Life of a teenage were-wolf

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Re: Life of a teenage were-wolf

Postby G๏l๔єภєאє » Fri Nov 25, 2011 7:14 am

oh....my....GOD!!!! MORE MORE MOOOOORE!!!!!!!!!!!! i haz 2 knooooowwww!!!!! *stalking*
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Re: Life of a teenage were-wolf

Postby feathertail245 » Fri Nov 25, 2011 10:18 am

*stalks*
95% of girls would cry if Justin Beiber bunjee jumped of a bridge and his cord broke and he died. 4% would jump of after him. copy and paste this into your siggy if your are the 1% hiding ina cave with scissers laughing evily
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Re: Life of a teenage were-wolf

Postby xxazul63xx » Mon Dec 12, 2011 1:40 am

(Yes I know Kia's entry is short but I've added a new main character)

~Kia~
Kia stood there, staring at him.
"Jay............" she breathed her eyes wide.
Jay scrambled backwards his eyes wide with horror.
"Jay! wait!" called Kia, but it was too late, he had already ran into the forest. Kia stood there, one paw raised, Why..... why did it have to be the full moon? She hung her head and a small pearly tear drop slid down her cheek.
"How could I let this happen?" She murmured. She lay down and rested her head on her paws, the full moon shining down on her fur.


~Justin~
Justin looked at the girl he was slow-dancing with, "Sorry, my mom was going to pick me up later, I have to go........." he told her. Then girl blinked then shrugged, "Alright, call me later?" she asked. "Sure!" he called over his shoulder, Full moon tonight have to hurry. He went over to Dara "Come on gotta go outside" he whispered. She nodded, "Where's Kia?" asked Justin. "Can't see her, maybe she left already........" suggested Dara. "Oh well.... lets go." he said. They ran outside and into the forest, they stopped in a small clearing. "Ten minutes till the moon rises. We've got time...." said Dara sitting next to the tree. Justin sighed Where's Kia? he was getting worried. "Five minutes" announced Dara. Justin started pacing, "Where is she?" he muttered, "Stop worrying, she's probably fine!" Sighed Dara "One minute!" There was a loud thrashing sound, as if someone was running through the forest. "Kia!" gasped Justin. "Five, four, three, two, one!" Said Dara. Justin closed his eyes and let the full moon change him, Dara did the same. Now two wolves stood there, Justin was a dark brown wolf with varying shades of brown and a white stomach. "Dara, I need to find Kia!" He said, running towards the thrashing sounds. He ran into a clearing where he found the trembling wolf-form of Kia, "Kia...... What happened?" She shook her head slowly with out looking at him. Justin could smell something, it was Jay's scent. "Oh no..............." he whispered
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Re: Life of a teenage were-wolf

Postby xxxalksdfj » Mon Dec 12, 2011 1:45 am

It looks good :)
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Re: Life of a teenage were-wolf

Postby G๏l๔єภєאє » Fri Dec 16, 2011 11:38 pm

awesome sauce!!!!!! :clap: :thumbup: :D
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Re: Life of a teenage were-wolf

Postby Xanga » Wed Dec 21, 2011 4:32 pm

Meep...i love it you post more now?
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Re: Life of a teenage were-wolf

Postby AninaAna » Thu Dec 22, 2011 2:18 am

My..... Heart.... Is..... Flying. ...Out. ...Of.... My..... Chest



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Re: Life of a teenage were-wolf

Postby xxazul63xx » Thu Dec 22, 2011 7:18 am

Kia~
Kia sat on her bed, hugging her knees. It was Saturday morning, all she was thinking about was the look of horror in Jay's eyes, it said one thing, monster. She heard a knock, but didn't answer, Justin opened her door and poked his head in. "Kia..... are you alright?" he murmured, coming to sit next to her. Kia held her head in her hands and shook her head, Justin put his arm over her shoulder. "Dara and Lauren are coming in a few minutes." said Justin. Kia raised an eyebrow, "They're worried about you....." he explained. She sighed and fiddled with a bit of her hair, the door creaked open and Kia's two friend's walked in. Lauren and Dara sat on the other side of Kia's bed, "What exactly happened?" Asked Laura. Kia looked at her hands, "I'm not exactly sure." said Justin. Kia didn't look up from her hands, "Jay asked me to dance, I didn't know that it was the full moon that night. When I found out i ran out of there, without explaining. Jay followed me, and when I changed, he saw me. They way he looked at me, it was as if he was looking at a monster, maybe he was......" whispered Kia. Lauren gave her a look of sympathy, "You should call him....." She said.
Kia looked up, "why?" she asked, surprised. "He saw you, he knows your a were-wolf, what if he tells someone, we need to explain to him that were-wolves are okay. So he doesn't call the FBI or something" explained Lauren. Kia sighed, she knew Lauren was right, but what would she say? She pulled out her cell phone and dailed Jay's cell phone number.
Kia heard ringing on the other end, then a click that meant that he picked up the phone.
"Hello?" he said.
"Hi Jay..... It's Kia"
There was silence on the other end.
"Jay, I know what you saw last night, but I'm not a monster, come over to my house so I can explain everything."
Jay continued to stay silent.
"Jay? Please answer......" Kia pleaded quietly, on the brink of tears.
She heard him clear his throat. "Alright I'll come...." his voice was shaky, as if he wasn't sure if it was the right desision.
"Thank you." whispered Kia.
She hung up and stared blankly at the ground. "Well?" asked Dara, "He's coming...." mumured Kia. They all sat in silence for a few moment, not knowing what to do. Then they heard the bell ring, Kia darted down the stairs and opened the door. Jay was standing there, looking unsure, "Hi Jay...." Kia whispered. "Hi..." he murmured. "Um... come in...." She lead him up to her room.
He sat down in a chair and glanced at Dara, Lauren, and Justin.
"So.... You were going to explain?" he asked. Kia nodded, "Jay, the truth is, I'm a were-wolf." his eyes widened, "All of us are, except Lauren." she said, motioning to Justin and Dara. Jay glanced at them, his eyes full of surprise.
"But we don't hurt people, we're just were-wolves because we were born on a lunar eclipse. You don't have to be afraid, but you can't tell anyone. Some people don't understand that we don't want to hurt anyone and they call the FBI or something. The FBI will probably lock us up if they find us, thinking that we're monsters." Kia explained. Jay looked thoughtful now, "I never knew that...." then he looked out the window with his eyes wide, "But when you say FBI, do you mean them?" He asked. Kia and Justin rushed to the window, a gray van was parked in front of their house and men with black uniforms were walking around with strange machines. "We got to go! Now!" she gasped. They all rushed down the stairs, out the door, and into the back yard. "There they are!" Kia heard one of them shout. "Run!" she cried, "Into the forest!" They ran into the forest, Kia could hear the men chasing them. All of a sudden there was a loud painful ringing, Kia cried out in alarm and clasped her hands over her ears. Justin did the same, while Dara hesitated before doing the same. Kia fell to her knees, "Kia!" called Jay, rushing to her side. "Whats wrong?" He asked, eyes wide. "Loud..... Noise!" she stammered, she guessed it was too high-pitched for humans to hear. The sound got louder and Kia screamed, Jay grabbed her arm and pulled her to her feet. "Where's the sound coming from?" he asked. Kia looked around, and pinpointed the sound to a circle shaped machine in a man's hand. She nodded to it, not daring to remove her hands from her ears. Jay nodded and rushed towards the man, he punched him in the face and smashed the machine on the ground. The sound vanished and Kia let out a sigh of relief. But the men started running towards them, "Run!" yelled Justin. Kia began to morph, changing into her wolf form, so did Justin and Dara. Being at least a foot taller than average wolves, they could take people on their backs. Jay rode on Kia, Lauren rode on Justin. They continued running, with the men still chasing them, Kia's lasting energy was begining to wear out. She heard a scream and saw Dara laying on the ground with the men running towards her. "Dara!" cried Kia, sliding Jay off her back and running to help her friend. One man was about to zap Dara with an electric stick when Kia leaped on him, tearing his shirt and knocking the stick out of his hand. "Dara! Run!" she called. Dara stayed where she was, eyes wide and fur bristling, more men came trying to zap Kia. Kia kicked and clawed, snarling and growling, defending herself from the electric sticks. She screamed as she felt a shocking pain running through her body, more sticks jabbed her and electrified her. Kia howled in agony, smelling burnt fur and feeling an agonizing shock run through her body. She flopped over, painful spasms attacking her body and electrifying sounds all around her. She screamed as another stick electrified her, making her morph back into human.
The last thing she saw was Dara watching the men shove her into a container and her friends screaming out her name.
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Re: Life of a teenage were-wolf

Postby Xanga » Thu Dec 22, 2011 8:56 am

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Re: Life of a teenage were-wolf

Postby G๏l๔єภєאє » Thu Dec 22, 2011 9:28 am

oh...wow!!!! this is amazing!!!!
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