~The Life of Gabriella~ (Pet Diary)

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Re: ~The Life Of Gabriella~ (Pet Diary)

Postby labradude » Sat Dec 10, 2011 10:13 am

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Re: ~The Life Of Gabriella~ (Pet Diary)

Postby kkthekat » Sun Dec 11, 2011 4:56 am

This is a great story, very suspenseful...which I plan to stalk. xD
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Re: ~The Life Of Gabriella~ (Pet Diary)

Postby Spence » Sun Dec 11, 2011 6:00 am

kkthekat wrote:This is a great story, very suspenseful...which I plan to stalk. xD

Thank you! Welcome to the club ;)

I must say, I never saw that one coming. It appears you guys have turned to like Storm more then Zak. This was unexpected of you, but alright. I'm setting up a new poll now, as I think we need a more... catchy name, don't you think? Besides; it'll come in handy when we make a new book. Yes. There will be a new book soon, possibly very shortly. Now here's the next edition of Gabby's diary.

Dear Diary,

Yes! Yes, yes, yes, yes, yes! Haha, none other then my big bro Brandon came knocking at the door. Oh right! I totally forgot to put a picture of him in here! Well here he is:
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He came looking for mom, but I answered the door. He had heard about how I was missing and he was coming to keep mom company. Speeking of which, where is mom? Ah well. Huh? There's, like, crashing outside on the lawn. They invented windows for a reason. OH NOT AGAIN. I am so sick of all of this. Zak. Emmett. Luki. Storm. It appears something bad is about to happen. Imma take down this conversation, that's for sure.
OH BRANDON. ARE YOU DUMB? DON'T GO OUT THERE. Okay. Now it's Zak, Emmett, Luki, Storm, and Brandon. This won't end well. If one of them kills my brother, Imma open a can of whoop-tail, that's for sure.
(And to keep track of who's talking, I'll use the black pen for Brandon, Red for Zak, Yellow for Emmett, Blue for Luki, and Purple for Storm)

"What's going on here?"

"Brandon. It appears your sister has gotten herself into some trouble. I'm here to set it right."

"Yeah right, Emmett! You've already held her captive and tried to kill her!"

"...What?"

"Well at least I wasn't lieing to her, unlike you. You were going to kill her. I already explained. That gun was FAKE, I just had to get you away from her for awhile; so I could kill you.

"I hope you don't mind me butting in, but I'm.. um... Oh hi, Brandon."

"Oh, Storm. It's you. I thought we made it clear we don't want you here."

Oh really? You won't be saying that after I save your sister myself!"

"Oh really, Storm? You'll do it yourself, huh? I'd like to make a bet on that.

"Haha, me too. I'd like to see you win this yourself."

He just growled..."Then maybe I will. Brandon, get out of the way. Things are about to get messy." So Brandon's backing away, and Emmett and Luki walked over to the driveway.

"I hope you won't get mad once Gabby's mine, Storm."

"You wish, Zakery. Bring it on."

I'm not sure I want to watch this... I- I think I'm just going to stop writing for a few minutes to see how this turns out. I just need to put a note on you. Okay, there we go. I wrote out "Should I, Gabby, be killed it is my wish this book be opened and read by my family, friends, and the person(s) responsible for the accident. -Gabby".

Sincerley, Gabby
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Re: ~The Life Of Gabriella~ (Pet Diary)

Postby labradude » Sun Dec 11, 2011 6:05 am

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Re: ~The Life Of Gabriella~ (Pet Diary)

Postby Spence » Sun Dec 11, 2011 6:08 am

And for some odd reason my Poll isn't co-operating. Please ignore the doubled options!
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Re: ~The Life Of Gabriella~ (Pet Diary)

Postby Unizorn » Sun Dec 11, 2011 6:23 am

Don't feel bad, techno stuff never goes right for me! :lol:
I'M BACK BABY! - quote shinigami from Soul Eater
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Re: ~The Life Of Gabriella~ (Pet Diary)

Postby AbbeyDawn » Sun Dec 11, 2011 6:45 am

Sames, and suspenzez! You must WRITE! *Chucks pens at you*
"є ν є я у т н ι и g in life is тємρσяαяу, because everything ¢ н α и g є ѕ. That's why it takes great ¢συяαgє to l σ ν є, knowing it might є и ∂ anytime but having the fαιтн it will last f σ я є ν є я
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Re: ~The Life Of Gabriella~ (Pet Diary)

Postby Spence » Sun Dec 11, 2011 6:47 am

DNB0928 wrote:Coolio!

...Yes xD

Unizorn wrote:Don't feel bad, techno stuff never goes right for me! :lol:

Lol. When does it work? XD

AbbeyDawn wrote:Sames, and suspenzez! You must WRITE! *Chucks pens at you*

Hey now! I'm working on it! :lol:
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Re: ~The Life Of Gabriella~ (Pet Diary)

Postby AbbeyDawn » Sun Dec 11, 2011 6:50 am

*Narrows eyes* You'd better be. Good story BTW, but not enough of it!
"є ν є я у т н ι и g in life is тємρσяαяу, because everything ¢ н α и g є ѕ. That's why it takes great ¢συяαgє to l σ ν є, knowing it might є и ∂ anytime but having the fαιтн it will last f σ я є ν є я
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Re: ~The Life Of Gabriella~ (Pet Diary)

Postby Unizorn » Sun Dec 11, 2011 6:55 am

I'm with Dawn.
I'M BACK BABY! - quote shinigami from Soul Eater
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