~The Life of Gabriella~ (Pet Diary)

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Re: ~The Life Of Gabriella~ (Pet Diary)

Postby Spence » Thu Dec 08, 2011 7:12 am

Let's clear things up, shall we?

*Blackberry* wrote:Write more!!

I am working on it.

DNB0928 wrote:I know! Zak and Emmet are really da gewd guys and they rescue Gabriella and she marries Zak and they live happily EVAR after!

You may be close to be being right. You might be a character off, though.

*Blackberry* wrote:Then the first book ends so fast, she can make a SECOND ASWSOME BOOK, so we can continue read, you should add a new guy called den, but then Zak date with Garbriella, , then he have another girlfriend but she doesnt know. Once she find out she is so up set that she went away, she then met den and date him.

Unizorn wrote:??? I still think it's a bit too early for a second book...

As much as I love the support for a second book, Unizorn is right. It is still a little to early :)

Next chapter will be really soon C:
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Re: ~The Life Of Gabriella~ (Pet Diary)

Postby labradude » Thu Dec 08, 2011 7:13 am

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Re: ~The Life Of Gabriella~ (Pet Diary)

Postby Spence » Thu Dec 08, 2011 7:24 am

Here we go. Next edtion ;)

Dear Diary,

-groans- ...What just happened? Where am I now? I should probably be scared, huh? HUH WAIT WHAT? Do I hear Emmett from the other side of the door? It's obviously not a very heavy or thick door... Hold on. Time to document another conversation. This'll be good. ERGH. IT IS EMMETT. WHY CAN'T THEY JUST LEAVE ME ALONE?

"Well, Gabby. Here we are. You've disapointed me. I thought you were smarter then that! Don't you remember a couple years back in school when they thought us to avoid three-tails at all circumstances? Obviously not, or I wouldn't have had to save you." ...Huh. "You got lucky, Gabby. Very lucky. All I was trying to do was keep you alive. Your sweet little Zak had a plan, you know. A very bad plan. It is dark now. I must leave for a little bit. I'll explain the rest of it later. For now, Storm and Luki will keep you company. If Zak comes around, scream as loud as you can. I'll be back in a heartbeat."


Sincerley, Gabby
(P.S. Where's my hat?)
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Re: ~The Life Of Gabriella~ (Pet Diary)

Postby Unizorn » Thu Dec 08, 2011 7:26 am

(Shouldn't it be taught, not thought?)
What happened to her hat?!?
I'M BACK BABY! - quote shinigami from Soul Eater
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Re: ~The Life Of Gabriella~ (Pet Diary)

Postby Spence » Thu Dec 08, 2011 7:29 am

Unizorn wrote:(Shouldn't it be taught, not thought?)
What happened to her hat?!?

...Yeah. Typo xD
Nobody knows...
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Re: ~The Life Of Gabriella~ (Pet Diary)

Postby labradude » Thu Dec 08, 2011 7:29 am

It got stolen when the evil but not acting evil posing Emmet turned into a bat and took it, but Zak took it away and in the process sliced off his two tails. Then they lived happily EVAR after. c;
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Re: ~The Life Of Gabriella~ (Pet Diary)

Postby Unizorn » Thu Dec 08, 2011 7:32 am

Will we find out later?
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Re: ~The Life Of Gabriella~ (Pet Diary)

Postby Spence » Thu Dec 08, 2011 7:35 am

DNB0928 wrote:It got stolen when the evil but not acting evil posing Emmet turned into a bat and took it, but Zak took it away and in the process sliced off his two tails. Then they lived happily EVAR after. c;

Interesting theory you got thar XD

Unizorn wrote:Will we find out later?

Sure we will. Eventually.
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Re: ~The Life Of Gabriella~ (Pet Diary)

Postby Unizorn » Thu Dec 08, 2011 7:38 am

WHEN?!?
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Re: ~The Life Of Gabriella~ (Pet Diary)

Postby Spence » Thu Dec 08, 2011 7:38 am

Unizorn wrote:WHEN?!?


SOON.
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