the head larger. You might want to lower the neck more,it's quite lanky right now. ^^ That tail is so adorable and fluffy btw.
The bottom one is also very cute! C8 Their front right leg shouldn't be pointing out though,maybe a bit but never a fall frontal like that. The back legs are bent in a bit as well,try straightening them out a TINY bit. ^^

Overall I love your style,everything is adorable! <3
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Re: Artist Army

Postby Aura » Sat Dec 24, 2011 8:53 pm

laelia; wrote:
@Aura; Hope you don't mind some critique! C8
The top one is absolutely precious! I'm guessing it's an "extreme" chibi with the legs so I'd suggest making the head larger. You might want to lower the neck more,it's quite lanky right now. ^^ That tail is so adorable and fluffy btw.
The bottom one is also very cute! C8 Their front right leg shouldn't be pointing out though,maybe a bit but never a fall frontal like that. The back legs are bent in a bit as well,try straightening them out a TINY bit. ^^

Overall I love your style,everything is adorable! <3


Thank you so much for your critique! I agree, I noticed the neck looked a bit weird but I didn't really know how to fix it.
The weird wonkiness with the legs is a bad habit of mine. >.< I'm trying to fix my anatomy but it doesn't work out very well.
Anyway, thank you so much! I love critique! *hugs*

Also, I think I'm starting to develop a 'style' now. Previously I was struggling to find it but I think it's working out quite well now and becoming more distinctive.
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Re: Artist Army

Postby Kirimi » Sat Dec 24, 2011 9:00 pm

Aura wrote:
laelia; wrote:
@Aura; Hope you don't mind some critique! C8
The top one is absolutely precious! I'm guessing it's an "extreme" chibi with the legs so I'd suggest making the head larger. You might want to lower the neck more,it's quite lanky right now. ^^ That tail is so adorable and fluffy btw.
The bottom one is also very cute! C8 Their front right leg shouldn't be pointing out though,maybe a bit but never a fall frontal like that. The back legs are bent in a bit as well,try straightening them out a TINY bit. ^^

Overall I love your style,everything is adorable! <3


Thank you so much for your critique! I agree, I noticed the neck looked a bit weird but I didn't really know how to fix it.
The weird wonkiness with the legs is a bad habit of mine. >.<

Legs+neck=LLAMA :D NEIGH NEIGH. But still cute................nao make me one 8D
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Re: Artist Army

Postby Aura » Sat Dec 24, 2011 9:12 pm

Kirimi wrote:
Aura wrote:
laelia; wrote:
@Aura; Hope you don't mind some critique! C8
The top one is absolutely precious! I'm guessing it's an "extreme" chibi with the legs so I'd suggest making the head larger. You might want to lower the neck more,it's quite lanky right now. ^^ That tail is so adorable and fluffy btw.
The bottom one is also very cute! C8 Their front right leg shouldn't be pointing out though,maybe a bit but never a fall frontal like that. The back legs are bent in a bit as well,try straightening them out a TINY bit. ^^

Overall I love your style,everything is adorable! <3


Thank you so much for your critique! I agree, I noticed the neck looked a bit weird but I didn't really know how to fix it.
The weird wonkiness with the legs is a bad habit of mine. >.<

Legs+neck=LLAMA :D NEIGH NEIGH. But still cute................nao make me one 8D

Bwahahaha xD Oh yummy llama-ness.
I better get to work now.
Hopefully I can make it in less than an hour... I'll see, humans take me AGES.
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