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A horse; by Potato.

Artist Potato. [gallery]
Time spent 1 hour, 14 minutes
Drawing sessions 2
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A horse;

Postby Potato. » Mon Nov 28, 2011 11:28 am

First time using the Oekaki :D
Timer doesnt lie. I truly spent that much time on this drawing... :|
Any crits or comments??

Feel free to move to another location if anyone feels this isnt intermediate.

EDIT: Just re-located the eye to a more suitable place
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Re: A horse;

Postby Folvey » Mon Nov 28, 2011 4:20 pm

I really like the eye detail :3

However, I'll offer some friendly constructive crit ^_^---
The neck is a bit too skinny, and the head is too big for the neck to support, so I would suggest getting to known the muscles so they can be placed nicely :3.
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Re: A horse;

Postby Potato. » Mon Nov 28, 2011 5:40 pm

Thanks for the crit. Like I said, it was my first attempt :D
Ill attempt at making sure I get the correct anatomy next time :thumbup:
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