Writers, UNITE!

[TrebleMaker]

I want to join the Writing Army!
Username:
Blackbeltgirlie
Do you promise to write something at LEAST once a week?
Hmm, I'll try, or atleast add-on to my current story, but no promises.
What's your favorite color?
Orange <3
Animal?
Snow Leopard
Fish?
Kissing Fish {The ones with the huge lips, they make me laugh so hard xD}
Type of mythical creature?
Hobbit
Do you like fairies, elves, or evil creatures?
Fairies & Elves, yes!
Anything else:
I'm currently writing a story (book) -Rewriting-, and was wondering if you guys could critique what I've got so far? (The re-written stuff)

[brinh]

I want to join the Writing Army!
Username:
Blackbeltgirlie
Do you promise to write something at LEAST once a week?
Hmm, I'll try, or atleast add-on to my current story, but no promises.
What's your favorite color?
Orange <3
Animal?
Snow Leopard
Fish?
Kissing Fish {The ones with the huge lips, they make me laugh so hard xD}
Type of mythical creature?
Hobbit
Do you like fairies, elves, or evil creatures?
Fairies & Elves, yes!
Anything else:
I'm currently writing a story (book) -Rewriting-, and was wondering if you guys could critique what I've got so far? (The re-written stuff)

I would be willing to do a little critic, if you would like. :3

[TrebleMaker]

Would you like me to post it here, or PM you? I'm not yet sure if I'm accepted, so I'm unsure if I should post here or not. :3

[brinh]

Sure, a PM would be fine.

[TrebleMaker]

Sent, if anyone else would like to read it, shoot me a PM! ;3

[♥Black-cat-spirit♥]

storms,I think your stories are too good for critic ^^ Keep writing! XD And I'm in the midst of writing one,and I have a title for it already. (Golden Spirit)

It's about a Golden Retriever named Rose who ran away from her owner and found a nearly dead fox kit and took it in as her own. but soon after the fox kit grows old enough to catch it's own food,she dies(of something....can't figure out what yet XD ) and the fox is on it's own. Haven't done the end yet =/

And blackbelt,I don't think you should post until you're accepted

[brinh]

storms,I think your stories are too good for critic ^^ Keep writing! XD And I'm in the midst of writing one,and I have a title for it already. (Golden Spirit)

It's about a Golden Retriever named Rose who ran away from her owner and found a nearly dead fox kit and took it in as her own. but soon after the fox kit grows old enough to catch it's own food,she dies(of something....can't figure out what yet XD ) and the fox is on it's own. Haven't done the end yet =/

And blackbelt,I don't think you should post until you're accepted

Aw, thank you very much! I don't especially think my writing is much good, but everyone else thinks so, so I'm totally out voted. >.<

That idea sounds sad. I do like the idea, though, I really think you should go with it!

[♥Black-cat-spirit♥]

XD yeah,and I just remembered (I forgot to say it lol ) that Rose's spirit stays with her though,and Crystal(the fox) finds out that Rose had a pup. A girl,and it had been named Penny. Penny was hidden from the fox because Rose had been afraid that they wouldn't get along. XD And Penny looks just like Rose (but is the same age as Crystal)

[brinh]

Oh, that would be so cute! So, Crystal would try and meet up with Penny?

[♥Black-cat-spirit♥]

>< small story change(itmakes more sence XD ) the pup was taken from Rose when it was older,because her old owner couldn't keep it. But the pup got away,and it remembers it's mother. XD and yes, sort of. Crystal bumped into Penny once,and noticed that it looked like Rose. Crystal looked sad,and Penny asked what was wrong,and that basically led up to them knowing they were step sistersXD sorta