Re: Adoptable 3

Postby Feonix » Tue Nov 22, 2011 12:51 am

This guy needs more love. ^^ He's very handsome looking. I love the shades as well as his simplicity.
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Re: Adoptable 3

Postby Chipchap » Tue Nov 22, 2011 12:51 am

uuuuh i would put him in my pocket if i could! :0
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Re: Adoptable 3

Postby DecafBunny » Wed Nov 30, 2011 12:01 pm

Is this love?
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Re: Adoptable 3

Postby nixxiona » Fri Dec 02, 2011 10:41 am

will be trying for him<33333 already started some art!
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Re: Adoptable 3 (Open for adoption)

Postby orange.c y r u s♥ » Sun Dec 04, 2011 6:35 am

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Re: Adoptable 3 (Open for adoption)

Postby Transmute » Sun Dec 04, 2011 10:26 am

Blah, withdrawing.
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Re: Adoptable 3 (Open for adoption)

Postby Tisha-Nick » Sun Dec 04, 2011 11:48 am

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Nickname: Trio

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((First Sight))
Trio opened his eyes to the blurry sight. Blinking to make his vision more clear he looks around the Dark brown den also as he takes in the smells of his brothers and sisters. His Nose was overwhelmed with sweet,dusty smells of the dirt,flowers and the left over meat on the other side of the den. Yipping he lifted his shaky head up trying to see more out from the den but all he could see was the blue waves of grass that covered the ground of Isket. A Grin formed on his face as he crawled back to his siblings and mother. He yawned it was one exiting morning but maybe the next day would be better. He slowly fell to sleep against his mother warm,cozy fur.
((ChildHood))
Trio Leaped from the den growling. "I will get you!" He yelled as his two siblings ran from him. He grinned jumping towards them as she screamed running away.
"Stop it Trio we arnt your prey!" They ran from him.
Triopas lifted his head and tail jumping onto a small boulder. "I will be the greatest hunter there is in Isket!" He raised his tail smiling.
His siblings laughed at him rolling on there backs. "You A hunter!" They rolled around laughing still.
Trio lowered his head dropping his ears. He looked off into the woods and thought someday I will show them. He flicks a small smile and sighs again jumping down. He watches his siblings run and play. Sitting there he swishes his tail against the ground and turns to face his mother. "Mom?" He asked running to her front paws. "Will I be a good hunter?"
His mother chuckled licking his head and smiling. "Of course dear." She wrapped her front paw around him bringing him closer to her. "You will always be my little hunter."
Trio licked his mother nose. "Thanks mommy." He smiled waging his tail and he wiggled from her grasp running to play with his siblings.
"Lets play a game!"
They all looked at him and barked. "Ok!"
"What game?" Trio youngest sister, Evie, asked with a wag with her tail,
Trio thought for a moment then looked around. "Tag?"
They all shake there heads.
"Hide and Seek!"
The waged there tails and bounced around. "Everyone hide!"
Trio closed his eyes counting. "1,2....3,4.....5." He opened his eyes a little looking around. "Im coming." He jumped up with a laugh as he fell back down on his face but that didn't stop him and he looked around. Sniffing the ground then the air he raised his tail listening to the small sounds around him. He stood there then grinned jumping into a small bush. "I GOT YOU!" but nobody was there so he huffed. "Guess ill look..." He jumped to the next bush onto his sister.
"OW!" She whined. "Get off me!" She pushed him off with her paws. "Next time don't hurt me!" She skipped lightly from the bush sitting down licking her paws. "I'm as Breakable as a Flower." She snorted.
Trio rolled his eyes and bounced off looking for his other siblings more. "Where could they be?" He asked himself. He pranced along more looking behind every tree and bush. He stopped and wrinkled his nose. "This isn't fair!" He thumped down sitting there looking around. He scowled and sighed standing back up. "They must be with mom!" He nods turning around running to the den. "Mama Mama!" He yelled sliding into the den. He opened his eyes smiling as he looked up at his mom and siblings.
"Why where you Triopas?" She narrowed her eyes.
"I was playing Hide and seek with the others!"
"Then how come your siblings are here?"
He lowered his head. "But...we where playing..." He looked up.
His mother shook her head softly. "Come on lets go to bed." She picks him up walking to the back of the den. "Now go to sleep." She put him down next to his siblings and she turned around laying in front of them. "Good night my dears." She yawned falling asleep slowly.
"Good-Night mommy." Trio yawned curling into a ball next to his siblings and he too fell asleep fast.
((Teen))
I thought for a moment looking around the Isket land. "What A nice day." I smiled and stood up slowly turning around to walk down the hill. I stopped and thought again but shrugged it off. "Just a weird thought Trio forget about it." Flicking my tail I slowly started to take off into a running pace into the woods. Running for hours made me feel better my thoughts had stopped. "It now was just me and the woods." Freezing in my tracks I turned around to a bush that started to make a rustling sound. Growling I turned around. "Come out!" waiting couple of minutes a little hare jumped from the bush. Sighing with relief I chuckled. "Only a hare." Why you so scared Trio? I sat there starting to think again. I growled shaking my head. "No stop it Triopas forget it!" I sighed then layed there facing the small pond lake. I slowly moved my paw into the water and smiled to the feel of the cold water to my paws. Yawning I closed my eyes and drifted off to sleep.
[b]Dream

Jumping awake I stood there. "Night time already?" I looked around this wasn't right Why was the pond? The woods? I turned and slowly started to walk around seeing if I would find anyone. "Nothing." I huffed and stood there my ears back and tail down. I narrowed my eyes. "Wait a minute?" I looked ahead seeing a greenish blur. I stepped forward making my way towards the blur. "Who are you?" I asked looking at it from behind.
The animal turned around and spoke "I have come for you Trio."
A Kronadors! I stepped back I haven't seen one yet but I was sure that this was one. The pack always talked about them and how they looked. I am sure this was a Kronadors!
"How do you know my name!"
She Kronador chuckled showing his teeth. "Thats for me to know and you to find out!"
I back up a little until I ran into the tree behind me. I looked back then back at the Kronador. 'What now Trio?' I thought and smiled. "Come and get me then!" He raised my head growling
The Kronador growled swiping his back feet against they ground as he kicked up dirt and grass. I lowered my head and grinned waiting. He charged getting closer and closer. When he was couple feet from me I jumped away in time as he slammed his head into the tree.
Shaking his head dizzy you growled. "You will pay for that!" He shook his head again.
I laughed and smiled.
He got up and before I could think what happened I saw a Flash of yellowish white teeth come into my face.
Awake Now!
I jumped from my sleep. Yawning I stood up and sighed siting down looking at the water. "Just a dear Trio dont worry." I huffed and stood up slowly. Turning around he heard the howls from the pack. He frowned there songs of howls seemed peaceful but they started to turn from nice and calm to upset and a cry of thunder. He nudged himself forward looking for the rest of the pack. 'What is wrong?' He thought as he started to run a bit faster pass the trees that flew past him as he ran.
He slides to a stop as he seems a group of wolves in a circle. He caught the eyes of his sister. Her face sinks and she lifts her head to a sad lone howl. He stood there eyes still blank.
Evie walked over to her brother and see looked him the eyes. "It was...mother." A tear falls from her eyes and she turns her head. "Its was the Kronadors." She growled at the thought and looked back up at Trio. "Im Sorry brother." She licks his muzzle and walks away into the woods.
Trio couldnt believe it. "Mother?" He put his ears back and walked slowly to the other wolves still standing there. He stood there and he started to cry but he chocked it back. He lifted his head and closed his eyes. 'Its just another Dream Trio!' He growled from the inside. 'Now wake up!!'
A familiar voice came to his ears and he opened his eyes to see Electric infront of him. "Im sorry for you loss Trio." He nods and walks off past him. "See is in a better place right now." He sighs and walks off.
Trio growled. They would all pay for what they did to her. He lifted his head and howled to pay respect for his mother. He put his head and he neck and started to cry. "I will miss you mother." He dropped his tail and stood up straight. "Good-Bye" He whispers and turns away past everyone leaving his lifeless mother there. He looked up still seeing his Sister and Electric standing there. He nods to them both as they nod back and he walks away from them into meadow. He walked for hours still thinking of his mother and how this could have happened. He stopped and looked up at the den where he was born. He huffed and walked into the den laying down where his mother and father would always sleep at night.
Tears started to come to Trio eyes and he had images from when he was a pup playing with his siblings and parents. He cried some more as he started to cry himself back to sleep. He shakes his head. "Mother wouldnt want sorrow and for everyone to be sad." He stood up and looked around the den. "She would want us to move on." He said to himself and smiled thinking of her voice. He walks from the den and looks over his shoulder. He smiled and lowered his head as he walked back into the woods.
Trio sat there and nods his head back and forth.
"Triopas?" Evie voice came soft and sad.
Trio opened his eyes looking at his sister. "Yes Evie?" He asked still sitting there.
"Are you..ok?"
He nods and sighs. "Ill be fine." He shakes his head.
Evie huffs. "Im sorry..."
Trio growls. "Dont be Evie it isnt your fault." He stands up.
Evie lowers her head and whines.
Trio sees the sadness in his sister and nudges her. "Come on." He nuzzles her. "Cheer up sister."
"How can I Trio? She is gone!"
Trio nods. "You can Evie because she isnt gone she is still in are hearts and mind."
Evie smiles. "Thanks Trio!"
He smiles back at her.
Evie stands up proud and runs off back into the woods. She stops and nods her head to her brother and slowly vanishes in the woods.
Trio smiles happy to see Evie now happy. He lays down and yawns licking his lips.


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What is a WoI?
Warriors Of Isket fight the Kronadors,a mix of reptiles and hoofed animals. The group of these are called Koronadors, to fine peace in there land.
A warrior of isket could be a big wolf with Normal ears, Long ears or really Short ears and 3 other different tails as well.
Also A Warrior of Isket will always have really special Armor! their armor also must always have a chest plate and a back plate.
Armor was made by the humans long long ago.

What are Warriors of Isket?
Warriors of Isket fight to find peace for the land of Isket, against the Kronadors.

What does a Warrior of Isket look like?
A warrior of isket could be a big wolf with Normal ears, Long ears or really Short ears and 3 other different tails as well.
Also A Warrior of Isket will always have really special Armor! their armor also must alway have a chest plate and a back plate.

Different types:

Big Wolf with long ears and a long fluffy tail.
Big wolf with normal ears and a long tail.
Big wolf with normal ears and a normal (round ended) tail
Big wolf with short ears and a curled tail.

No other types!

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What are the colors of Isket? the grass waves blue like the ocean and the mountains are kissed with the smallest tint of red. A place where the night sky blankets the land letting all the nights life burst alive.
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What kind of armor do WoI teenies get? teenies get wooden armor also known as training armor before getting there real armor. They Have to Earn there New Armor first too.
I we use real canine years so:
newborn (1-4 month)
pup/trainee (5 month - 1 year)
Soldier ( with 1 Year)

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Eye/Face "Why do you cry Trio??"
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Here Comes Trio!!
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Personality:
[center]Positive About Triopas

Loyal

Triopas is very Loyal to his pack and would never leave them in a time in need.
Friendly

Thats What they know him for being nice to everyone!
Brave

Trio is very brave. He tries not to be scared in battles but he wants to do his best to make everyone happy.
Sweet

Yep Very sweet and loving.
Fast

Trio can run for long times without stopping. So its kinda hard to out run him sometimes.
Negative

Fear

Trio fears lots of stuff but one thing he fears alot is Death because he rather watch the wolves around him grow and maybe someday have a family of his own. The other thing is he will be alone....
Aggressive

Its really isn't his natural to be mean but when it comes down to keeping his friends and pack safe he will try his best. ((He never takes his angry out on the pack))
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Likes

Food,Being Around the pack,Snow, Running
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Dislikes

Kronadors,Thunder Storms, Rain, Fight ((Unless its to keep someone safe))
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Re: Adoptable 3 (Open for adoption)

Postby nixxiona » Mon Dec 05, 2011 10:58 am

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the story that will be here, i warn you, is mostly not a good one. just wait.


the day i left the cave, i will forever regret. the day was new, mist and dew dripping off everything. the night had been long and cold, snuggled up with my mother and my two brothers, radan and kitra. i had hoped to show my mother that day that i was not as weak as she thought, being the runt. my two brothers had always bullied me as a younger pup, i was helpless and blind as a bat with my eyes stil closed for a while after theirs opened. my little wet nose was very cold, as a sneezed a flurry of water droplets flew up from the grass. from my right, i heard a cricket still peeping in the early morning, and from the lake behind me i heard bullfrogs beginning to croak. i began to see the reddish tinges touching the sky of sunrise. the blue grass in my field began to look like it had little embers on it as the sunrise lit up the water droplets to an orange color. i all of a sudden burst out in energy and leapt through the field, disturbing the droplets, and soaking my paws and lower belly. i ran to the edge of the field and saw the great pine seemingly climbing up into the sky, for it was so tall that the birds flew past its top. "i wonder what it would be like to fly." i said, knowing none would hear me. i watched a large bird, a hawk as my mother called it, climb the invisible air ladder up to its nest up at the tip of the great pine. it had a medium sized fish in its claws, probably from the lake nearest to our den. it was quite difficult to catch the fish that leap in and out of the river. as i watched the bird feed it's babies, i did not realize the brightness of the day. soon my mother would awake.
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as i trotted along, i remembered that i had been gone for more than half the day, and i was starving. "mm, the reason i came. to hunt!" i said. my motherhad never allowed me to hunt by myself, she thought i was too small. sure, my brothers were larger and maybe even stronger, i could be just as good as them! i will get my armor someday! "hmm.... where should i hunt?" i said, unsure abut this. "The owl's hollow! that old hollow always seems to have squirrels in it collecting the nuts!" i said, as i ran off towards the tree with the big hole in it. as soon as i arrived, it was quite a way away from my den, it had begun to darken. "oh... i dont think i can get home in time! mother must be looking for me!" i said, slightly worried, but keeping my cool. a young wolf in the forest is never safe after dark.
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I listened closely, and pricked my ears, hearing the river roaring louder than usual, for it had just rained. as i heard this, i spotted a toad leaping through the moss.
"oh, where are you going?"
"RRRRrriBBbit"
"oh well, may i folow along?"
" RRribbit RRIBBit"
"well, i will be going along, then. it was nice seeing you!"
i trotted along the ravine, my feet padded by the moss. The roaring water sent up mist, brushing against my face. it felt so wonderful, the mist on my face, i felt calmed. i looked into the ravine, and saw something i have never seen, or even heard of before. there, deep in the ravine, was a wolf walking towards me. but it was not just any wolf, but a wolf made of mist. it had shocking blue eyes, a warrior's eyes. his armor was silver, lined with blue. it glittered in the late evening sun. it was just like what i wanted my armor to look like. it was a bit like mother's,with chainlinks and simple pieces, elegant but fierce. it was light, perfect for me, wanting to be a scout. the wolf was right next to me by the time i returned from my thoughts. his eyes were like shards of ice, blue as the winter sky. he opened his mouth to speak, but my ears heard nothing, even though the words were in my head.
"you will be a powerful young warrior, but rethink your choices. even if you think you need armor to be strong, that is not all it is. you must train for your journey to get your armor. even if you are left from the rest, you can find your way."
and then as i opened my eyes, he was gone. "wait! where did you go! i need to ask you...." i stood there, looking into the mist, trying to catch a glimpse of the wolf's blue eyes, but never thinking about what would happen next. i stood there with my nose to the sky, waiting to see the stars, and as the stars began to come out i began to drift off.....
-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------i awoke in the middle of the black, i had fallen asleep in the middle of the woods! i hurriedly stood up, momentarily forgetting my encounter. "oh, i bet it was just a dream" i mumbled, not wanting to believe my own eyes. after i stretched, i turned to my right, having seen something glinting out of the corner of my eye. " a medallion!" i whispered, in shock. it had the mysterious wolf's image on it, seemingly running. he had a marking on his leg identical to mine. it felt like i recognised him.... "father?" i muttered under my breath. the medallion's image moved! the wolf stood, facing towards me, with piercing blue eyes, just like the wolf i had seen last night. so it was'nt a dream... i thought. the wolf was real! i raced back to the ravine, hoping the mist would show me him again.
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What is a WoI?
Warriors of Isket fight to find peace for the land of Isket, against the Kronadors.
A warrior of isket could be a big wolf with Normal ears, Long ears or really Short ears and 3 other different tails as well.
Also A Warrior of Isket will always have really special Armor! their armor also must alway have a chest plate and a back plate.
Different types:

Big Wolf with long ears and a long fluffy tail.
Big wolf with normal ears and a long tail.
Big wolf with noraml ears and a normal (round ended) tail
Big wolf with short ears and a curled tail.

No other types!


What are the colors of Isket?
What does the land of Isket look like?
blueish grass, plants, white rivers, redisch mountains, more night then a sunny day. so therefore the colors are blue, white, and reddish brown ?

What kind of armor do WoI teenies get?
teenies get wooden armor for training.
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Re: Adoptable 3 (Open for adoption)

Postby MissKiwiBird » Tue Dec 06, 2011 10:03 am

Name:
Alekto. Goes by Eko. Greek Name meaning "Unceasing"

Story:
(WiP)

What is a WoI?
A WoI is one of the many wolves that fight for peace in the land of Isket. They try to stop the cruel kronadors that bring hate to the land.

What are the colors of Isket?
The grass there is blue. The rivers all run with a color of white, while the mountains there are red. The land is mostly possessed by night.

What kind of armor do WoI teenies get?
Wooden armor for training

Art:
(WiP)

I meant to drop out of this a long time ago but never did. I just don't feel the connect for this WOI like someone else might. He is beautiful, though(:
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Kiran

Postby velvel » Thu Dec 08, 2011 3:52 pm

Name: Kiran
Story: Scroll Down...
What is a WoI? WoI's are the Warriors of Isket. They Fight for Peace in Isket against the Kronadors.
What are the colors of Isket? The grass in Isket is a nice teal while the mountains are a reddish color. The waters are white.
What kind of armor do WoI teenies get? Teenies get wooden training armor.
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Run.
That was the first thing I thought when the kronador appeared. He had seemed to come almost out of nowhere, either that or I was too deep in thought. I was just strolling along minding my own business, and he just appeared.

But I shouldn't just start you off in the middle of a story. Let me tell you how I got in this mess.

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It was a beautiful night, the stars shone brightly. The white waters of a nearby stream sang a song I couldn't understand. The night was peaceful.
Until he decided to join me.
It was my older brother, Syrin. He was the first to come out. I was the last. You can already see the relationship we had. He walked up to me grinning. He was always such a "good boy"...around my mother that is. My mother would always say thing to me like "Oh Kiran, you really should be much more like Syrin." or "Kiran, why don't you go play with Syrin." . It really annoyed me. I mean, it's not like I hated my brother it's just that him being my mom's favorite really got annoying after a while. Sure, he was stronger, braver, faster, larger, and a better hunter than I was, but you don't need to brag about it.
Anyway, he walked up to me. He had his usually smug grin on his face. The grin he would wear when was planning to do something to me. He looked at me and his grin grew even wider. I frowned. He said rather loudly "HI BROTHER!" and shoved all of his body weight onto my side. I fell over and yelped in pain. Syrin just sneered. "Gotcha." he said to me. "Yeah, yeah yeah, just get off of me, now." I wiggled out from underneath him and shook the dirt off of my fur. He got up and waited a second before saying "Sooo...how're things going? Whatcha doing?"
Now as mean as my brother can be, he did have a nice side. He cared for others, but still made sure they knew who was boss, which was obviously him.
"Oh nothing," I replied, "just out here looking around."
"Oh okay." he said back. "well...I guess I'll leave you to your 'looking around'. See ya later." And he trotted off into the mist.
Yep, that's Syrin. Plays a trick on you then disappears.
Pushing what just happened out of my mind, I semi limped off. I wasn't really "looking around", I was hunting. A social order had been established in our family, and I was at the bottom. So while my brothers and sisters feasted, was forced to wait for them to finish. And when they actually did finish, there was hardly anything left. So, in order to survive, I went out hunting for myself. I usually didn't catch much. Often a rabbit or a fish or such. I didn't have the huntig skills Syrin had.
But there was one thing that I did have that he didn't. That was intelligence. A mind that processes and thinks about stuff. While syrin just tailgated the deer, I'd take a different path and catch up to it. The deer would stop in it's tracks when it saw me appear out of nowhere, then Syrin and the rest of the family would go in for the kill. But of course I never got any credit for it.
Rustle Rustle
I heard a noise behind me. A rabbit? I thought. I cautiously turned around and carefully stalked over towards the noise. Maybe if I could just use the element of surprise...
WHOOSH!
A large hare dashed out of the bush and sprinted past me. I quickly turned around and chased right after it. The hare wasn't so fast. He seemed to have an injured front paw. Even better I thought with glee. I was now running at full speed and I was almost at the hare now. Closer, closer, my dear dinner. I was just about to pounce when the hare made a sudden sharp right turn...and what I saw in front of me struck me like a blow to the head.
It was a cliff. And a rather large one at that, too. It is what our family had called "Death's Drop" and our mother had been clear to advise that we stay as far away from it as possible.
Well, I was probably a little to concentrated on dinner, I completely forgot about it.
I tried to stop, my claws digging into the ground. Skidded a few feet, then started to slow down.
No, no, no...It can end here... I thought desperately as I continued to skid towards the cliff.
Closer and closer i got to the cliff...I was going to die...I could see the ragging white waters below...
Then I stopped.
Just like that. About to inches from the very edge, I stopped.
I sat there, puzzled, wondering what had happened, then I hit me that I was alive. I wasn't falling to a watery death, I was alive.
I let out a heavy sigh of relief and let all of my weight fall onto the ground...
CR-R-R-RACK!
My heart started pounding. I looked behind and saw a large crack in the ground quickly forming a foot behind me. I froze in shock. Two seconds later, the ground fell from beneath me. I tried to leap to safe ground, but, alas, I failed. I fell down, I could see the river rapidly getting larger and larger as I plummeted to my death.
SPLASH!
I crashed into the waters below. Water filled my nostrils. I struggled for air. I reached the surface, only to grasp a small breath of air before the rapids pushed me back under. I fought the current, trying to keep it from pushing me too far down. I burst to the surface and managed to stay up there to catch my breath. The current grew strangely calm all of a sudden and I sat there floating. I was filled with relief. Maybe I would survive this after all...
Then I heard it. A faint roaring sound, seeming to grow louder as a swam with the current. It then got so loud that I turned around and looked downstream. What lie ahead took all my hope for surviving and crushed it.
It was a huge waterfall.
I turned around and tried paddling upstream. It didn't help. The force of the current was to strong. The edge grew increasingly near until-
I plunged over the edge. It looked like a good 100 feet 'til I would reach the bottom. I was certain I was going to die. Faster and faster I plummeted down...
KER-SPLASH!!!
The water slapped me. Pain shocked my body and I couldn't move for a few seconds. When I could, I painfully paddled up to the surface. I broke into air and gasped fr life. My whole body was in pain and it hurt to even breathe. I let the current carry me as I slid into unconsciousness...

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I woke up on the river shore. My body was in pain, and I tried to get up, but collapsed instead. I let out a heavy sigh. It hurt to breathe, and I was wheezing. My whole body ached, there was blood coming down the side of my face, and I had a terrible headache. I once more tried to get up, but yet again failed. I could hear water swishing around in my ears. I sneezed. I think I saw blood come out, I'm not sure. My eyesight was blurry, and my nose was stuffed. I tried to look around, analyze my surroundings. There was what looked like an old tree to my left, and large boulders to my right. The sun was just coming up. I wondered how long I had been unconscious...
I thought about that for a moment then decided to check myself out. My left hind leg ached terribly and the right one seemed fine. My arms and legs were sore from paddling. I think I banged my head on something while I was unconscious in the river.
Enough about my body, I need to see if I can find a way back home. I got up successfully and limped off to find some food or something. Maybe if I just found an abandoned den I could rest...
I was in luck. I happened to spot an empty den. I crawled inside and fell asleep right away...

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Kiran woke up in a strange place. He looked around not knowing where the heck he was. He wandered around, trying to understand where he was. He came across a pool of water. It seemed to glow and beckoned Kiran towards it. Kiran walked towards it cautiously. He stared into his reflection. His face was perfect, not a flaw in sight. He took a drink from the pool, and found that it was sweet and refreshing. Kiran drank his fill and trotted off. He went around the corner and saw a freshly killed deer lying on the ground. He carefully walked up to it and looked around to see if there were any others around that might have killed this deer. He smelled no one, so it looked at the carcass again. He sniffed it and it smelled delicious, so he dug in. Once he had stuffed himself, he trotted off into the woods. He had only been walking for a few moments when he was struck with pain. It felt that something was tearing him apart from the inside. Kiran screamed and whined in pain and agony. He felt like everything inside of him was being destroyed. The forest around him grew dim and unfriendly. Kiran felt as if he was going to explode!
Then a light appeared. It took form of a wolf like him, its body was white and its eyes where glowing. It looked and him. It took pity on Kiran and walked towards him. It then touched him on the forehead with its nose. All the pain stopped. Kiran was amazed. He got up, shook himself and then asked the white wolf where he was. It just looked at him, then pointed its nose to the north star, then looked back a Kiran. It then looked Kiran stait in the eyes and said "Wake up" Kiran was confused. He was already awake. The white wolf continued, "Wake up, dear Kiran. Wake up from your slumber. Wake up and find your way. Wake up...wake up...wake up" and it began to fade away. Kiran yelled for it to stay, he was confused. The wolf was starting to disappear, and it continued whispering wake up. It finally disappeared. Kiran stood for a moment, alone in these unknown woods. Then a bright light suddenly exploded from where the white wolf had last been and Kiran was blinded.


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I woke up. Someone was saying "wake up!" over and over again. I opened my eyes. It was a little blurry but I made out a brown wolf shape. It was a female. She's saw that my eyes were open and said "Finally you're awake! I thought you were dead!" I just shook my head and said "where am I?"
"Why, you're in my den, silly." she replied.
After hearing that I got up and apologized, and headed on my way. She stopped me. "Where are you going?" she asked. "Oh...uh...nowhere I guess." I replied. "You look horrible," she said. "why don't you just stay here? I wouldn't mind."
I was bewildered by her offer. After intruding her den, she'd let me stay. I accepted the offer and asked her what her name was. "My name is Nhuki." she replied. "What is yours?"
"I'm Kiran."
"And what are you doing out here all alone Kiran?"
"Well..." and I explained to her what had happened since she woke me up. I didn't tell her about the dream though. I wanted to think that matter over before I told some one...
"And why are you out here?" I asked her when I was done.
"Well...um...my mate, Ignis,...he uhh...got killed by a kronador." She said quietly. "All of my pups are grown up, and I have no one to be with. So now I'm just living out here on my own.
I felt empathy for her. "Well I guess I could stay here for a little while and keep you company."
"Really?" She said, looking into my eyes. "How sweet of you."
"So, Nhuki, I'm a kinda hungry. Can we go hunting?"
"Oh, yes, certainly." I followed her into the woods.
Even though we were hunting, my thoughts were elsewhere. Questions raced through my mind I an angry bee.
How is my family doing without me? Have they even noticed I'm gone? Who's Syrin going to pick on? How will they do on hunting? What was that dream about? What was that white wolf talking about? I was so deep in thought I didn't even hear the noise behind me.
Rustle Rustle
I was still thinking when he appeared. The Kronador. But Nhuki noticed. "Kiran! Look out!"
I spun around and saw the giant Kronador. I had only seen these creatures in stories my mother would tell us, but I never saw one in real life. Run was my first instinct but for some reason I didn't
Nhuki threw herself at the Kronador and barked "This is for Ignis!"
Her blow was not effective. She managed to bite the Kronador, but he shook her off and threw her to the ground.
NO! I thought desperately. The Kronador didn't seem interested in her more that he was in me. I stared right through me, his lime green eyes making all else seem dim. I could either run and abandon Nhuki, who wasn't moving, but whimpering softly, or stay and take on the Kronador. My fighting skins were not that great so fighting him wasn't very wise, and I couldn't bear leaving a friend behind. So I looked around.
Then an Idea struck me.
I just stood in place.
"Come and get me" I said to the Kronador.
He grinned and charged
I waited
He got closer still
Wait for it... I thought
When he was about 5 feet away, I dove to the right and he charged right past me. Before he knew what was happening, BANG! he crashed into a large tree. He then lay unconscious against the tree trunk.
I chuckled, then ran over to Nhuki.
She laid there, whimpering ever so softly. "Nhuki! Are you okay!?!?" She looked at me weakly, I could tell she was fading fast.
"Nhuki! Come Nhuki, stay with me! Nhuki! Nhuki don't die! Please Nhuki! Nhuki" I barked. She just looked at me, closed her eyes, and sighed.
I couldn't let this happen. It was my fault she lay here dying. If I hadn't of survived that river, I would have been dead, and she would have been back at her den, safe and sound. I hadn't have even known her for that long. Yet she was such a kind hearted creature.
I tried getting Nhuki to open her eyes again, she did, then closed them again.
I took one look at her then let out a long mournful howl...

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I stayed by Nhuki's side all night. I could hear a faint heartbeat every now and then, and her breathing was raspy. She wasn't dead yet, but she was in pain, and probably unconscious. In the morning, her condition was the same, so I gradually left her to get some food.
While I was out hunting, questions raced through my head. How is my family doing? Will Nhuki be ok? Where will I go? How long has it been since I left? The last one was easy. It seems like it has been two days since I fell off the cliff.
Then something tickled my nose. A sent....a squirrel scent...A nearby squirrel scent. I froze. Squirrels were tricky to catch. With so many trees around, he could easily escape. Maybe if I could corner him...
Then the scent was gone. The squirrel must have smelled my scent and ran off. Dang it! I thought. I went back to Nhuki.
When I got there, she was in the same state and condition. I tried to lick her face, trying to wake he up, but it didn't work.
Another night I spent by Nhuki, and her condition got even worse. I wasn't even sure if she was alive anymore. After another day, I concluded that she was dead. No heartbeat could be heard, no breathing.I took a long look at her then trotted off, painfully leaving her behind.

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