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by Nonexsitent » Thu Nov 10, 2011 10:12 am
I do not own the idea for this my inspiration comes from Xela XIII with her amazing story of Lux except my people aren't dogs ~Nya <3 Please don't send me hate mail I give all the credit to Xela XIII's Dear Stupid Journal which I enjoyed greatly ~Nya <3
Dear Nyan~Nya,
I hate you and I stick with that~Nya. I won't change my mind but my ma declares I must write in you everyday for the greater good~Nya. I think she's a freak plus I was sorta popular at my school before I was sent away~Nya. I wasn't popular cause of my strange habit of saying Nya on the end of every sentence I even write it in my letters and stories~Nya. I live in a special place with the rest of kind we are freaks in the outside world glared down with cold eyes and rejected with bloodless hearts~Nya. There is ONE of my kind I know well enough to call a friend and her name is Kitre Mae and I swear she is sort of weird in a funny kind of way~Nya. Kitre Mae is a half blood and only can reach up to half of her potentional nearly all of my kind are half bloods now only one pure blood remains and who gets lumped with that~Nya? ME! I get dragged here there and every where just to get trained to be a weapon~Nya. I hate my life and I am starting to wish I was powerless but Mama Veelia says it is bad to think negatively and it makes your soul fill up with bad energy turning most of our kind to the darkness of which they never can return~Nya. I pray that Kitre Mae doesn't turn she has been thinking pretty negitively these days and told Mama Veelia to drop dead, she said it to her face~Nya. Saying that to your superior means instant elimination or you get booted out to fend for yourself till the darkness claims you or you die a slow and horrible death~Nya. Your all probaly wondering who I am~Nya. I go by the name of Luminia as my real name was tossed in the river of names when I was born~Nya.
The reason I have started my pitful story today~Nya. Is that today was when the darkness began to grow in strengh and in numbers~Nya. 'Do you think Mama Veelia is a evil hag who uses us for power?' Kitre Mae asked me as we gathered for our lunch~Nya. I blinked at her surprised 'No~Nya.' I exclaimed~Nya. Kitre Mae scoffed and grabbed the fruit parfit with a cherry jucie drink box 'I do she is a heartless beast with no blood in her veins.' Kitre said matter of factly~Nya. I winced and Kitre Mae looked at me with genuine shock then walked off to get to our table I grabbed the Autum Salad and a Orange juice box and followed her with curiousity~Nya. I couldn't believe she said that~Nya. I looked at our table and saw Kitre Mae just sitting down, I sat down next to her and picked up my fork and began to eat my salad~Nya. Kitre ate her fruit parfit in silence then put her spoon down 'You know what as soon as I'm strong enough I am going to over power Mama Veelia and hand her over to the darkness as a peace offering.' Kitre Mae said so matter of factly. I dropped my fork in pure horror and turned to her 'The darkness don't make peace offerings~Nya.' I pointed out to her. Kitre Mae rolled her eyes at me and I saw them flash red~Nya. I felt my stomach fall like lead then Mama Veelia came over and smiled at us~Nya. 'Kitre I need to speek with you in my office.' Mama Veelia said kindly but her face was pale and her eyes were dead~Nya. Kitre Mae smiled and followed Mama Veelia to her office, I had a gut feeling something wasn't right but I ignored it~Nya.
We continued as always people going off in their groups planning their survival, I drifted around on my own for once~Nya. I walked into a boy who fell to his knees, 'Oh my are you okay~Nya?' I asked him worriedly~Nya. The boy pulled himself up and faced me he smiled kindly 'I'm fine but you need to watch where your going Luminia.' He said nicely~Nya. I didn't recognise him and I guessed he was new I smiled back, 'Sorry~Nya.' I said shyly I turned away waiting for him to make fun of the way I spoke~Nya. The boy smiled, all of a sudden the alarms started blaring and everyone started to run for the exits~Nya. I looked at the boy who looked worried 'We should get out too.' He said quickly~Nya. I shook my head 'No~Nya. My friend Kitre is with Mama Veelia and only she triggers the alarm~Nya. Kitre and Mama Veelia are in trouble they need help~Nya.' I told him, the boy looked at me and thought it over~Nya. Then nodded and signalled for me to lead the way~Nya. I was surprised he even let me do that Nyan I have to admit he was quite cute~Nya. I ran with my new companian through the maze of halls till I reached Mama Veelia's room I opened the door~Nya. The boy gasped and I screamed at the sight that was laid out before me~Nya.
I'm sorry Nyan but I am still in a state of shock and can't bring myself to write anymore but I will write again soon bye~Nya.
Luminia~Nya <3
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by takane » Sat Nov 12, 2011 7:04 am
Moar. Now. Great so far, ~Nya ;)
「The Story of the Spinning Eyes」
The lonely grouped together
The children's plan
Started to spin again
"Somewhere, some day"
"It's so cool" we said to each other
The summer sky is transparent
Breathe in so we won't cry
Let's say "goodbye"
...
"Maybe we can recall someday, and meet again"
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by Nonexsitent » Wed Nov 16, 2011 7:00 am
aww your so kind ^_^ ~nya <3
Dear Nyan~Nya,
Oh my god it was terrible Nyan~Nya. Mama Veelia was sprawled across the floor a blood pool around her lifeless body~Nya. Kitre Mae stood over her drenched in her blood staring in horror at Mama Veelia~Nya. 'Kitre~Nya? Why~Nya?' I asked in shock Kitre Mae raised her eyes to me, they were red and she stared at me in horror~Nya. I stummbled backward straight into the boy, I'd forgot he was there 'I had no choice...I...' Kitre Mae stuttered to me~Nya. A man stepped out the shadows and put his hand on Kitre Mae's shoulder 'Kitre....How did it feel?' He asked evil seeping into his voice~Nya. Kitre blinked and looked at him 'I don't like it I want my hands to be washed of the guilt.' She pleaded~Nya. The man smiled and pulled out his sword in a couple of seconds Kitre was screaming and scarlett blood spilled everywhere~Nya. Without thinking I rushed forward and slipped in the blood falling to my knees staining my grey dress I had to wear~Nya. I stared in horror at Kitre whose breath was coming out quick and ragged she looked at me with her big brown eyes pleading me to save her but the thing was I hadn't learned a healing spell yet~Nya. The boy seemed more calm and hurled a fireball at the man, the man stumbled and I was yanked off my feet by the boy~Nya. He pulled me out the room and slammed the door shut, I gasped as he pulled us toward the window~Nya. I screamed as he grabbed my waist and snapped out his WINGS. 'What~Nya?' I asked confused as he leapt out the window with me in his arms~Nya. He flew over to everyone else who was to busy with themselves to realise what was happening but then some one saw the blood on my clothes and screamed, 'Why are you covered in blood?' Jenny Gold, a stuck up rich kid who is one of the snobs who aren't an orphan and still get to see her parents, asked~Nya. I blinked at her blood dripping from my hands 'Mama Veelia and Kitre Mae are dead~Nya.' I screamed my throat was tight I just wanted to curl up into a ball and die~Nya. I'm an orphan and I never see my mum and dad they are dead and Mama Veelia was like a mother to me Nyan, I mean she raised me from a baby and I grew up here but now all it was to me was one big empty orphanage with one to many rips in~Nya. Jenny cried out in shock, the boy looked white 'All I can remember was the look of fear on Kitre's face as that man pulled out his sword.' he muttered~Nya. I nodded in agreement then screamed as the orphanage burst into flames 'Oh no where are we going to go?' A woman shouted out~Nya. I blinked back tears Go on the run it is the only thing to do Luminia, Kitre agrees go take Kaleb with you he is my son go.Mama Veelias voice whispered from inside my head. I looked around wondering who Kaleb was then realised she was talking about the boy~Nya. 'LISTEN~NYA!' I shouted everyone fell silent, 'We have to go on the run from the darkness and fend for ourselves everyone has to try to make it to the R.E.B.E.L.S~Nya.' I smiled pleased with my short speech~Nya. Everyone nodded in agreement then in groups ran towards the forest~Nya.
I'm sorry Nyan me and Kaleb are next going to run away into the forest now I will tell you what happens when we bunker down for some rest bye now~Nya.
Luminia~Nya <3
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by takane » Wed Nov 16, 2011 7:07 am
「The Story of the Spinning Eyes」
The lonely grouped together
The children's plan
Started to spin again
"Somewhere, some day"
"It's so cool" we said to each other
The summer sky is transparent
Breathe in so we won't cry
Let's say "goodbye"
...
"Maybe we can recall someday, and meet again"
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by Nonexsitent » Wed Nov 16, 2011 8:05 am
Ok heres more~Nya <3
Dear Nyan~Nya,
When me and Kaleb ran to the woods several screams rang out behind us I looked behind and saw the man swing his sword around and many more people falling I saw Jenny cry out and run away~Nya. I turned back around as Jenny's scream sliced through the air I was only greatful that as many people as possible had escaped this fate~Nya. Kaleb was breathing heavy and I saw he had tears streaming down his face, that was understandable after all his mother had just died Nyan I was worried the man was going to chase us but when I looked behind he only watched us flee~Nya. I sped up and ran full pelt into a tree 'Oww~Nya.' I exclaimed and rubbed my forehead~Nya. Kaleb had stopped and was giggling, I smiled at him happy to have cheered him up in the weirdest of ways~Nya. 'Lets go~Nya.' I sighed and the two of us continued our way through the trees, several times Kaleb had shouted watch out for the tree but I only laughed at him~Nya. We reached a small clearing in the woods and I collapsed to my knees~Nya. 'Um...Luminia.' The boy said sheepishly~Nya. I snapped my head to look at him peering out of my black hair, I brushed it back 'Look I am sorry about your mum Kaleb but you need to put her in the past, like I have done with Kitre~Nya.' I explained swiftly, Kaleb's eyes opened wide and he opened and closed his mouth like a goldfish~Nya. 'How did you know?' He asked me amazed, I stared at him confused then smiled, Kaleb was jugding me more carefully now~Nya. 'Your mum told me Kaleb~Nya.' I told him slowly letting him prosses this~Nya. I looked around then up the trees and gasped in amazment, Kaleb shot his gaze upwards as well and let out a slow whistle 'My old tree house~Nya.' I said slowly, Kaleb whistled again and I glared at him~Nya. I clambered over to the tree and found the ladder hid under the moss that had grown on the bark of the tree~Nya. I smiled at Kaleb who quickly scrambled over to join me 'We have shelter for the night.' He said, saying what I was thinking, I nodded and began to climb even though once I reached the top if I fell it would mean instant death unless I used magic to cusion my fall~Nya. I heard Kaleb climbing behind me, I felt the platform ridge and hauled myself up Kaleb followed gracefully behind with a smile on his face~Nya. The sky was begining to darken now and I laid down on the old sleeping bag I had bought up here ten years ago, Kaleb lead on Kitre Mae's old one, it still hurt to think about Kitre Mae and Mama Veelia even though I put them behind me~Nya.
Kaleb is sleeping now I can hear his gentle snores it is reasurring knowing I am not alone and I am glad Kaleb is sticking by my side I half expect him to be gone by morning and I am on my own~Nya. I think I might have to get some shut eye myself after all I have got a busy busy day tomorrow, the first thing on my list is to find food because by morning we are going to be famished~Nya. Night Nyan sleep tight I won't let the termites bite~Nya.
Luminia~Nya <3
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by takane » Wed Nov 16, 2011 8:50 am
Mrs. Logan Lerman<3 wrote:(WHY DO YOU SAY NIA AFTER EVERYTHING?!?
She said at the beginning, that she adds 'nya' to the end of every sentence.
「The Story of the Spinning Eyes」
The lonely grouped together
The children's plan
Started to spin again
"Somewhere, some day"
"It's so cool" we said to each other
The summer sky is transparent
Breathe in so we won't cry
Let's say "goodbye"
...
"Maybe we can recall someday, and meet again"
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