Artist Army {old thread}

[Alexander White]

what is it with everyone's unreadably bright font? can we please dim it a little so the visually challenged don't go blind straining to see what it says?

[lululizzy23]

@Nex
Thank you for the link, its really helpful!! c:
I really like the drawing, its lot better then what I can do (:

Well, im excited that im getting a tablet soon, but im also excited since there is going to be a early foal to be born soon at the barn! So I decided to draw a little picture of a foal. This is my first attempt at drawing anything remotely close to a foal, im actualyl pretty pleased with it c:

Okay, the only thing I will say right now is the legs are too stiff...try making one or two of them bent just slightly, right now it just looks, odd

[DojiMiko]

what is it with everyone's unreadably bright font? can we please dim it a little so the visually challenged don't go blind straining to see what it says?

Oops, I apologize. It's just it matches Applejack's flank...WOW I'm a nerd. XD

[wickedpup]

@ Savannah ; Here ya go.~
I'm sorry I suck at arms lol. With female you want to accentuate their hips,and chest areas,as they are more fatty. I marked the basic joints as well. c: With the clothing I redlined it slightly as it was too stiff,you want a cape to flow since they are usually thin. You have the basic shape of the body down though. C8 You might want to try and make your lines flow more though,they look a bit boxey,and fake. Like you used vectors,and those aren't the best unless you make them very free and taper them. ^^

[christa renz]

Thank you for the help :) I'll keep all that in mind. Maybe now that my pen pressure works I can figure out how to get flowy lines ^-^
Thanks for the tips on the body, too :D

[Minimin]

http://fc01.deviantart.net/fs70/i/2011/ ... 4k088h.jpg

I finished a picture of GreyFeather and plan on coloring it. The background is supose to be him climbing up something like a rock/boulder or clif so thats why i made his other leg posed like that. I was going to animate it for christmas where he flicks his tail blinks, feels snow fall and looks up and more snow falls. ^^

Any advice, critics, or just plain comments?

[DojiMiko]

Anyone good with hands that can help me???

@Nacht- I think it looks pretty good! ^^ Once I find my tablet pen [LOL] I'll red line it for you!

[beloved.]

Livstreaming

Applejack; if you'd like I could help you out.

@ Meka; trying to edit the picture a bit so we can see the lines?
Because of how my comp is set up; personally I can really see the lines OTL

[DojiMiko]

@beloved That would be wonderful :D Maybe after your livestream [I'll probably be on for a llloooonnnngggg time] I could put up a livestream and show you my problem??

[Minimin]

@Beloved.

That is my biggest problem. Getting the lines darker, but i'll try. ^^