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Re: Writers, UNITE!

Postby TrebleMaker » Sat Dec 17, 2011 7:42 am

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Jason and crew get dragged into going on a field trip that, secretly, none of them want to go on. Though no one says anything, they all go anyway and find out more then they anticipate they would.
When things go wrong, His friend Shawn and his sister's friend Rachel get kidnapped by a very 'special' man that can turn into a dragon. They think nothing of it, until Shawn & Rachel get in a room together, where they have a little too much time alone together. . .
A girl friend has dissappeared, and everyone suspects that the same person who took their friends, also took her. Can the 6 friends work together with the girl's boyfriend and his gang of teens to try and find them? Or will this 'special' man send them all on a wild goose-chase just to have a heated discussion while trapped in the mens public restroom?
All the answers to these questions and more inside. . .Whose side will you take? Jason's & Crew, Or Daniel & Gang?

Here's what I've got for Chapter one;


Jason's day was going fine until the dog peed on his bed, his sister spilled fruit juice down his white shirt, and on top of it all, it started to downpour. He seriously doubted going to this 'Rainforest' now. No one knew where they were going, except the teachers and parents. What happened if the kids got separated for the adults for some reason?
Jason pulled his jacket's sleeve over his hands again, the cold a bigger threat then the rain that fell. He was waiting for the stupid bus to come pick him and his sister up. The later was shivering beside him, blue backpack strapped across one shoulder like she was trying to be cool. He wanted to laugh, she looked like she was trying, but not very well. The bag had horses galloping across it, and her jeans were bedazzled around the edges. Even her belt had little sequins. She was only 12, why was she worrying about being cool?
He blew air roughly from his nose in a snort, rolling his eyes while he did. Beth wasn't the smartest girl, even he could see what she couldn't. If she just opened her eyes, she would have to see the reality. There is always friends around her who thought she was cool, and all she did was blow them off like they were nothing.
Enough of that Jason. Let her live her own life, Jason shifted in his soaked tennis shoes, waiting for the rain to clear a bit. If the bus were to roll by now, he highly doubted they would even see it the rain and fog were so thick.
“Jason, I'm cold.” Beth complained, shifting beside him so her arm was touching his. He casually bumped her with his shoulder, causing her to giggle.
“What can I do about it? Put your jacket on, silly.” Jason smiled slightly, glad that his sister was coming after all. She'd be the youngest one going, and yet the one who knew him the best. They had gone through a lot, even going through their dads death and their moms remarriage. Though his friends knew a little of what was going on, they didn't know everything. Not even Shane, who he was very close with. Jason just didn't trust that many people with his life secrets.
“But my jackets cold!” She stomped her foot, sending freezing water onto Jason's jeans. He winced slightly when the water soaked through and the now cold jeans clung to his ankles. They felt almost like skinny jeans, and he hated those things.
“Can I wear yours?” Her voice was pleading, and he was tempted to give her his black NorthFace jacket, instead he glowered at her, green eyes full of amusement and false anger. Jason kept the face up until she squirmed and glanced away, blue eyes full of confusment.
“Fine, nevermind. Oh, Jason! Look! The bus!” Bethany tugged at his hand, pointing with her other to where red headlights showed through the foggy day.
He squinted to be sure he was seeing right, then grinned. She was right, the bus was chugging ever so slowly towards them. Thank God! Jason slid his hand from his sisters and pushed his duffel bag straps more over his shoulder, not liking the way it was digging into his skin.
Glad that his friends, as well as Bethany would be on this 'fieldtrip', Jason tried hard not to think on the fact he almost hadn't been allowed to go. That pig of his step-dad was just so mean and aggressive. If it hadn't been for his little sister, not even 13 yet, who had threatened to call Child Services. Was it weird that the man never hurt her? He had never even so much as laid a hand on the girl, but seemed to take all his anger out on his step-son, Jason.
The agrument with their mother earlier that week had almost stopped him from leaving her along.
'You should go, get away from your father.' She'd said, eyes clouded and keeping back tears as she gripped his shoulder.
'What about you? Don't try to pretend I don't know anything about your scars. You have just as much as me, if not more.' Jason had tried to argue, bringing up the abusivness to get her to let him stay.
'This isn't about me Jason, you of all people should know that by know. Go, have some fun. Don't worry about your lil' old mom. I love you sweety, have a good time for me.' Her eyes were full of tears, some spilling over her eyelids, down her cheeks. Sliding past traces of make-up, over years of pain, just rolling till they stopped with a splat onto her son's navy shirt.
'Mom, I-I don't want to have a good time K-Knowing you're here. Y-You could you stay with a friend, r-right? What about M-Mrs. Emmery? S-She'll let you stay-'Jason was trying to control the emotion in his own voice at that moment, wanting nothing more then to never let his mother leave his sight, or his arms. The later was wrapped loosely around her back, in a hug. It caused him to stutter with his words, not able to get them all out before she moved.
She pulled out of his grasp, eyes somehow dry. They were still clouded and threatened to spill over again, but she didn't let them. She was strong, holding herself together for her son.
With a graceful movement Jason did not know his mother could muster, she slapped him with the back of her hand, eyes now lit with anger. 'Jason Smith,' -Even she knew not to call him by her husbands last name- 'You will go, and you had better like it. Don't you worry about me, Understood?'
His right cheek stung from where her wedding ring had cut into his skin just below his cheek bone. 'Yes, mother.' It sounded too formal coming out of his mouth, yet he couldn't find any other words, still slightly shocked that she had slapped him. Maybe he deserved, maybe not.
Jason metally shook the memory from his head, trying to get a grasp on reality again. The bus was coming, faster now.
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Re: Writers, UNITE!

Postby TheShinyAmpharos12.5 » Sat Dec 17, 2011 1:22 pm

I want to join the Writing Army!
Username (put in color you want me to put your name in): TheShinyAmpharos12.5!!
Do you promise to write something at LEAST once a week?: Yes! I'll make something up if i have to!
What's your favorite color?: Lime Green!
Animal?: Tiger!
Fish?: Do mermaids count?
Type of mythical creature?: Dragons and Phoenixes!
Do you like fairies, elves, or evil creatures?: Yes! I'll take them over sparkly vampires any day!
Anything else (do not leave blank):I like smiley faces! :D :twisted: :lol: :P :!: :mrgreen: :thumbup: :clap: :geek: :idea: :D
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Re: Writers, UNITE!

Postby l0stinw0nderland » Sat Dec 17, 2011 1:32 pm

I want to join the Writing Army!
Usernam: Macs99
Do you promise to write something at LEAST once a week? Yeah
What's your favorite color? blue
Animal? kittens
Fish? beta?
Type of mythical creature? Fairy
Do you like fairies, elves, or evil creatures? Fairies!
Anything else (do not leave blank): Im writing a story on quizazz! You can read it here please give critique http://www.quizazz.com/story.php/127850 ... o-Us-Part/
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Re: Writers, UNITE!

Postby maximum entropy » Sat Dec 17, 2011 6:55 pm

That's really good! I can't wait to read more! and sure, let's see!
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Re: Writers, UNITE!

Postby maximum entropy » Sat Dec 17, 2011 7:00 pm

Hmm, the only thing I think is wrong is "Latter" that means the last subject talked about, instead of "Later" which means after. I think you mean the "latter?"

Oh, and accepted.
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Re: Writers, UNITE!

Postby glitter. » Sun Dec 18, 2011 2:30 am

Am I accepted? I posted a few pages back and never got an response.
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Re: Writers, UNITE!

Postby maximum entropy » Sun Dec 18, 2011 3:14 am

[[Yep!]]
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Re: Writers, UNITE!

Postby Noel » Sun Dec 18, 2011 3:36 am

I want to join the Writing Army!
Username: Hikari-879
Do you promise to write something at LEAST once a week? Of course. I can't promise I'll post it though.
What's your favorite color? Indigo
Animal? Cat.
Fish? Salmon....nom.
Type of mythical creature? Doppelganger.
Do you like fairies, elves, or evil creatures? Some evil creatures, but mostly no.
Anything else: I can't think of anything.... .....still can't.
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Re: Writers, UNITE!

Postby glitter. » Sun Dec 18, 2011 3:06 pm

Thankies bunches! So does anyone here have issues with emo/scene people or charries who aren't straight?
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Re: Writers, UNITE!

Postby maximum entropy » Mon Dec 19, 2011 6:14 am

Everyone that has posted forms is currently accepted. Everyone please post an example of your writing, people who have already done so exepted.
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