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The Life of a Punk

Postby OceanHorse » Sun Nov 13, 2011 2:46 pm

So its me, Aslia, writing in you. If only my mother would listen, right? I told her I didn't want you, I like punk, not pink, though I wear it, like today,I look like this:
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But can't you tell I'm different from my eye make-up? Ugh, life sucks. Anyway, me and my bestie, Sydop got to go out to a party, it was fun. We met up with our other punk friends, Victor, as you can see what he looks like below.
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and the other friend, Kylos. He looks like so:
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He is my closer friend, between him and Victor. He's known me longer then any of them. Oh, and if your wondering Sydop looks like this:
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Yes I know she's small as a child, not a teen, but thats just her. She's always been small, and that what makes her so unique. So anyway, we all went to this party and the weirdest thing happened! We met these two new guys who are new in town, and it turns out they're cooler then we thought! They have wings and can fly! They have cool names too, not like Victor, they're names are Sodo and Jyro. They look like this:
Sodo:
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and Jyro:
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Though I will warn that Jyro's eyes are odd, they have a mysterious feeling when I look at them, maybe its why I kinda like him.

All for now, maybe your not bad after all, I mean, I have to talk to someone about my life, love and all, right? So, maybe you'll be written in again, or maybe not. Well, all for now.
~Aslia.


Xela XIII has inspired me to do this, its like the 'Dear Stupid Journal' but only in the fact that Aslia is writing in it. The rest,(Plot, characters,names and everything else) is all me. Please tell me what you think!
You said you loved me,
but you always leave me.
You said your there for me,
but when I reached out you where not there.
You said that I'm your little girl,
but you now have two others.
You lied to me,
deceived me.
And now you say you love me?
Never will I fall for that again.
Our time is no more.
My love for you is forlorn.
I say this to you now,
so maybe you can understand,
that we are, no more.

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Re: The Life of a Punk

Postby Afaedia » Tue Nov 15, 2011 3:53 pm

Love it so far! Please write more soon! :D
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Re: The Life of a Punk

Postby OceanHorse » Tue Nov 15, 2011 3:55 pm

Soon ^_^
You said you loved me,
but you always leave me.
You said your there for me,
but when I reached out you where not there.
You said that I'm your little girl,
but you now have two others.
You lied to me,
deceived me.
And now you say you love me?
Never will I fall for that again.
Our time is no more.
My love for you is forlorn.
I say this to you now,
so maybe you can understand,
that we are, no more.

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Re: The Life of a Punk

Postby *Blackberry* » Wed Nov 16, 2011 12:59 am

Can one of you read my post pet daires?
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Re: The Life of a Punk

Postby OceanHorse » Sat Nov 19, 2011 9:14 am

Well, I'm back writing in you. I thought about it, and well, I really do need someone to talk to. My parents are useless, and my friends don't need to know everything. So, anyway, after the party we all went out, and Jyro and Sodo flew away, it was the wirdest thing! It wasn't even midnight yet and they said they had to go home, even though they said they could stay out all day long? Oh well, Sydop, Victor and I went to the cemetery without Kylos because he did have to get home. Stupid parents. As we got to our favourite tombstone, we sat down like we usually did to pay our respects. I'm sure you find this odd, Punks paying respect to a tombstone. Well, this tombstone is for our friend.

Ohh, thats all for now. The Rutial is starting, bye.

~Aslia
You said you loved me,
but you always leave me.
You said your there for me,
but when I reached out you where not there.
You said that I'm your little girl,
but you now have two others.
You lied to me,
deceived me.
And now you say you love me?
Never will I fall for that again.
Our time is no more.
My love for you is forlorn.
I say this to you now,
so maybe you can understand,
that we are, no more.

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Re: The Life of a Punk

Postby *Blackberry* » Mon Nov 21, 2011 1:23 pm

More....
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Re: The Life of a Punk

Postby OceanHorse » Mon Nov 21, 2011 4:38 pm

So, the Rutial has started. Yes, I'm sure your think I'm spelling the name wrong, but no, its a Rutial, not Ritual. We created the Rutial in honor of our dead friend, Konor. She was the best, I mean, though she wasn't a punk like us, she was amazing. She had this amazing coat colour, she looked like she had a green butterfly wrapped around her! I got a picture, see:
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Anyway, the Rutial happens every three months, usually the four of us do it, but tonight there where only three of us. As we held each others paws like usual, a weird glow started to form under our paws, the space between the two of them. It was like magic, but not at the same time. I wished Kylos was there to see it, he would have loved it. Anyway, as we chanted like usual, the light brightened, but when we stopped it disappeared! We wanted to talk about it, but no one knew how, so we just shook our heads and went home. As I was walking home, I felt a presence. A spiritual presence, y'know? I looked behind me, saw nothing, and turned back around. Shaking my head, I herd a rustle from some trees, then a large shadow, looming over me.

Thats all for now, sorry!

~Aslia.
You said you loved me,
but you always leave me.
You said your there for me,
but when I reached out you where not there.
You said that I'm your little girl,
but you now have two others.
You lied to me,
deceived me.
And now you say you love me?
Never will I fall for that again.
Our time is no more.
My love for you is forlorn.
I say this to you now,
so maybe you can understand,
that we are, no more.

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Re: The Life of a Punk

Postby *Blackberry* » Mon Nov 21, 2011 6:00 pm

MORE!!!
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Re: The Life of a Punk

Postby OceanHorse » Mon Nov 21, 2011 6:02 pm

Lawl, Thank you! Tomorrow More shall come to you!
You said you loved me,
but you always leave me.
You said your there for me,
but when I reached out you where not there.
You said that I'm your little girl,
but you now have two others.
You lied to me,
deceived me.
And now you say you love me?
Never will I fall for that again.
Our time is no more.
My love for you is forlorn.
I say this to you now,
so maybe you can understand,
that we are, no more.

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Re: The Life of a Punk

Postby *Blackberry* » Tue Nov 22, 2011 1:37 am

Can't wait for tomorrow! Yippee! * Jumps up an down, bounce and twirled around. *
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