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anothersketch by BlueKestrel

Artist BlueKestrel [gallery]
Time spent 33 minutes
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anothersketch

Postby BlueKestrel » Sun Dec 11, 2011 2:06 pm

has some anatomy issues but thats ok.. comments and crits welcome :)
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Re: anothersketch

Postby sivan » Sun Dec 11, 2011 2:20 pm

It's very great! Somethings I find that caught my eye are how it looks like it's loping to the side, like a side pass at a lope. It's still good that way if you put a rider on top of it XD I love it when horses do that though so ya. Another thing is that the chest is popping out a little too much.
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Re: anothersketch

Postby BlueKestrel » Sun Dec 11, 2011 3:26 pm

haha yeah i noticed the chest thing im gonna fix it after i finish my current picture :) thanks
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