Artist Army {old thread}

[Alexander White]

it is the dude from captain america

[maetropa]

@moon,
that's fine, have you got any tips on the anatomy?

[Notichimtoki]

Sorry Not, just realized I could do that... XD XD XD XD

The paws shouldn't curve down that straight, and I'm guessing based on the way you have him sitting that he's laying on both his back legs, so the paw should stick out more then just sitting behind the forward leg. Also the beginning of his tail should be bigger then thin out, and his back legs shouldn't curve as much as they do where the muscle meets the body.

[maetropa]

Ah, thanks^^

[brian emo]

I need some critique on these anatomy..

Try to make the fur look more like fur and less spiky.
The tail should connect to the spine, this just looks like it's pinned onto the fur.
Try to have the belly resting on the same level as the feet to give the illusion of relaxation. (And draw a line for the ground, he's on a tilt right now!)
The muzzle is a bit short and the mouth itself could be moved down because the chin looks really big; looks also like you're heading for the "short-muzzled canine" cat approach, but the muzzles are very different:
http://images.mooseyscountrygarden.com/ ... rofile.jpg
http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/c ... rofile.JPG
Head is too rotund, it should match the slope of the nose, and the ears are too small.

Sorry, I'd give a redline, but I cant get to ps atm.

[Notichimtoki]

I need homie help D:
I dunno what's up with her back legs but they're driving me CRAZY and I can't seem to fix them. I'm not asking for a redline on the whole thing, but if I could get a redline for her backlegs and anywhere else that requires immediate attention that would be great!!!
[X]
And yes, the big cat is supposed to be that big X3
I need this ASAP, so if I could get a redline soon that would be great :3

[Susiron]

Here's the finished result of that livestream I did last night.
Sorry I didn't livestream the finish; I'm not feeling very well right now and it's hard to focus.
--Gave up on the background I was trying and just went for simple blotches.

[Mr.Milo]

Turned out great!

[pastel1]

susiron@ that looks great, the only thing is the eyes look a littl too close together

streaming
https://join.me/508-970-288

[lululizzy23]

Doing a livestream too: https://join.me/937-591-491