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Re: Artist Army

Postby Nacht » Sat Dec 24, 2011 10:10 am

Hi there everybody!I haven't posted here before but I was wondering what critic you have on This sketch I just finished?I couldn't really get the head shape to work out and The nose and ears fail so any help would be appreciated.It's my first time drawing a weasel so I need a bit of help with anatomy.And feel free to red line if it will help you explain things.
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Re: Artist Army

Postby CaptiveLegacy » Sat Dec 24, 2011 10:15 am

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Thank you for the link, its really helpful!! c:
I really like the drawing, its lot better then what I can do (:

Well, im excited that im getting a tablet soon, but im also excited since there is going to be a early foal to be born soon at the barn! So I decided to draw a little picture of a foal. This is my first attempt at drawing anything remotely close to a foal, im actualyl pretty pleased with it c:

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Re: Artist Army

Postby Mr.Milo » Sat Dec 24, 2011 10:43 am

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@Nex
Thank you for the link, its really helpful!! c:
I really like the drawing, its lot better then what I can do (:

Well, im excited that im getting a tablet soon, but im also excited since there is going to be a early foal to be born soon at the barn! So I decided to draw a little picture of a foal. This is my first attempt at drawing anything remotely close to a foal, im actualyl pretty pleased with it c:

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congrats getting your new tablet!^^ but i think your horse looks very good though the body should be a bit longer as well as the neck but its very good for a mouse!
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Re: Artist Army

Postby DojiMiko » Sat Dec 24, 2011 10:50 am

Anyone good with hands that can help me???

@Nacht- I think it looks pretty good! ^^ Once I find my tablet pen [LOL] I'll red line it for you!
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Re: Artist Army

Postby christa renz » Sat Dec 24, 2011 10:53 am

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So I recently lost an art contest, and I'd like to know how I could improve on drawing pictures such as this :)
I'd try to critique someone else's post, but I can't draw animals ad I would do more harm than good trying to comment on a drawing of one x.x
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Re: Artist Army

Postby wickedpup » Sat Dec 24, 2011 10:58 am

@ Carrie ;I hope you get a good one,do NOT cheap out on it. Try to get a bamboo or wacom if you can,they're very sturdy. C:
With the foal,the legs seem a bit stiff,try look at pictures and giving the body some freedom. It'll look 100% better if you give it a sort of "motion" in the pose. I suck at horses though so not much I can do. ^^;

@ Pastel; I like the pictures,especially the corgi! C: The 2nd ones position is a little bit awkward though. Try drawing a line to keep the feet level,as the dog's left leg is too high up/short. I could do a redline if you want. C: The dog is also lacking a chest,it's not a cat you see so it has a big sturdy chest like so As you can see here the dog/wolf's chest is spacious,and fluffier. The head is a bit too large,but that's very easy to fix digitally. x3

@ Savannah; Want a redline? C: I can whip one up real quick if you want.

I'm looking for some harsh critique/redlines on this anthro(Warning,furred nude). It's supposed to be an old fursona of mine redone so yeah the design sucks. x3

Also anyone here done iScribble? I want to sign up but it doesn't want my email address. :|
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Re: Artist Army

Postby DojiMiko » Sat Dec 24, 2011 11:00 am

@laelia Your colouring is AMAZING! 0.0 I want to be able to colour like that! What type of tool do you use, or just the regular brush tool?
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Re: Artist Army

Postby christa renz » Sat Dec 24, 2011 11:02 am

Laelia: I would love a redline :D Thanks so much!
Also, you can use my iScribble account if you want, none of my friends can sign up so it's pretty much useless for me x3 PM me for the email address I used.
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Re: Artist Army

Postby wickedpup » Sat Dec 24, 2011 11:06 am

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@laelia Your colouring is AMAZING! 0.0 I want to be able to colour like that! What type of tool do you use, or just the regular brush tool?

Why thank you! :D It just takes a lot of practice.~ I use paint tool Sai and use many layer of overlay,luminosity,and multiply. The brush I use is just labeled Brush on my version and I set it to about 70% opacity and put pressure sensitivity to detect opacity,blending,and size. C: On this one I used a light desaturated pink for the shadows,and just white with varying opacity for shine. It takes me about 10-15 minutes to shade.

@ Savannah; Okay,I'll get right on it! C: Also,messaging. ^^
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Re: Artist Army

Postby DojiMiko » Sat Dec 24, 2011 11:12 am

Nacht wrote:Hi there everybody!I haven't posted here before but I was wondering what critic you have on This sketch I just finished?I couldn't really get the head shape to work out and The nose and ears fail so any help would be appreciated.It's my first time drawing a weasel so I need a bit of help with anatomy.And feel free to red line if it will help you explain things.
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Here's my redline...I'm not very good at rodents though. LOL I think it looked better originally, sorry if this didn't help D:
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@laelia Your welcome, you deserved the compliment! Thanks for telling me :D
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