тнɛ мιяяσя || σρɛи тσ cσммɛитƨ/cяιтιqʋɛƨ || cнαρтɛя тɛи ʋρ

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What did you expect to happen when Arietta touched the mirror in chapter one?

Narnia. She was going to Narnia.
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26%
Time travel. She was going to travel back in time. Whenever you find an old mirror in an abandoned gymnasium you will always travel back in time, duh!
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She was going to travel to an alternate universe and meet blue Avatar people.
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She was going to travel to an alternate universe and not meet blue Avatar people.
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Narnia. It’s still somehow going to turn into Narnia; Aslan will be walking in any second now, just you wait!
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26%
Yeah, I can see the future. I knew what was going down the entire time.
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16%
Other (PM or post in topic)((Posting in topic is more fun XD))
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5%
 
Total votes : 19

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Postby thaliana, » Mon Dec 05, 2011 9:05 am

Heheh. I guess stalkers with good intentions are alright - it's not like i'm out to stalk you stalk you... *blink* Anywho, I agree with your view on the last paragraph, it did deteriorate slightly, but I stand by with everything beforehand being engrossing ^^. Yay, updates! And yay, we get to meet the guy with the yummy picure <3
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Postby ιяιѕlуα » Mon Dec 05, 2011 2:12 pm

Chapter Two is up, and yes, Gabriel is very yummy XD
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Postby ιяιѕlуα » Mon Dec 05, 2011 6:56 pm

Chapter Three is up as well.
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Postby ιяιѕlуα » Tue Dec 06, 2011 2:02 pm

Working on Chapter Four... if anyone's actually reading O.O
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Postby ιяιѕlуα » Wed Dec 07, 2011 3:10 pm

Chapter Four is up, and we get to meet some new characters =) I know it's not the most fantastic chapter in the world... but... I suppose it could be worse. I promise that the next chapter will be better. Sometimes I wonder if I'm just talking to myself... well if I am, at least I'm enjoying my own story XD
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Postby ιяιѕlуα » Sun Dec 11, 2011 4:29 pm

I'd like to apologize to anyone actually reading the story (though I doubt anyone is), I've been racking my brain on what to write for Chapter Five. But you shouldn't expect o see a post until at least Monday (I have to work tomorrow) so until then.
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Postby ιяιѕlуα » Wed Dec 14, 2011 12:57 pm

I'd like to apologize yet again to anyone reading, my life has been a bit hectic as of late and I haven't had any down time to work on The Mirror. But I should have the next chapter up by the end of tonight or tomorrow afternoon. I'm sorry for any inconvenience. Also, if there is anyone just stalking the thread, I would love to hear any feedback (whether it be positive or negative) so I know what to work on and what you'd all like to see. That's it from me for now, but look out for the next chapter!
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Postby ιяιѕlуα » Wed Dec 14, 2011 3:40 pm

Chapter Five is up, finally! Things have taken an unexpected turn, perhaps not for the better.
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Postby ShoeShoe » Thu Dec 15, 2011 4:49 pm

-would like to become an official stalker-

This is fantastic!!! Are you sure you're not a writer already? XD Your detail and use of imagery makes everything tie together quite nicely. Keep up the good work!!!

One note, in the last line of Chapter 5, it's course, not coarse ;]
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Postby ιяιѕlуα » Fri Dec 16, 2011 5:43 pm

(Oh boy another stalker, muwahahaha! ...... ehem) XD Well thank you Schewy, your name shall be added onto my stalker list. And dang spell check!!!! Why do you hate me?!?!?! Also, sorry for being gone for a while, I've spent the last two days drawing miss Marilyn Monroe in my free time. Now that I've finally finished her I can set to work on chapter six. (Might not be up for a few days, as I'm leaving for a Christmas party on Saturday) Look out for an update!
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