Roleplays featuring animals or non-human fantasy creatures which are based on a book/movie/tv show (e.g. Warrior Cats, My Little Pony, Pokemon)
by shuggie » Mon Dec 12, 2011 2:11 pm
(No big deal, but you need to give the other player a chance to react. Instead of 'Sasha bit into Shadow's throat' Try something like. 'Sasha lunged for Shadow's throat' That way I can do this 'Shadow rolled out of the way, dodging Sasha's attack.)
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by Aniki » Mon Dec 12, 2011 2:21 pm
((Ok, thanks))
Freya finally caught sight of the noise she heard. Indeed it was Shadow and Sasha….fighting!? Freya snarled at what she was seeing. She wanted to join in, but the wolf code was something she took to heart. Thou shall never join into a duel unless called upon.
Freya watched as Shadow was attacked again. She was torn inside on what to do, join in or stay out.....?
looking to join some rps to get back into writing again
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