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Re: Dear Journal

Postby Nonexsitent » Fri Dec 09, 2011 6:03 pm

If you like the story of Majenda you might like the story of Crystal in my pet journal so visit it here viewtopic.php?f=57&t=925109 please read it and post ideas for characters ^_^ if you can trade me dogs please do....second gen if possible!
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Re: Dear Journal

Postby Sentoki » Fri Dec 09, 2011 7:02 pm

Thish story ish awesomesauce!!

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Re: Dear Journal

Postby Nonexsitent » Fri Dec 09, 2011 7:44 pm

ty very much ^_^ please give me ideas for the story it's the fans that keep the story going

Dear Hope,
We have stopped and we are resting up in Emberville it is a small village off to the cost there is a massive volcano nearby and we all agreed that is where we will go first to look for the grim reapers the thing is that they sent us on an adventure without telling us what we are even meant to do. "The volcano is still active." Berry said.
"So...?" Cate slowly said.
"Well you could die..." Berry exclaimed angrily she was trying to convince us not to go.
"Look Berry we are going to be careful so calm down." I soothed grabbing her shoulders and giving her a tiny shake. Cate laughed and Zeelea sighed Berry nodded actually dropping the argument and we started on our way toward the volcano. Berry hesitated several times along the way but we reached it after along journey, I was very happy to have finally reached it and now we have to explore it ^_^

Majenda ^_^

Edit: Dear Hope,
Sorry I cut that entry a bit short but I have a major problem Berry fell over and the volcano collapsed so we had to climb inside the volcano to search for her guess where we found her? Tending a injured person they were hurt bad he was at least 18 and he had a massive scar on his eye he was asleep, either that or dead, Berry was dabbing his cuts with a torn rag off her spare shirt. I sighed and rushed to help "Ow...I...need...to...to...to find..." He groaned. I shushed him and wiped his hair out of his eyes he looked at me his warm eyes looking at me I sighed, "Majenda..." He began. I frowned how come everyone knew my name and I didn't have the slightest clue about them. Berry was singing softly a small lisp was visible.
"My Angel has come,
To save the light,
To bring the soul of me,
He sings so soft,
He is so warm,
I love my Angel."

Berry stopped singing and tears had formed in her eyes I wiped them away and hugged her showing her I understood that the song she sung was a song our mother used to sing when our father died. I remebered the weak teen and turned back to him he was clammy but warm to touch. "Oh...so cold...Majenda find...find...Emika she...will lead you...to..." he stuttered trembling I knew he was dying and we couldn't save him.
"Who did this?" Zeelea asked her voice hard.
"The...grim...gri..." He said but didn't finish he went limp and his eyes rolled back into his head, Berry uttered a squeak and buried her face in Cate's shirt. I placed two fingers on his eyelids and slid them shut, "We go deeper to find this Emika but watch you backs because of the grim reapers." I told my little team. Cate nodded calming Berry down she was weeping and Zeelea's chin was trembling she was trying not to cry. So now we are going to find this mystery Emika so enjoy.

Majenda ^_^

Please tell me should this Emika be a rebel or a grim reaper?? please post your suggestions!!
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Re: Dear Journal

Postby Kinchovi » Sat Dec 10, 2011 8:27 am

A good grim reaper?

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Re: Dear Journal

Postby AbbeyDawn » Sat Dec 10, 2011 8:29 am

What about a half grim reaper, half Rebel? I personally think that that would be interestingly weird... :?
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Re: Dear Journal

Postby Nonexsitent » Sun Dec 11, 2011 4:24 am

You both gave me an idea

Dear Hope,
We found her but it got us into a tiny bit of trouble! Here let me tell you what happened!

We all split into teams me with Zeelea and Berry with Cate I wasn't happy with it and I threatened to kill Cate if anyhting happened to Berry.
Me and Zeelea found spare grim reaper outfits it turns out they copied the real deal which I wasn't happy with so we dressed as them and took spare scythes. We wondered around the area for a bit when an actual grim reaper came in he was happy to see us and kept calling us Jim and Bob so we went along with it. I was Bob Zeelea was Jim to him, we were lead to a prisoner area and he showed us the prisoners and told us to keep a eye on them then he showed us to another prison guard called Trianda. We were shown to our posts and had to stay there.
At least two hours later shouting echoed down the hall it was Berry and Cate they were shouting and screaming all of a sudden at least ten grim reapers showed them into the solitude cell which unfortunately was our post. I stared at them as they kicked the table and chairs round the room shouting curses and things at us Zeelea laughed at them and I smirked. Berry came up to the gate and spat at Zeelea who was beside herself with laughter. Then a girl was in front of us she was dressed normally with long auburn hair and soft hazel eyes. She was looking inside the cage with guilt "Cate I'm so sorry." She whispered hoping we couldn't hear Cate just glared at her.
"Sure Emika, Majenda and Zeelea are still out there and they don't know where we are." He snapped Berry just sat there looking at Emika with the look of betrayal. Trianda came down the corridor and looked at Emika, "Emika back to work." she snapped and Emika ran off. I nodded at Trianda who frowned in return I swung my scythe and sliced her neck making her collapse a scarlett fountain poured out her neck. Zeelea looked at me as I stared in horror, Cate had come to the gate completely confused "It this a rebelion?" He asked Zeelea who then slid down her hood making Cate gasp. "Zeelea what the hell?" he asked her she smiled at him and took the keys of Trianda and unlocked his cage. "Where's Majenda?" Berry asked, Zeelea pointed at me and Berry gasped. Emika came back round the corner and stared at Zeelea helping Cate and Berry escape and Trianda dead on the floor and me just stood there. Zeelea put her finger to her lips and signalled her scythe slicing Emika's head off, Zeelea went round the cages unlocking everyone letting all the rebels out. They thanked her and all ran off.
"Okay we should get out of here." Emika said picking up Trainda's scythe.
"What makes you think we will come with you traitor?" Cate snapped.
"What is going on?" Zeelea asked.
"She turned me and Berry in by leading us into a trap." he growled, Zeelea held her scythe near Emika's throat and I pushed it away.
"Good it might of knocked sense in by showing you, you can't trust everyone ein stein." I said, Emika smiled at me greatfully.
"So Emika who are you?" I asked.
"I'm a rebel just like Cate." she said uncertainly.
"No your not." Berry chimed in.
"My brother and I were on a mission here when he was attacked and I enrolled to be a grim reaper so I could be a mole." Emika explained.
"You wanted to be a blind creature who lives underground?" Berry asked.
"No not that type of mole." Zeelea explained, Emika sighed.
"We should leave." she said and I agreed so we are on our way out so I'll tell you more later bye.

Majenda ^_^
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Re: Dear Journal

Postby ChrissieFoxStar101 » Sun Dec 11, 2011 3:42 pm

Love it! Its so awesome!
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Re: Dear Journal

Postby Nonexsitent » Sun Dec 11, 2011 3:49 pm

ChrissieFoxStar101 wrote:Love it! Its so awesome!

If you like this you MIGHT like my story of Crystal at this thread viewtopic.php?f=57&t=925109
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Re: Dear Journal

Postby Unizorn » Tue Dec 13, 2011 9:52 am

This is great! I love both of them.
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Re: Dear Journal

Postby Nonexsitent » Wed Dec 14, 2011 7:42 am

Unizorn wrote:This is great! I love both of them.

ty very much your very kind!!

Dear Hope,
We are in cages! Yep we got thrown in cages, well if your wondering what the hell happened ask Emika, SHE said she knew a way out, SHE said she was sure the grim reapers had left the area, SHE said that we were sure to get out! To make things worst I killed like eight people grim reapers trying to escape and I know this may sound stupid but I feel bad about it. Like they were people too once, Emika told me it gets easier, I hate Emika right now because why WE are in CAGES, SHE runs around FREE helping them by doing her JOB. Cate, Zeelea and Berry are in seperate cages to me they are togther and I am on my own with a guy who I'm sure is dead, Berry is weeping because she is scared they'll check our wrists. If they do she'll live it will be me, Cate and Zeelea who suffers then, hang on a man is coming I'll leave you here open under a cloth so I can tell you what happens later.

Hey girl Majenda the name is Jason, I'm not dead and I have an idea to escape, Emika is my cousin and I'm sad to hear Dan died he was like a brother to me so wake me up when you come back and I'll tell you the idea. Jason

OH MY GOD SOMEONE READ YOU!! Who cares...he's got a plan to escape that's good because the grim reapers asked me to join them and Emika's his cousin wow hope he's not a traitor too. Wait...I wonder where he got another coloured pen from? Hang a sec waking him up now...

The boy Jason has a fantastic plan to lead us out of here then he told me that he'd take Emika too, I was happy with that since he explained she could get lost on her way to the bathroom in her own house. When I woke him up he was so happy that I did.
"So Majenda sorry bout reading your journal, your stepfather was so cruel." He said I winced when he mentioned my stepfather he must of saw the wince because he apologized to me.
"No it's okay really he was a jerk." I said not saying what I was thinking then and there.
"Great so this is my plan." He said then described his plan to me and no I'm not writing it down in case more people read it. I wrote it down on piece of paper I ripped out of you Hope sorry and threw it at Cate and Zeelea, Zeelea caught it and read it the three of them nodded and Emika was near their cage so they told her and she nodded bravely. Now to put the plan in action...

Majenda ^_^ And Jason =) PS: I got a pen from myself since I also have a Journal!
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