Dear AJ ~ the first journal ~

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Who is your favourite character so far (changeable)

Crystal
4
29%
Kai
3
21%
Midnight
6
43%
Cerin
0
No votes
Shade
0
No votes
Zodiac
0
No votes
Kane
0
No votes
Blue
0
No votes
Other (If other specify who by commenting)
1
7%
 
Total votes : 14

Re: Dear AJ ~ the first journal ~

Postby Unizorn » Mon Dec 12, 2011 2:06 am

This is really great!
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Re: Dear AJ ~ the first journal ~

Postby Nonexsitent » Mon Dec 12, 2011 5:06 am

ty for the commets.

Dear AJ,
We are currently sat on the train to Emerald city, it getting lighter outside and Blue said we would have to stay there a couple of weeks or days so we have to go to the school. The schools Dread von High it is a massive gothic mansion like what I used to live in before Midnight saved me from getting kidnapped.
"Look the last time you met your 'boss' Symbol was in Emerald city?" Silver asked, Blue nodded.
"So what if he is not here no more?" Drew pointed out.
"I got other contacts on in paticular is Kane he might be helpful if we join with him." Blue explained.
"Kane does what?" I asked I wasn't to keep quiet not now.
"He trains people in martial arts." Blue explained.
"So he will probaly be the vital part of our operation." Silver said as Midnight walked in with a bag of marshmellows. He sat down next to me and I snatched the bag off him and Midnight just laughed as I opened the bag and handed one to Drew and Silver and chucked one at Blue who caught it in his mouth and I laughed. Midnight to the bag off me then grumbling for me to grow up the he took a marshmello and handed it to me and ate one himself.
"Okay now to plan our meeting with Kane." I said shooting a look to Blue who already was getting his phone out. He handed the phone to Midnight who clicked on Kane's name and shoved it on loud speaker. It rung twice before he answered the phone.
"Hey Blue mate Symbol is relying on you dude and apparantly now your long gone." came the casual hello.
"Hey Kane look mate I need to meet you when I reach Emerald city." Blue replied.
"Sure but did you grab her the chick I mean." Kane asked.
"Nah mate she's got herself a bodyguard at the moment so untouchable." Blue sighed acting like we weren't here.
"Oh okay dude meet me at Kliffhanger." Kane said.
"See you there." Blue said and hung up I smirked at him theis was going to very intresting!

~Crystal~
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Re: Dear AJ ~ the first journal ~

Postby Silver21 » Mon Dec 12, 2011 6:00 am

Keep it up!!
I'm a cat lover I hate spiders please do not send them to me! I hate the sight of cartoon ones as much as I hate real ones!
I'm dyslexic so excuse my poor spelling. Our Bleeding Shadow is my daughter please do not ban us if we trade unfairly and often.
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Re: Dear AJ ~ the first journal ~

Postby Nonexsitent » Mon Dec 12, 2011 7:35 am

TY here is the next part!

Dear AJ,
When we got off the train there was loads of spiders scuttling around I am not scared of them but I am not keen I have a bad experience with spiders lets just say once when I was looking after some they ended up taking a swim and getting cramp then died. Of course I moved to Lust-thorn city to restart my life this Symbol dude knew who I was and he was sending people to kidnap me. Don't I just love my life...not!
"Hardly any cats." Silver grumbled and Midnight smirked.
"Probaly knew the freak show was coming to town." he teased, Silver hissed and all the spiders turned round to face us.
"CAT!" One shouted and they all dropped their bags and all scuttled away. Silver blinked.
"What did I do?" Silver moaned and footsteps behind us made us spin round there stood another cat her fur as dark as the midnight sky and the lilypad detail obviously knocked Silver's breath away.
"Nothing much it is more of what our ancestors did." she said her voice silky and smooth, Silver was stunned.
"Look flower," I started and she sat down and held up her paw.
"Sophia." She said smiling then looked at me in wonder, Silver strutted forward and Midnight sighed and face-pawed. Here is a picture of Sophia.
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"The names Silver and I would like to invite you to join our little gang of land hoppers." He said bowing.
"That's a new one." I whispered to Midnight who stiffled a laugh, but Sophia looked honored.
"I would love to Silver." She said awestruck.
"Come on Romeo you can bring Juliet." I joked and Silver glared at me. We laughed and headed our way to Kliffhanger which Blue says is the best shop open of course Sophia agrees with him they live here. When we arrive we see a dog in the corner Grey and white fur and his green eyes darted round nervously. Blue told us to hide nearby and walked off to talk to him. I sat in the compartment two tables down with Midnight as my 'date', Silver and Sophia sat next door and Drew outside the door.
"Hey dude." Kane said uncertainly and kept glimpsing at me.
"Hey how's life hanging?" Blue shot back casually.
"Not that bad but that chick who that dude is with..." Kane said uncertainly, Blue swivelled around.
"Look we came here because we need your help." Blue said knowing that we were busted I got up and joined them, Midnight joined me.
"Sure, Symbol isn't actually called Symbol." Kane said. Blue signalled him to continue and Kane looked around.
"No one knows his name but listen right he comes to Emerald city for a couple of days next week." he said and we nodded looking at eachother.
"Can we crash at your motel?" Blue asked him and Kane nodded looking around. Oh yeah before I forget here is a picture of Kane.
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Kane stood up, Drew walked in, Silver and Sophia jumped off the chairs and he looked astounded. Boy the look on his face was a pure picture.

~Crystal~
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Re: Dear AJ ~ the first journal ~

Postby Unizorn » Tue Dec 13, 2011 9:53 am

Please write more soon!
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Re: Dear AJ ~ the first journal ~

Postby Nonexsitent » Wed Dec 14, 2011 7:07 am

okay here is more!!

Dear AJ,
We arrived at Kane's motel and all the rooms were empty. Kane explained that all the pups he had trained had left to serve Symbol, I nodded and chose the only room with the lock working. Kane handed me the key, I took it and walked in my room and invited Sophia to share she smiled and agreed. I took the top bunk and Sophia took the bottom bunk then Kane showed Midnight to the room next door and he refused to share with anyone so Drew and Blue took the room next to them and Silver took the room the other side to us. I couldn't help but hold my breath when Midnight said we had to go to the nearby school, did he have to continue to torment me now. Blue nodded and said we'd go after lunch and Kane said he'd order a pizza.

After lunch we were all stuffed and Kane said he would take us to the school but he had to get out fast since he was suspended and would be back tomorrow. We smiled at him and we set off all of us sharing a good laugh then I saw him watching me the dog that I had a tricky past with when I escaped my old town he was staring at me a sneer on his face. I nudged Blue who gaped at the dog and whispered that it was Symbol I frowned and ignored the dog as he vanished on the spot. I was used to it and I was fed up with Blue calling him Symbol because I knew his real name, I knew him better than they did but they never knew. We reached the school and Kane ran off as a Blue lead us to the front door. We walked in and the spider behind the counter dropped the phone and gaped at us. She introduced herself as Larvisa and told us to wait and she'd go get the principal. Here is a picture.
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We waited and then we were told the head master wouldn't be able to see us and we were wanted in class 3 in room 2b which made no sense till Blue said for us to follow. We walked up to a door and Midnight knocked the voice told us to enter and we did the teacher told us to take a seat amazed because of how many of us there was then he saw Blue and his smile faltered slightly. We all flocked in and took our seats Silver sat next to...wait for it...Sophia, Drew and Blue took seats next to eachother near the back of the class. I looked at Midnight who signalled for me to follow him with a head gesture, he lead me to a pair of seats in the middle of the class next to a pink dog and a blue cat they smiled at us as we sat down. I saw the pink dog smiling at Midnight a whole lot and my stomach dropped (Maybe I was going have to rethink not telling him) the teacher went back to his annoucement.
"Kids the prom is next week and you all need a date for it." He grinned eying Blue who shrugged dismissively.
"Cool but who do we ask?" The pink dog asked glancing around the classroom.
"Anyone." The teacher said then glanced at Blue, "Anyone you like."
"Great." she said then smiled sweetly.
"But," the teacher began making everyone look at him. "It's girls ask the boys." He said the girls groaned looking around but the pink dog was staring at Midnight she looked and saw me then turned her head to the front. The teacher smiled and went back to teaching maths of course it was maths to put it more directly ALGEBRA! I hate algebra it is very annoying. Well got to go I've got algebra to sleep through.

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Re: Dear AJ ~ the first journal ~

Postby Unizorn » Wed Dec 14, 2011 12:12 pm

I hate algebra too. Why is it so... algebraic?!?
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Re: Dear AJ ~ the first journal ~

Postby Nonexsitent » Thu Dec 15, 2011 12:07 pm

Unizorn wrote:I hate algebra too. Why is it so... algebraic?!?

same here! Okay readers tell me who do you like the most out of the characters so far!

Dear AJ,
The prom is this week yep sorry I couldn't write in you, I was put on the prom commity and I made a new best friend she is a gothic dog name Kai and she is literally the badass dog of the century and she is as funny as hell. Here is a picture.
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The pink dog is called Rose and she's also on the comitty but she does the dress designs but I don't like her, shae has a major thing for Midnight and I don't care really I don't. She keeps on and on about him in the meetings and Midnight is now the heart-throb of the school and I knew it was a bad idea to come here. Oh yeah here is a ugly pic of Rose.
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"I hate your style Kai." Rose tormented Kai.
"It's better than looking like a cream puff." Kai shot back and I sniggered.
"Got something to say Crystal." Rose snapped, I nodded and Kai looked at me waiting for my blow.
"I love how you've got ice cream in your fur is it this seasons style." I said making her reach up to check her fur. Kai laughed then and Rose realised I tricked her and she stormed off in a rage and Midnight walked over to us.
"Nice trick but you could lay off her." He said to me and Kai glared at him and Midnight saw her.
"Look mister you may not stick up for your friends but at least Crystal sticks up for hers." Kai growled harsher than I could. I admired her for her harsh nature then her phone rang and she answered.
"Kai speaking who the hell is this?" she asked boredly. I stared at her as she pulled her phone away from her ear.
"For you Crystal." She said and handed me the phone. I raised it to my ear.
"Hello." I said casually, the sound of chuckling reached my ears.
"Crystal hey babe." Came the voice I knew all to well.
"Leave me alone." I gaped and Kai frowned confused.
"Look I will kill you and it'll be the last thing I do." He snarled and I hung up and handed the phone back to Kai who looked a bit startled. Kai just looked at Midnight waiting for him to continue and he just took a glance at me and sat down.
"Crystal who was that?" He asked, I looked at him.
"An old friend." I said, I felt like vomiting all the fear into a bucket, I wasn't scared of most things but this dog scared me more than anything!

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Re: Dear AJ ~ the first journal ~

Postby Unizorn » Thu Dec 15, 2011 1:17 pm

Who is that? And old enemy, or an old friend, perhaps O_o
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Re: Dear AJ ~ the first journal ~

Postby Nonexsitent » Thu Dec 15, 2011 10:24 pm

Unizorn wrote:Who is that? And old enemy, or an old friend, perhaps O_o

you have to wait and see lol!

Dear AJ,
Kai also knows the dog and she offered to join us on our quest to rid of him I was just too happy to accept, then Kane piped up and said he'd come along too. I was glad that "my friend" had told Blue to kidnap me now or this would of never of happened. Let me just tell you this (sinking back into old habits ugh) this dog is meant to be dead he was meant to die in that house I blew up and yes the house fire was to do with me so it's confessions. Kai is going to write for a while while I go and speak to midnight since he is beckoning me to follow.

Hey I'm Kai and wow half these things in here about me are a bit silly I just follow my gut normally but the dog is meant to be dead was freaking blown up by a group of people ages ago Crystal was one of them I swear Zodiac (that's his name by the way not symbol) swore to kill off every dog in that group. He has killed my mother and father took my sister to serve him but I now he's alive again he has been following me and Blue only agreed to follow Crysal for my sister's sake he threatened to kill her if someone didn't go kidnap Crystal so now I don't know if she is alive or dead. There is another dog I know he's my cousin his name is Fang and that blue cat she spoke about his name is Magikon here I'll put their school photos in here. First Fang.
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Then here is Magikon. He is Sophia's brother but shh don't tell silver ^_^.
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I also have a friend named Shade he asked me to prom he has indigo eyes like Midnight and whoa how can Crystal like him but I guess it can't be helped who you fall in love with I suspose and Crystal when you read this ignore Rose, I can handle her she has picked on me since I we started this school. I could handle her any day soon though she is going to get a massive punch though. I'll put a picture of Shade in here as well so you can have a look.
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Isn't he adorable hang on Midnight's hovering.
"What?" I snapped, Midnight's brow was creases with recognition.
"Where the hell did you get a picture of that dog?" He asked pointing to the picture of Shade.
"School year book stupid he asked me to the prom so yeah I thought I'd put him in AJ." I said slightly annoyed.
"Oh..." Midnight then walked off and Crystal came back so I enjoyed our chat bye AJ (Ugh Crystal's habit is rubbing off on me.)
~Kai~


Wow Kai wrote loads she had alot to say ahh she wrote Zodiac's name great I don't really need Mdnight to read my journal again and go wacko. Any way Midnight told me that he was going to prom with Rose and a guy called Cerin thinks I'm cute and wants to go with me. Boy where's my shot gun I want to kill Rose, I was going to ask Midnight as soon as I mustered the courage. Hang on a boy asked Kai (lol probaly really likes her and knew she wouldn't ask him).

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