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by Tesalong » Sat Dec 17, 2011 4:10 pm
((Once again, not my song. Although this one makes alot more sense for me to post it here.
The credit goes to the Plain White T's and the song is called Hey There Delilah. C:))

Hey there Delilah, what's it like in New York City? I'm a thousand miles away
but girl tonight you look so pretty, yes you do. Times Square can't shine as bright as you, I swear it's true.
Hey there Delilah, don't you worry about the distance, I'm right there if you get lonely give this song another listen,
close your eyes, listen to my voice it's my disguise. I'm by your side.
Oh it's what you do to me, oh it's what you do to me,
oh it's what you do to me, oh it's what you do to me,
what you do to me.
Hey there Delilah, I know times are getting hard but just believe me girl, someday I'll pay the bills with this guitar,
we'll have it good, we'll have the life we knew we would, my word is good.
Hey there Delilah, I've got so much left to say if every simple song I wrote to you
would take your breath away, I'd write it all even more in love with me you'd fall, we'd have it all.
Oh it's what you do to me, oh it's what you do to me,
oh it's what you do to me, oh it's what you do to me.
A thousand miles seems pretty far, but they've got planes and trains and cars,
I'd walk to you if I had no other way. Our friends would all make fun of us
and we'll just laugh along because we know that none of them have felt this way.
Delilah I can promise you that by the time that we get through
the world will never ever be the same, and you're to blame.
Hey there Delilah, you be good and don't you miss me,
two more years and you'll be done with school and I'll be making history like I do.
You'll know it's all because of you we can do whatever we want to.
Hey there Delilah, here's to you, this one's for you.
Oh it's what you do to me, oh it's what you do to me,
oh it's what you do to me, oh it's what you do to me,
what you do to me.
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by .a m a r y l l i s. » Sat Dec 17, 2011 4:20 pm
.a l o u e t t e. wrote:
I've h e a r d there was a secret [chord]
That D.a.v.i.d played, and it pleased the Lord.
But you don't really c.a.r.e for music,
Do y o u?
...hallelujah..."
Toadfoal wrote:That's so sad! It's a beautiful story though, it's not often I read something that can fit so many emotions into that length of a story. I admire that. 83
wibeke wrote:.a l o u e t t e.: That was perfect. The song tied in so well and you have a really pretty writing style. The ending made me tear up a little. </3
Well done. ^^
Lennie wrote:oh and I just love the use of the song in your story aloutte. ^^{{
Bodie & Pudding wrote:The ending actually made me tear up a little, usually shorter stories like that don't have this emotional effect on me but you did that wonderfully </3
Vellamore wrote:Omg that was perfect. I've read lots of stories based around that song and that was one of my favorites. It felt very real, excellent wording. And so beautifully sad<|3
(Also, your sig tells me that you love deer, so I love you haha, deer are my fave♥)
iPawki wrote:@.a l o u e t t e.; That was beautiful </3 I love your writing~
I just want to tell y'all how happy you've made me. I'm always glad when people like my work, and the fact that you all enjoyed it so much has brightened my day considerably.
Thank you all so much, and thanks to anyone else who read it as well.
♥♥♥
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.And the walls kept tumbling down
In the city that we love
Great clouds roll over the hills
Bringing darkness from above
Oh where do we begin?
The rubble or our sins?
How am I gonna be an optimist about this?.
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.RIP Larry || 12.16.12
RIP Aunt Babe || 3.31.15
RIP Nene || 10.7.15xFind me on FR! .
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by Zeee » Sat Dec 17, 2011 4:44 pm


I heard there was a secret chord, that David played and it pleased the lord
But you don't really care for music, do you?
It goes like this, the fourth, the fifth, the minor fall, the major lift
the baffled king composing hallelujah
hallelujah, hallelujah, hallelujah, hallelujah
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im writing up a story, im just doing it on a word document first ^^
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by s y n » Sat Dec 17, 2011 5:32 pm


Will you love me always?
I promise I will.
Will you think about me lots?
I promise I will.
Will you stay with me forever?
That is a promise I cannot make.
[ You're at home, I'm away
And if all I can say, is that this
Boy is still the same, it's the man
Inside that's changed ]
How are you, love?
I'm doing fine.
[ Front of the line, but still behind
Seems like I'm trying way too hard
And like I haven't tried at all
Hard as a stone but feeling all the weight
Feeling all the weight that's crushing me ]
Do you miss me?
Of course I do.
How's it going?
Pretty well so far.
Are you coming home?
I can't be sure.
[ When you come around,
You're like a little slice of Heaven
When I'm coming down
Lifting me up above the clouds ]
It's so hard without you.
It feels wrong when I'm away.
How much longer is it?
Could be any day now. Could be years.
How is it there?
Gloomy. Death is everywhere.
[ I'll sleep tonight but the war's far from over
Tomorrow is no gurantee
If I don't return from this life of a soldier
Don't you be crying for me ]
I can't take it any longer.
I miss you so much.
Are you alright?
A little hurt, but I'm okay.
Come out alive.
I'll try my best.
[ There's a car pulling up and the man who's inside
Takes a deep breath as he straightens his tie
It's nothing new 'cause he's done this before,
She knew it as soon as he knocked on the door ]
Is it over?
Yes, ma'am, it's over.
How did it go?
Many dead, but we've won.
And did he...?
I... I'm so sorry.
[ Please someone please tell me I must be dreaming
What will I do? Oh I just can't believe it
Taken away, oh he's taken away
Someone take me away, someone take me away ]
Dedicated to all those who perished in war to give us our freedom,
and to the families that lost these brave, wonderful souls.
May they forever rest in peace and happiness,
and may they forever be loved.
previously known as dexus
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by Khefri-Sun » Sat Dec 17, 2011 5:56 pm
;;goddess x Bhane
{i used to rule the world
seas would rise when i gave the word
now in the morning i sleep alone
sweep the streets i used to own...{
Some say it wasn't far for the goddess to fall. With beauty, comes danger. However, with beauty, power, and wits, comes immense and imminent danger. Not to mention she was a woman. No woman had ever sat on the godly throne of Rhome in the past. No, it was blasphemous to any god that had ever fought for the right to be, well, just that.
A god.
Goddess was not the word of a ruler. It was the word of the helper, the one in the background, the one with no real power. Just an ornament, a plaything for those who liked to set a stage. Maybe it wasn't her beauty, wits, or power that was her downfall, but rather her ambition.
So when they finally tore her from her seat of power...
{bloody, broken, barely breathing}
...to be thrown down upon the world of the mortals, goddess was...
{alone. friendless. hunted.}
Any god who she had ever caused discomfort or loss of pride would now be chasing her. She didn't have much hope really.
That is, if the mortal Bhane hadn't found her first.
It definitely was not love at first sight, but it was a start.
{i used to roll the dice
feel the fear in my enemy's eyes
listen as the crowd would sing
"now the old king is dead! long live the king!"{
Random story that popped in my head while I was dressing up goddess. e.e
Song is Viva la Vida by Coldplay.
/rubbish writing xD
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by Parachutes » Sat Dec 17, 2011 8:29 pm
p a r a d i s e wrote:

Will you love me always?
I promise I will.
Will you think about me lots?
I promise I will.
Will you stay with me forever?
That is a promise I cannot make.
[ You're at home, I'm away
And if all I can say, is that this
Boy is still the same, it's the man
Inside that's changed ]
How are you, love?
I'm doing fine.
[ Front of the line, but still behind
Seems like I'm trying way too hard
And like I haven't tried at all
Hard as a stone but feeling all the weight
Feeling all the weight that's crushing me ]
Do you miss me?
Of course I do.
How's it going?
Pretty well so far.
Are you coming home?
I can't be sure.
[ When you come around,
You're like a little slice of Heaven
When I'm coming down
Lifting me up above the clouds ]
It's so hard without you.
It feels wrong when I'm away.
How much longer is it?
Could be any day now. Could be years.
How is it there?
Gloomy. Death is everywhere.
[ I'll sleep tonight but the war's far from over
Tomorrow is no gurantee
If I don't return from this life of a soldier
Don't you be crying for me ]
I can't take it any longer.
I miss you so much.
Are you alright?
A little hurt, but I'm okay.
Come out alive.
I'll try my best.
[ There's a car pulling up and the man who's inside
Takes a deep breath as he straightens his tie
It's nothing new 'cause he's done this before,
She knew it as soon as he knocked on the door ]
Is it over?
Yes, ma'am, it's over.
How did it go?
Many dead, but we've won.
And did he...?
I... I'm so sorry.
[ Please someone please tell me I must be dreaming
What will I do? Oh I just can't believe it
Taken away, oh he's taken away
Someone take me away, someone take me away ]
Dedicated to all those who perished in war to give us our freedom,
and to the families that lost these brave, wonderful souls.
May they forever rest in peace and happiness,
and may they forever be loved.
Oh my, this is so sad, yet many families must have gone through this. You reveal the tragedy that many people have not seen, but many others have.
Feel free to call me Para. she/her.
Happy pride!
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by ~Fallen Angel~ » Sat Dec 17, 2011 8:33 pm
Starkit12 wrote:Bubblesh. wrote:That was beautiful, will there be more?
Super cute couples! <3
Thanks guys. I wasn't too sure about the ending of the actual story bit, it seemed a bit odd. I might do a bit more but I'm not sure, that's a bit of a hard one to follow up


I have decided that I no longer want to be on Chicken Smoothie. I have become too infatuated with the site.
No, I am not giving away free pets; they will all go to the Pound or to good CS friends of mine.
Bye, CS!
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