~The Diary Of A Winged One~

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~The Diary Of A Winged One~

Postby takane » Tue Nov 15, 2011 11:24 am

I wanted to start writing a diary after reading Xela XIII's diary, 'Dear Stupid Journal'. I may give up on this half-way through as I'm very busy. So, here is the first entry!


Dear Diary,

My shoulder blades are aching so much lately. It's driving me insane. My best friend, Flossy, and my crush, Eric, were also complaining of shoulder ache. I understand what they feel. I was walking with Flossy after school when we started talking about it.
'Hey, Flossy. What do you think the shoulder ache is?' I said, as if it wasn't that important.
Flossy stopped.
'We could be growing wings!' She joked.
My heart had started beating fast.
'What if we are?' I suddenly panicked.
Flossy looked at me.
'I was joking, okay?'
I pretended to look okay, after almost having a heart-attack. 'Yea, I know.'
The walk home was silent, both of us lost in our thoughts. She waved good-bye as I opened the door to my house and walked in. I went straight to my room and locked the door. I fell on my bed and started writing. Now, I think I'm going to go to bed, as my shoulders ache. Hopefully they'll get better soon.

Eve~
Last edited by takane on Wed Nov 16, 2011 9:20 am, edited 1 time in total.
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「The Story of the Spinning Eyes」
The lonely grouped together
The children's plan
Started to spin again
"Somewhere, some day"
"It's so cool" we said to each other
The summer sky is transparent
Breathe in so we won't cry
Let's say "goodbye"
...
"Maybe we can recall someday, and meet again"

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Re: ~The Diary Of A Winged One~

Postby takane » Tue Nov 15, 2011 11:34 am

Any comments/critique?
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「The Story of the Spinning Eyes」
The lonely grouped together
The children's plan
Started to spin again
"Somewhere, some day"
"It's so cool" we said to each other
The summer sky is transparent
Breathe in so we won't cry
Let's say "goodbye"
...
"Maybe we can recall someday, and meet again"

I am looking for any good rp's [zombie, KagePro, etc.] so message me if you know of any!

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Re: ~The Diary Of A Winged One~

Postby Spence » Tue Nov 15, 2011 11:44 am

I think this'll be interesting C:

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Re: ~The Diary Of A Winged One~

Postby xxazul63xx » Tue Nov 15, 2011 11:48 am

hmmmmmm......... Whats gonna happen?
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Re: ~The Diary Of A Winged One~

Postby OceanHorse » Tue Nov 15, 2011 2:37 pm

I like this one too! XD I can't wait to read more! Thats *Counts on fingers* three different diaries and my own I'm stalking :D
You said you loved me,
but you always leave me.
You said your there for me,
but when I reached out you where not there.
You said that I'm your little girl,
but you now have two others.
You lied to me,
deceived me.
And now you say you love me?
Never will I fall for that again.
Our time is no more.
My love for you is forlorn.
I say this to you now,
so maybe you can understand,
that we are, no more.

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Re: ~The Diary Of A Winged One~

Postby Lions » Tue Nov 15, 2011 5:35 pm

This is amazing! Keep sharing your talents and it will take you far!
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Re: ~The Diary Of A Winged One~

Postby takane » Wed Nov 16, 2011 4:19 am

Thank you all for your kind comments~

Dear Diary,

When I got up, the pain was gone! I started to put my school shirt on when I realised. Two small, fluffy black wings were sprouting out my back. I put my hand over my mouth to cover my scream. I turned to my bed. It was covered with small feathers. I grabbed. a pair of scissors then cut out two holes in the back of my shirt. I put it on. I grabbed my jumper, but I didn't put holes in that. I quickly brushed my teeth, then ran downstairs, my short black hair fluttering out behind me. I quickly ate some toast then I grabbed my bag and ran out the door. I ran to where Flossy and I always meet. She was leaning against a brick wall, lounging lazily in the morning sun. I walked up to her.
'Has the pain stopped in your shoulders?'
Flossy opened her large green eyes. A grin was on her face. She turned around, and there was a pair of small fluffy pink wings under her candyfloss hair.
I gasped.
'You cut through your jumper? Everyone will see them!'
Flossy just shrugged.
I sighed.
'Lets just go to school.'
We walked into the classroom, late as usual. I slipped into the desk next to Eric. I tried to cover my blush.'Hey, have you grown wings?'
Eric turned to me, grey eyes half-closed under his white hair. 'Yes I have. A pair of small white ones.'
I nodded. 'Thanks.' I then stood up and sat next to Flossy. She gave me a look to say 'Does he have them?' I just nodded, thinking about what this meant. I didn't pay attention to any of my lessons. Oh well. After thinking about it, it seems that we have wings according to our hair colours... That's all I can write, for now.

Eve~
Last edited by takane on Sat May 19, 2012 2:40 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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「The Story of the Spinning Eyes」
The lonely grouped together
The children's plan
Started to spin again
"Somewhere, some day"
"It's so cool" we said to each other
The summer sky is transparent
Breathe in so we won't cry
Let's say "goodbye"
...
"Maybe we can recall someday, and meet again"

I am looking for any good rp's [zombie, KagePro, etc.] so message me if you know of any!

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Re: ~The Diary Of A Winged One~

Postby takane » Wed Nov 16, 2011 5:14 am

Bump


Dear Diary

I woke up and noticed that my wings were bigger. They are now the length of my arm. I tried flicking them. The black feathers twitched, glinting in the lamp-light. I put my shirt and jumper on. My wings stuck out like a sore thumb. I tried to lay them flat on my back. I was surprised when they seemed to disappear. I was about to walk out the door when my phone buzzed. I looked at the message. It was from Flossy.
'Meeting place has changed. Meet me on the roof of my house.' I read. I sighed when I got what she meant. I walked outside and took my jumper off. I flapped my black wings. I lifted slightly off the ground. I gasped. I flapped harder. I was lifted up off of the ground again, but this time, I soared above the houses. I saw Flossy's house in the distance. I dropped down onto a roof and started walking across to Flossy's. I finally reached Flossy's house, and nearly fainted when I saw Eric on the roof. I blushed. My wings fluttered. Eric gave a small smile. 'So you've managed to control your wings then.'
I just nodded. Flossy ran up to me and hugged me. I laughed. Her large pink wings were spread out wide.
'It was Eric who called us all together.' She said, releasing me from the death grip. I looked at Eric. With his large white wings, he looked so awesome.
I'll write more later.

Eve~
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「The Story of the Spinning Eyes」
The lonely grouped together
The children's plan
Started to spin again
"Somewhere, some day"
"It's so cool" we said to each other
The summer sky is transparent
Breathe in so we won't cry
Let's say "goodbye"
...
"Maybe we can recall someday, and meet again"

I am looking for any good rp's [zombie, KagePro, etc.] so message me if you know of any!

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Re: ~The Diary Of A Winged One~

Postby G๏l๔єภєאє » Wed Nov 16, 2011 7:21 am

this'll be great! i can feel it! i'l check back, so technically i'm stalking....(bear with me *counts on fingers)....4 and I'm thinking of putting up my own!!!
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Re: ~The Diary Of A Winged One~

Postby xxazul63xx » Wed Nov 16, 2011 7:26 am

i'm reading like six journals and I'm begining to like this one alot
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